Immobile In a Moving World [Unfinished]

Description

I can only think. I can't speak, but I can hear you. When you talk to me and the tears fall, I can't see you crying, and I can't comfort you.

Kyuhyun can't remember what it was like having a life, having freedom to do what you want, go where you wish.

He's immobile in a world thats constantly on the go. He's silent in a world that, more than ever, is constantly talking.

So when Sungmin stumbles into the wrong hospital room, the two make a bond that no-one thought possible.

I can hear you, Sungmin. But I can't tell you I love you. 

"I'll wait for you forever, Kyuhyun," 

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I don't know where this came from!! Just a random idea popped into my head! XD Please comment and subscribe!

Foreword

Trapped, caged ... whatever you call it, it's still the same.

I still can't move, trapped in this unending reality.

I don't know how long it'll take for me to wake up. I've been in here for a year now ... they say the longer you lay there, the less likely you'll wake up.

I can't move, can't speak. 

He doesn't know me, but I know everything about him. He's told me about his life, and he doesn't know how much I love him.

Does he realize it at all?

Only Sungmin-ah can't hear me, he can't hear my thoughts. He doesn't know how much I long to take his hand, kiss his lips ... goddamnit, I can't open my eyes. I don't even know what he looks like, but he's described himself to me plenty of times.

I just want to tell him I love him. 

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kumiko2323 #1
Chapter 6: I wish you would come back to this, it is really good and you just left it. T.T Come back Please!!!!!!!! I want to know what happend next in the story.
ohmysuperjunior #2
Chapter 6: oh my gosh please don't abandon this fanfic. i really love where the plot is going! this is amazingly written. please updaattee c:
yooya93 #3
Wooooooooooooow that was AMAZING !!!! U are one of my best AUTHORS !!! I've read all your stories.. and GOD THEY WERE A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! i bet u always get A++ in writing don't u ??? I mean,, WOOOOOOOW !!! <<< wish u could update this and - moment of a broken life- soon !!! Cuz these two are my favorite !!!! Thx and keep on WRITING !!!! ;)
mintflavorturtle
#4
Aw, these past two chapters were good!! I wonder what Sungmin's trying to do... And why Kyu jumped out of that car in the first place... It seems like Kyu had a rough life before, huh? Always huddled in a little ball before? Hm...<br />
Personally, I prefer longer chapter. Either's good though. Whatever fits the chapter though, yeah?<br />
I'd like to comment more but it's really late atm and my contacts are drying out. But great chapter, and I hope to see a new update out soon! ^^
WhiteAsian
#5
Aigo...... This is rly good.<br />
Kyuhyun must be so, so lonely. I hope he can wake up!<br />
Lol eunhae XD poor sungmin, lol<br />
i prefer longer chapters.<br />
Btw about what you said a few chapters ago about ppl telling u u were ugly, dont listen to them! The opinions of people who talk trash about others arent worth listening to! ur debak!<br />
Update soon:3
alleksandra #6
Honestly, It is so difficult to choose one option! Couldn't it be... longer updates more frequently? :D Just kidding. for me, longer updates are better, so take your time and deliver us new chapters as lond as possible! :) And this chapter was really great, Sungmin doesn't need any help at all! He needs Kyu! And he has to help him live better from now on! ^_^
Ami_SuJuElf
#7
update soon~~<br />
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which mean I prefer short update but it MUST BE frequent!
onewhyunseungcrazed #8
Ahahah Sungmin's sudden outburst XD I like the story so far!
WhiteAsian
#9
aish i would hug jungsu too >< very caring^^<br />
but i honestly feel so bad for kyuhyun... it must be horrific ><<br />
please, update soon? as ur on a roll... :P<br />
I DID THE SaME THING! and then i was going on and on about him and everyone was like SHUT UP which was sad but not entirely a surprise >.><br />
update soon^^