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Hua Mulan [NEW AUTHOR]
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In the East Market she buys a spirited horse,

In the West Market she buys a saddle,

In the South Market she buys a bridle,

In the North Market she buys a long whip

"Hungry?"

Mulan looked up, startled, to see Luhan waiting for her answer. 

"Uh, no," she replied, though she hadn't eaten since breakfast. She looked around herself at the sky. The sun had almost set.

Luhan shrugged.

"Suit yourself."

He reached into the cloth bag he was carrying and pulled out a small bundle. Inside was a rather impressive assortment of dried fruits and nuts. He took a shiny, red berry and chewed it slowly, making sure to emphasize the sweetness of the fruit by smiling widely and his red-stained lips when he was finished.

Mulan felt her stomach grumbling.

Luhan looked up and laughed at the sound, before holding the bag out towards her.

Gratefully, the girl accepted a handful of the contents and slowly chewed on them. 

"Why don't you have anything to eat?" he asked, curious. "After all, you are carrying such a large bag? What have you got inside of it?"

My father's armour and helmet that I stole when he was asleep.

"Clothes."

Luhan raised his eyebrows at her.

"Are you sure? What would a young maiden be doing in the countryside, alone, carrying a large bag and being accompanied by a horse?" he asked, narrowing his eyes in suspicion.

"I uh - " Mulan tried to say.

"Why did you really buy the saddle and the other equipment?"

"For - "

"And why would you be carrying such bulky items? Unless you knew that you'd have a place to put it."

He's starting to figure this out.

"And where would you find a whi

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Glimmer01 #1
Also, what do you wanna see happen next?! ^^
Glimmer01 #2
Hey guys, I'm this fic's new coauthor! The original author has done a great job and I can only hope to match up to it! So I'm asking for you guys to comment your opinions on how you want the story to continue here, so I get fresh ideas!
Do you guys want a complete revamp, or to add on to the original chapters, or to leave the original untouched and continue
niangniang
#3
i love how we're both writing about ancient china ouo i was pretty impressed by the foreword alone and im really looking forward to reading this! i see potential~
btw im sure mulan will still look pretty even if shes frowning and happens to have a tan xD
heclgehog
#4
Chapter 1: Yo, I'm writing a Mulan fic with Kris as the lead so I searched Mulan on AFF to see if there were any fics of the story, and literally the only one to pop is yours. So I just wanted to leave you a comment to let you know that even though I won't be posting my story for at least a month, I'm not trying to steal your idea. I even wanted to name it Hua Mulan that way it wasn't just one word, but you already did that too. I feel so awkward now lol. If you feel uncomfortable with my story being so similar to yours, I can change the lead from Kris to Tao and I planned to deviate from both the original ballad and the disney version quite a bit anyway, so I don't think mine would be too much like yours. I just don't want you to feel like you were plagiarized or anything~
Alice101 #5
Chapter 7: I think the 3rd man is Kris and the second man is Tao....
adorable_colours #6
Chapter 6: Your story is just so good it makes me searching for the next buttons and feel like dying when I didn't find one :")) jia you author!!! Amazing story you have here :*
basteng
#7
feeling lucky to encounter with your story. i always adore mulan, but only know the disney version of it, looking forward on how the storyline will go c:
fighting
JDHismine #8
Chapter 3: I adore the plot! But why luhan name is xi luhan? .-. But it's not important anyway.. Keep up the great update! ^^
RaulGull #9
Chapter 2: Pretty good read so far, keep it up!!