Fifty Four

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It’s been almost six months and I have been trying so damn hard. I have been dating a lot of women but nothing really works. Nothing interest me, they just annoy the hell out of me. They come to me because they have heard the news. You see, we won the university baseball league and I have been scouted for a team. A really big one. They wanted me to train for them and play in the nationals. This has been the best news that I got after you know.

 

Hanging out with Minho isn’t helping at all too. All eyes on us and as much as I want them to drool over me, I just want to poke their eyes and pull it out of their heads. Sounds morbid? Good.

 

“If you don’t want a party then Let’s just hang out at home”

“Dude that’s boring as but I’d prefer that”

“So come by and we’ll prepare something”

“Don’t bother. Just beer and pizza will be fine”

 

But when I went there, he introduced me to someone. He had been setting me up for the past months without asking me because well, my feeling were too ed up by his sister which by the way I still can’t get over but I’m trying, I really do and her being away really helps

 

“This is Max, she’s the sister of one of my team mates and this is Onew my best friend”

“Hi, nice name” I offered my hand and shook hers

“Thanks, it’s short for Maxine”

“Cool” I smiled and went straight to the kitchen where crazy girl is

 

“Oh hey, Onew”

“What you doing crazy girl?” I ruffled her hair, such a cute little sister

“I’m preparing the pizza and beer. Have you met Max”

“Yeap.”

“Then go mingle!”

“Jeez fine, and tell your boyfriend to stop fixing me up!”

“More like YOUR boyfriend. You know he’s just doing this for you to move on right? You screwed things up with his sister and my best friend so this is kind of your fault too. Deal with it!”

“Since when did you become so rude, I kind of like it”

“You taught me, remember?” She smiled and carried the pizza back to the living room”

 

Max was really great to be honest. She’s not too clingy or flirty but I don’t know why I can feel that this is just the fake her. But she got a great bod though. Not too tall, right size of ies for me and she got a nice face but not my typ

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Zereothia
#1
This is one of the best stories I've read on Onew so far! I love it so much that I'm re-reading it!! <3
Thank you so much for this story Author-nim!! :)
kmfonacier #2
Chapter 60: You've done everything so great :-D thank you saeng for the great stories :-) see you again next time :-D
bluestormysky
#3
Chapter 60: love the ending, great story. good job author nim. u gonna sign off? well, u r one of my favo writers. gonna miss ur story..
kmfonacier #4
Chapter 58: 4 years of writing.
4 years of being a subscriber and a friend saeng, you know how much I love your stories and how much I always complement each and every story you make. You must've thought this many times. Writing an story is not an issue thing. You would'nt know what will people will react on your story but you have good readers and they really love your story saeng. I hope you can still write when you have time. And I wish we can see each other again. It's been also 4 years since the last time we've seen each other saeng.... THANK YOU FOR WONDERFUL STORIE SAENG. LOVE YOU SO MUCH
zettyez #5
Chapter 58: Why my heart hurt seeing ur word signing off?
U must've think alot too. Keep writing if u hv time, ive always adored ur writing. Tq for the wonderful stories, u remained one of my best aff author. ;)
shankerider
#6
Chapter 57: Awww... But I don't want her to break up with Key just because of Onew. I hope that if they break up in the end, it will be because she doesn't think they are compatible but they will still remain friends. She and Onew shouldn't get back together so quickly... I think she should still finish her studies first, since she does enjoy fashion though not Paris so much. Oh no... What will happen next?
kmfonacier #7
Chapter 56: Oh sorry, chapter 56..... Hihihi
kmfonacier #8
Chapter 56: The last time I check you only had chapter 52, now its chapter 55? Waaaahhh~~~ you update fast saeng :-D I'm gonna read now.... Mwuah~~~!!!
zettyez #9
Chapter 56: Comeon pls let things work for onew n sara!
Im impressed again, authornim!
Nayc2307
#10
Chapter 54: Thank you for all the updates on till now. It's really sad for both of them..although everything works out fine now. I think Onew will never be able to let go of Sara because of his crush for her is not a thing of when they hooked up, but from long time ago. So he will need more than half year to get over her. And Sara...oh man she is now with Key....WHY?!?!?? heheh but Key is really charming here. Looks like something's going to happen in the 2 weeks......very curious... i really felt it in the way you wrote their meeting... oh if i was Sara i will be totally stuttering. Thanks again! I will patiently wait for your next update. Silly onew!