Chapter Two

Immobile In a Moving World [Unfinished]

I can't open my eyes. All I can see is black; but what are colours flashing before me?  My sister often tells me about the sights she see's on the way to work … but I can't remember what a rainbow looks like; is this a rainbow - that leads to a pot of gold; perhaps my freedom?

 

There's a flash, almost like a lightening flash that flashes in a split second and then I'm lying in black, unable to move.

 

"Check him! Is he breathing?"

 

Is this is what hell is like? It's not hot, it's ice-cold; a cold that seeps through my bones. I can't shiver and I can't move a single muscle - everything around me is motionless yet I can hear the sounds of people and life all around. Noise and panic sounds outside the walls I am caged inside.

 

"Who's called the ambulance?"

 

No, the ambulance doesn't need to come. I'm fine, lying here. It's quite peaceful, except for the noise. There's nothing but black all around me, surrounding me. But suddenly it's not so comforting and it doesn't give me warmth - I try to struggle and at once pain shoots through my body, stabbing me like a shark knife, ready for the kill.

 

"Oh God, he's lying in blood!"

 

I hear a woman shriek and then other women are shrieking. They are hysterical -  and at once I remember that blood seeps from your bod; and I remember why I am bleeding - I jumped from the car, trying to get out; trying to escape.

 

Pain. Now there's pain - I welcome it, it is like a breather, a relief. It takes the pain away …

 

And with a jolt, I'm lying here. There's silence in the room, save for a few beeping monitors. But I'm used to tuning them out - it just comes naturally; just like doing everything else does.

 

Except moving, or seeing. 

 

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Another even shorter chapter >.< I need to do this though before I can get into the story a bit more ... I'll update in a couple of days, sorry for not updating for about a month Q__Q

Forgive me? I promise the next update will be longer, but I feel like I have to get this out to you to say sorry ... I guess? Sorry it's crap, I kinda rewrote this about a billion times and got fed up of rewriting it, I guess >.< 

Love you all, my 46 wonderful people<3 

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kumiko2323 #1
Chapter 6: I wish you would come back to this, it is really good and you just left it. T.T Come back Please!!!!!!!! I want to know what happend next in the story.
ohmysuperjunior #2
Chapter 6: oh my gosh please don't abandon this fanfic. i really love where the plot is going! this is amazingly written. please updaattee c:
yooya93 #3
Wooooooooooooow that was AMAZING !!!! U are one of my best AUTHORS !!! I've read all your stories.. and GOD THEY WERE A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! i bet u always get A++ in writing don't u ??? I mean,, WOOOOOOOW !!! <<< wish u could update this and - moment of a broken life- soon !!! Cuz these two are my favorite !!!! Thx and keep on WRITING !!!! ;)
mintflavorturtle
#4
Aw, these past two chapters were good!! I wonder what Sungmin's trying to do... And why Kyu jumped out of that car in the first place... It seems like Kyu had a rough life before, huh? Always huddled in a little ball before? Hm...<br />
Personally, I prefer longer chapter. Either's good though. Whatever fits the chapter though, yeah?<br />
I'd like to comment more but it's really late atm and my contacts are drying out. But great chapter, and I hope to see a new update out soon! ^^
WhiteAsian
#5
Aigo...... This is rly good.<br />
Kyuhyun must be so, so lonely. I hope he can wake up!<br />
Lol eunhae XD poor sungmin, lol<br />
i prefer longer chapters.<br />
Btw about what you said a few chapters ago about ppl telling u u were ugly, dont listen to them! The opinions of people who talk trash about others arent worth listening to! ur debak!<br />
Update soon:3
alleksandra #6
Honestly, It is so difficult to choose one option! Couldn't it be... longer updates more frequently? :D Just kidding. for me, longer updates are better, so take your time and deliver us new chapters as lond as possible! :) And this chapter was really great, Sungmin doesn't need any help at all! He needs Kyu! And he has to help him live better from now on! ^_^
Ami_SuJuElf
#7
update soon~~<br />
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which mean I prefer short update but it MUST BE frequent!
onewhyunseungcrazed #8
Ahahah Sungmin's sudden outburst XD I like the story so far!
WhiteAsian
#9
aish i would hug jungsu too >< very caring^^<br />
but i honestly feel so bad for kyuhyun... it must be horrific ><<br />
please, update soon? as ur on a roll... :P<br />
I DID THE SaME THING! and then i was going on and on about him and everyone was like SHUT UP which was sad but not entirely a surprise >.><br />
update soon^^