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Hua Mulan [NEW AUTHOR]
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"We must be swift as the coursing river,

with all the force of a great typhoon,

with all the strentgh of a raging fire,

mysterious as the dark side of a moon"

 

In some ways, training with the Northern Troops was no different to before. It was the same schedule - breakfast before dawn, dinner after dusk. But with the tang of blood that was hardly masked by the smell of pine trees, reality seemed to be seeping into all the soldiers.

The unmarked graves and bodies buried under thick layers of snow reminded them how real this war was. Compared to the previous camp, this was silent. People spoke in hushed whispers and hurried around the buildings with their heads down. Even the horses made no sound.

And at night, all Mulan could hear was the wind whistling as it twisted around the buildings and through the forests and mountains.

Day by day, the snow started to melt, and blades of grass made small green patches across the flat land. The nights became warmer and the days longer. The scent of spring was fresh and welcoming. Time had flown by and Mulan hadn't seen home for an entire year. 

How is father now? 

A little voice inside her head told her that she would probably never know.

 

The number of soldiers had lessened by a third. Throughout the winter, there had been multiple attacks from the barbaric tribes. Mulan had spent those evenings sitting with the other soldiers, painting the names of those who had died on peaces of wood that hung across the buildings. General Han had lead 5000 soldiers to fight against the tribes and only a few hundred had returned. The soldiers had seen little of him or his two commanders. Their were even rumours flying around that they had died during the invasion. However, Mulan didn't agree. If they had died, new commanders would have taken their places.

As the weather became warmer, the soldiers spent more and more time outside. They practised their drills in the afternoon, until it was perfect.

They were halfway through one of the practises when it happened.

 

There was panic when the soldiers heard the cry.

She didn't hear it at first, but Luhan did. She gasped as he grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards the stables.

Confused, she was dragged across the dirt into the stables.

She barely had enough time to catch her breath, before Luhan through a saddle at her.

"Hurry up!" he exclaimed, fixing a saddle onto his own horse.

Mulan had never seen a panicked Luhan before; usually he was the epitome of calmness. 

Aware that something was very wrong, she too hurried after Luhan as they led the horses out of the sta

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Glimmer01 #1
Also, what do you wanna see happen next?! ^^
Glimmer01 #2
Hey guys, I'm this fic's new coauthor! The original author has done a great job and I can only hope to match up to it! So I'm asking for you guys to comment your opinions on how you want the story to continue here, so I get fresh ideas!
Do you guys want a complete revamp, or to add on to the original chapters, or to leave the original untouched and continue
niangniang
#3
i love how we're both writing about ancient china ouo i was pretty impressed by the foreword alone and im really looking forward to reading this! i see potential~
btw im sure mulan will still look pretty even if shes frowning and happens to have a tan xD
heclgehog
#4
Chapter 1: Yo, I'm writing a Mulan fic with Kris as the lead so I searched Mulan on AFF to see if there were any fics of the story, and literally the only one to pop is yours. So I just wanted to leave you a comment to let you know that even though I won't be posting my story for at least a month, I'm not trying to steal your idea. I even wanted to name it Hua Mulan that way it wasn't just one word, but you already did that too. I feel so awkward now lol. If you feel uncomfortable with my story being so similar to yours, I can change the lead from Kris to Tao and I planned to deviate from both the original ballad and the disney version quite a bit anyway, so I don't think mine would be too much like yours. I just don't want you to feel like you were plagiarized or anything~
Alice101 #5
Chapter 7: I think the 3rd man is Kris and the second man is Tao....
adorable_colours #6
Chapter 6: Your story is just so good it makes me searching for the next buttons and feel like dying when I didn't find one :")) jia you author!!! Amazing story you have here :*
basteng
#7
feeling lucky to encounter with your story. i always adore mulan, but only know the disney version of it, looking forward on how the storyline will go c:
fighting
JDHismine #8
Chapter 3: I adore the plot! But why luhan name is xi luhan? .-. But it's not important anyway.. Keep up the great update! ^^
RaulGull #9
Chapter 2: Pretty good read so far, keep it up!!