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Hua Mulan [NEW AUTHOR]
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Tsiek tsiek and again tsiek tsiek,

Mulan weaves, facing the door.

You don’t hear the shuttle’s sound,

You only hear Daughter’s sighs.

They ask Daughter who’s in her heart,

They ask Daughter who’s on her mind.

“No one is on Daughter’s heart,

No one is on Daughter’s mind"

A soft breeze sighs, sweeping through the crowded village. The branches of the cherry blossom trees come to life, swaying with the wind. A shower of pale buds land on Mulan's ebony hair, their dusky rose tinted petals delicate and beautiful, yet escaping her notice. 

After all, beauty is futile in times like these. 

She hurries briskly out of the courtyard, feet scurrying onto the dirt path. 

Mulan walked past the fields, and a few of the peasants raised their heads in greeting. She nodded back at them in response. She paused for a moment, watching the children running past her, their laughter tinkling in the breeze. So innocent, so carefree, so unaware of the horrors happening around them. Year after year, the fields looked less green, the earth became drier and the sun hotter. Families slaved away under the burning ball of fire, sweat pouring down their bodies, watering the parched earth. But they all knew that they were fortunate.

At least they were still alive.

It was noon when Mulan arrived at the market. Her hand was clutched tightly onto the string of copper coins. Venders called out to her, offering her beads and small trinkets, but she could not afford such useless luxuries. Instead, she declined them, her eyes seeking out a particular booth.

After fighting her way through the crowd, she found it, tucked away at the edge of the market-square. It was a simple, spartan : a piece of cloth spread out on the ground with another sheet hanging from three bamboo poles, to hide covert wares away from prying eyes.

She cautiously approached the seemingly empty booth. Bowls of dark-coloured liquid set on the ground produced an acidic, bitter smell. She wrinkled her nose in disgust.

Suddenly, the sheet swept back to reveal an old woman. Her grey hair was pulled back, tied into a small bun by a strip of red cloth, and countless wrinkles lined her leathery skin.

She gave Mulan a toothless smile.

"Come closer, child, no need to be afraid of me," 

Mulan shuffles forward tentatively.

"Now, what can I do for a young girl like you?"

Mulan unfurled her hand. Untying one of the coins, she pressed it into the old woman's bony hand.

"My father is very ill. Is there perhaps a tonic or remedy that can help him heal?"

The woman did not reply.

Mulan pressed a second coin onto the woman's palm.

"Do you know of a medicine that might be useful?"

The woman accepted a third coin before nodding and disappearing behind the sheet.

Mulan waited, impatiently, for the woman to reappear. 

She heard water boiling and grimaced at the pungent odour coming from it. 

Finally, the woman came out, holding a small glass vial.

Mulan smiled at the woman gratefully, before reaching to take the dark green liquid.

Abruptly, the woman grabbed Mulan's wrist and shook her head.

"Pay."

Mulan sighed and handed the woman the rest of the copper.

In response, the woman released her tight grip and allowed Mulan to take the vial.

Mulan clutched onto the bottle tightly and hurried off b

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Glimmer01 #1
Also, what do you wanna see happen next?! ^^
Glimmer01 #2
Hey guys, I'm this fic's new coauthor! The original author has done a great job and I can only hope to match up to it! So I'm asking for you guys to comment your opinions on how you want the story to continue here, so I get fresh ideas!
Do you guys want a complete revamp, or to add on to the original chapters, or to leave the original untouched and continue
niangniang
#3
i love how we're both writing about ancient china ouo i was pretty impressed by the foreword alone and im really looking forward to reading this! i see potential~
btw im sure mulan will still look pretty even if shes frowning and happens to have a tan xD
heclgehog
#4
Chapter 1: Yo, I'm writing a Mulan fic with Kris as the lead so I searched Mulan on AFF to see if there were any fics of the story, and literally the only one to pop is yours. So I just wanted to leave you a comment to let you know that even though I won't be posting my story for at least a month, I'm not trying to steal your idea. I even wanted to name it Hua Mulan that way it wasn't just one word, but you already did that too. I feel so awkward now lol. If you feel uncomfortable with my story being so similar to yours, I can change the lead from Kris to Tao and I planned to deviate from both the original ballad and the disney version quite a bit anyway, so I don't think mine would be too much like yours. I just don't want you to feel like you were plagiarized or anything~
Alice101 #5
Chapter 7: I think the 3rd man is Kris and the second man is Tao....
adorable_colours #6
Chapter 6: Your story is just so good it makes me searching for the next buttons and feel like dying when I didn't find one :")) jia you author!!! Amazing story you have here :*
basteng
#7
feeling lucky to encounter with your story. i always adore mulan, but only know the disney version of it, looking forward on how the storyline will go c:
fighting
JDHismine #8
Chapter 3: I adore the plot! But why luhan name is xi luhan? .-. But it's not important anyway.. Keep up the great update! ^^
RaulGull #9
Chapter 2: Pretty good read so far, keep it up!!