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Immobile In a Moving World [Unfinished]

... There's a light. It's just a pinprick, but a light it is none the less. It's a funny colour, not the colour you'd expect to see if you were lying under the ground. It's as if there's no sun shining on the world anymore. The light is blue. It's a faint, pale blue. It almost looks like a sea crashing over the hole. 

I'm lying underground, studying the light and trying to work out where I am. The last thing I remember is darkness, never ending darkness. Silent darkness. The light is moving now, like it's trying to catch my attention. 

Slowly I send signals for my arms to move, to catch the light and bring it into my world. You see, there is no light in my world.

I can't make my arms move. They lie there, motionless. I can't move my head and look at my hands. Why would I want to do that anyway? But my hands won't move, I can't shout for help for someone to give me a hand .. if they could walk around in my world.

If they could see in the blackness. I can't even open my eyes, to check that it's blackness around. For all I know, I could be lying in a rainbow room, but I can't open my eyes to check.

I can hear, though. I can hear the nurses walking around; I can hear music sometimes. I can hear my elder sister, Ahra, talking to me. She doesn't talk to me like I'm dead, like all the others. She talks to me like I can hear. Well, I can.

She isn't here now, though. She can only come a couple times a week; she's busy working to get the money to pay for me. 

I don't know why she bothers. I'm a vegetable.

That's what a few of the nurses say. Or they same I'm useless. Or a waste of space.

The only one who doesn't, is Jungsu. He's nice to me.

I wish I could get up and dance. Or get up and cook. Jeez, I can't cook. I just want to get up and do anything.

There's the light again. It's moving about now, blurry but it's getting bigger. I can see it clearly; but I don't have my eyes open, how am I seeing?

This world ... place that I'm in make no sense. I've been in here long enough and I've lost track of time. I'm losing my memory.

I'm out of time. 

I'm running out of time and the longer it takes for me to recover, the less chance I have of survival. 

I'm running out of time.

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Hey guys! ^_^ I've been rewriting this chapter about 5 times and can't get this right so I give up! Yay for first chapter? Thank you all 31 subbies and those who commented~

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kumiko2323 #1
Chapter 6: I wish you would come back to this, it is really good and you just left it. T.T Come back Please!!!!!!!! I want to know what happend next in the story.
ohmysuperjunior #2
Chapter 6: oh my gosh please don't abandon this fanfic. i really love where the plot is going! this is amazingly written. please updaattee c:
yooya93 #3
Wooooooooooooow that was AMAZING !!!! U are one of my best AUTHORS !!! I've read all your stories.. and GOD THEY WERE A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !!!! i bet u always get A++ in writing don't u ??? I mean,, WOOOOOOOW !!! <<< wish u could update this and - moment of a broken life- soon !!! Cuz these two are my favorite !!!! Thx and keep on WRITING !!!! ;)
mintflavorturtle
#4
Aw, these past two chapters were good!! I wonder what Sungmin's trying to do... And why Kyu jumped out of that car in the first place... It seems like Kyu had a rough life before, huh? Always huddled in a little ball before? Hm...<br />
Personally, I prefer longer chapter. Either's good though. Whatever fits the chapter though, yeah?<br />
I'd like to comment more but it's really late atm and my contacts are drying out. But great chapter, and I hope to see a new update out soon! ^^
WhiteAsian
#5
Aigo...... This is rly good.<br />
Kyuhyun must be so, so lonely. I hope he can wake up!<br />
Lol eunhae XD poor sungmin, lol<br />
i prefer longer chapters.<br />
Btw about what you said a few chapters ago about ppl telling u u were ugly, dont listen to them! The opinions of people who talk trash about others arent worth listening to! ur debak!<br />
Update soon:3
alleksandra #6
Honestly, It is so difficult to choose one option! Couldn't it be... longer updates more frequently? :D Just kidding. for me, longer updates are better, so take your time and deliver us new chapters as lond as possible! :) And this chapter was really great, Sungmin doesn't need any help at all! He needs Kyu! And he has to help him live better from now on! ^_^
Ami_SuJuElf
#7
update soon~~<br />
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which mean I prefer short update but it MUST BE frequent!
onewhyunseungcrazed #8
Ahahah Sungmin's sudden outburst XD I like the story so far!
WhiteAsian
#9
aish i would hug jungsu too >< very caring^^<br />
but i honestly feel so bad for kyuhyun... it must be horrific ><<br />
please, update soon? as ur on a roll... :P<br />
I DID THE SaME THING! and then i was going on and on about him and everyone was like SHUT UP which was sad but not entirely a surprise >.><br />
update soon^^