Title: Warm christmas Your Giftee: pekyuliarnuisance / ramendates Rating: none Author/Artist’s note: Merry christmas pekyuliarnuisance/ramendates! :D I had fun working on it~ I hope you'll like it!
Chapter 7: This story was really sweet. I loved to see how their relationship slowly grow and became something as amazing as this! EunHae are truly made for each other ^______^
Good job!
Chapter 19: I really liked this one! The plot was really interesting and I like how even after they think of each other, they kept delaying xD I was confused about 'derez' until the explanation came later (I think the explanation should've been sooner because I thought it was a typo). The AI aspect was really interesting and Donghae laughing over giving Q pimples is funny xD I feel you on Hyukjae becoming a model. I like that Donghae messaged Hyukjae and then they met!
Chapter 16: That was cute! I love artist aus and Hyukjae thinking he was being secretive when Donghae knew the whole time was funny xD and omg Sora. I suspected it when the only description was bottle but, omg.
Chapter 12: Ethyyyyyyyyy this is so good and I didn't want it to end XD Griffins! Class by hair! I love it when you do fantasy. I loved the different griffin types and their names, and the characterisations of everyone. Heechul being an arse but not useless, and protective of Donghae, is love. I liked the theme of Hyukjae and Donghae both not really living for themselves, but in their own ways. I liked the slow reveals, switches of time and the drama of the box being empty! Sooman, you . 'Wage one life against a kingdom' youuuuuu biiiiiiiiiitch. Obviously, I'm glad it didn't seem to come to that. I want more XD I liked Kangin being brash then beaten easily by Heechul, Sungmin being peacemaker between everyone, Leeteuk just wanting to do his job and the mutual pining between Donghae and Hyukjae. I loved this so much!
Chapter 3: ~ loving this because it has my ot3 - good job kyuhyun, for figuring out the three way bond :3 and of course, it's a fantasy action fic, and i'm always hankering for an eunhae story with them vampires, warlocks, werewolves, faerie and otherworldly creatures :3
Chapter 2: ~ it took me a couple of reads before i (thought) i could fully understand the fic - is donghae "pinocchio" for being hyukjae's creation, then the "honesty" twist of the story is that donghae knows when hyukjae is lying because he is the reflection/representation of hyukjae's soul? i dunno, conk me in the head if i understood this wrong :)) but this is a really beautiful piece, a story and scenes just magically popping out with few very well chosen words - i'll always wish i can write this way, too :3 one thing beautiful about the story is the thought that one's conscience/soul can become alive and be this tangible other that is both the same and separate from you, and that to take care of him is to take care of you and vice versa :3 aside from the fact that he can call your bluff to your face :))
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