Chapter 7

Marlboro Reds

KissTheDream: Sorry for the looooong wait! >.< I wrote too many chapters at once and got confused with the timeline. Hopefully I've sorted that out now.

This chapter unfolds at the same time as the previous one. Since I’m following more than one character, this might happen from time to time, but I’ll be sure to leave a note when it does.

 

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Despite the chilly weather, the hotel room was cosy and warm. Nestled among the blankets, Park Soo Hyun put down her romance novel and gazed at her husband, deep in thought.

The man was hunched over his laptop, finishing up some business he had left to do. Their little vacation was rather abrupt, and the only way Park Sung Won could manage to go was to bring a laptop along.

Even though it was sudden, the couple’s trip to Jeju Island was surprisingly pleasant. By pure accident, the hotel the two were staying at was exactly the same one they’d booked for their honeymoon 18 years ago.

It set the atmosphere for what was probably one of the most beautiful weekends of Soo Hyun’s life. With both (mostly) free from their work, the couple could finally spend time together. Sung Won was in an especially good mood, so much he would suddenly start whistling while taking walks through the autumn hills, kiss Soo Hyun right out of the blue, or take her out for a fancy meal on the spur of the moment.

She hated to break that light-hearted atmosphere that made her feel like a girl again. But it had to be done. It was one of the reasons she had insisted on going on this trip – to go somewhere where they could be peaceful and alone and tell her husband, as calmly and painlessly as possible, what was happening with their son.

Or perhaps, the trip was simply an excuse, so that she could delay the inevitable for just a little longer.

Still hesitant, she traced the fabric of the pale sheets, embroidered with lilies in full bloom. She didn’t recall the number of the room they’d rented when they had come here for their honeymoon. During that time, Jimin had been conceived. It might’ve been on this very bed.

Had something gone wrong without her noticing? Was her son different from the start? And was is somehow her fault? Park Soo Hyun bit her lips. She had no answer.

“… Can we talk for a minute, dear?”

After all those years of marriage, Sung Won easily picked up on the strain in her voice. Shutting down his laptop, he sat on the other edge of the bed, eyeing her cautiously. She had seemed so happy just a few minutes before. Sung Won couldn’t imagine what could had gone wrong.

Park Soo Hyun took a long sigh to steady herself. She ran her fingers through her long dark hair, and started talking.

 

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KissTheDream: This chapter is really short, but two more are already finished and will soon be up! ^^

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Aigo-is-Deby
#1
Chapter 9: And isn't this high school? If Jimin was conceived 18 years ago, he's 17 and a sophomore is around 15-16 unless this is in Korean age? And what about his older sister? When was she conceived? I'd have assumed the honeymoon would have her as the result if she's the noona. Also slightly confused about the ending of this chapter. But excited to read the rest.
Obviously this is just my opinion and what I consider as constructive criticism! Because we all need that. Your ideas are good. And your writing just as much. So yeah. You don't have to take this in consideration. It's just my opinion after all. :) (2/2)
Aigo-is-Deby
#2
Chapter 9: Hello there! :)
Okay so first I like your ideas for this fiction. They are really good.
Second how can Jimin say Namjoon is ugly??;-; that guy is bae. Cuter than anything else in this whole world.
Well I've read your fiction after putting it up for so long because I'm a lazy bum although I really like Jinmin not as much as Nammin tho. We need more fics with those two tbh. But anyway. Not going to lie, I was really disappointed at how short the chapters were. I felt like you could have developed so much more. By trying to give them this feeling of "mystery" you left out so many more things that could have been developed into something else. This fic doesn't seem to be only from Jimin's perspective as we see his parents' too and even the teacher's. I felt like by talking even more in chapter 1 about how Jimin felt with the kiss that was especially in an open space would have been good. How he reacted after the warm feeling stopped. How he hurriedly or maybe even slowly walked out of there. Did he touch his lips unsure if that was really happening? Did he wiped out his lips just because he knew that was how he should react while inside he felt conflicted?
What about Jin? It's nice for him to be all mysterious but somethings about him would have been good too. Not like a pov from him but at least Jimin trying to analyze him by his expression. "Jimin saw the smirk on his face and wondered if he was proud of what he just did. Was it something he had planned?"
But the chapter that felt like it needed more update was chapter 2. I felt like it could have also be combined with chapter 3 because I thought 3 was another day. And also just to show how worried Jimin's mom was it could be something like "she had to take off from work(...)" idk haha.
And chapter 6 and 7 could have been combined too. With just something for example like "however on the other side of the country, everything wasn't so happy" idek but I hope you see what I mean?
fRoStEh #3
MY GOD please update, so far I really ing love it, would love to see what happens next!!!!!
waterpie20 #4
Chapter 9: So good! Can't wait for update!!!
SugarFreeSuga
#5
Chapter 9: Jin u badass af I thought ur pink princess? lol. I hope u update soon, it's rlly good ^^
eqiinkz #6
Chapter 9: I love badass Jin. Hahaha and gosh! I'm so curious what will happen next.
jellyzelo96 #7
Chapter 9: is going down....
mello95
#8
Chapter 9: OMG OMG!! Jimin, why would you do that?? >.> Jin is angry! He is freaking angry omfg!! Ahhhh!! >.< I'm so excited! I can't wait, for the next one!
Thank you for this update! I love you *3*
masami_
#9
Chapter 8: Awww im happythis fic is continuing!
mello95
#10
Chapter 7: Omg this fanfic is amazing!!!
I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for you to update more!!
keep up the amazing work!
I love how Jin is a badass and not a princess lol It's really refreshing