Chapter 4

Marlboro Reds

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Family dinners weren’t as dreadful as they might sound, at least in Jimin’s opinion. After all, his mom was a great cook, and even a pleasant presence in the house (unless she was nagging at him to clean up his room or to throw the trash out).

The Park family wasn’t one of those dysfunctional households you hear so much about. Not at all; Jimin really had it good. His mother was someone he could talk to; his father was someone he could admire. Even his older sister wasn’t so bad, even though Jimin secretly considered her a bit stupid.

“I’m going on a date tonight, okay? I’ll be back late.” Jimin’s noona chuckled. “Or rather, early.”

“All right, dear.” said Park Soo Hyun, her voice soft and flat, as if she was sleep-talking.

A loud clang! signaled Jimin’s sister’s fork had fallen from her hand and rattled against the place. She looked from her father to her mother, unable to believe they had let her go so easily. But her father was engrossed in his food, and her mother seemed strangely distracted. Jimin’s noona grinned in triumph and elbowed Jimin in the ribs.

 “Yah!” he protested, throwing a crumpled napkin at her and stealing one of her sweet potatoes.

That seemed to finally get Soo Hyun’s attention.

“Jimin?” she said, looking at him with her eyes suddenly wide.

“Are you okay, mom?” he asked. Her hair was a mess. She looked sad, and perhaps a little betrayed. “Did something happen at work?”

She looked as if she wanted to say something, but then shook her head. “Eat it before It gets cold.” she said softly, motioning to his plate.

Suddenly Jimin had an idea. “Mom?”

She immediately turned to him. “… Y-yes, Jimin?”

“If noona is going out, can’t I go out too? It’s Friday!”

Park Soo Hyun took a moment to think about it. She seemed to be trembling, but Jimin discarded that idea. There was no reason why his mother should be trembling in the middle of dinner.

“Perhaps not today. But why don’t you could invite your friends here next week?” she said with a smile.

Jimin’s noona was outraged. “MOM!!!”

“Yes, dear?”

“How come Jimin gets to have a house party and not me?!”

Soo Hyun took a deep breath. “You can have a party the week after, if you want. But after that, you both have to start studying for your exams!”

Jimin grinned from ear to ear. Under the table he sent a text to Taehyung, making multiple typos in his excitement.

tae tae, we got some shopping to do. five liters of soju.  for starters. :P

 

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Aigo-is-Deby
#1
Chapter 9: And isn't this high school? If Jimin was conceived 18 years ago, he's 17 and a sophomore is around 15-16 unless this is in Korean age? And what about his older sister? When was she conceived? I'd have assumed the honeymoon would have her as the result if she's the noona. Also slightly confused about the ending of this chapter. But excited to read the rest.
Obviously this is just my opinion and what I consider as constructive criticism! Because we all need that. Your ideas are good. And your writing just as much. So yeah. You don't have to take this in consideration. It's just my opinion after all. :) (2/2)
Aigo-is-Deby
#2
Chapter 9: Hello there! :)
Okay so first I like your ideas for this fiction. They are really good.
Second how can Jimin say Namjoon is ugly??;-; that guy is bae. Cuter than anything else in this whole world.
Well I've read your fiction after putting it up for so long because I'm a lazy bum although I really like Jinmin not as much as Nammin tho. We need more fics with those two tbh. But anyway. Not going to lie, I was really disappointed at how short the chapters were. I felt like you could have developed so much more. By trying to give them this feeling of "mystery" you left out so many more things that could have been developed into something else. This fic doesn't seem to be only from Jimin's perspective as we see his parents' too and even the teacher's. I felt like by talking even more in chapter 1 about how Jimin felt with the kiss that was especially in an open space would have been good. How he reacted after the warm feeling stopped. How he hurriedly or maybe even slowly walked out of there. Did he touch his lips unsure if that was really happening? Did he wiped out his lips just because he knew that was how he should react while inside he felt conflicted?
What about Jin? It's nice for him to be all mysterious but somethings about him would have been good too. Not like a pov from him but at least Jimin trying to analyze him by his expression. "Jimin saw the smirk on his face and wondered if he was proud of what he just did. Was it something he had planned?"
But the chapter that felt like it needed more update was chapter 2. I felt like it could have also be combined with chapter 3 because I thought 3 was another day. And also just to show how worried Jimin's mom was it could be something like "she had to take off from work(...)" idk haha.
And chapter 6 and 7 could have been combined too. With just something for example like "however on the other side of the country, everything wasn't so happy" idek but I hope you see what I mean?
fRoStEh #3
MY GOD please update, so far I really ing love it, would love to see what happens next!!!!!
waterpie20 #4
Chapter 9: So good! Can't wait for update!!!
SugarFreeSuga
#5
Chapter 9: Jin u badass af I thought ur pink princess? lol. I hope u update soon, it's rlly good ^^
eqiinkz #6
Chapter 9: I love badass Jin. Hahaha and gosh! I'm so curious what will happen next.
jellyzelo96 #7
Chapter 9: is going down....
mello95
#8
Chapter 9: OMG OMG!! Jimin, why would you do that?? >.> Jin is angry! He is freaking angry omfg!! Ahhhh!! >.< I'm so excited! I can't wait, for the next one!
Thank you for this update! I love you *3*
masami_
#9
Chapter 8: Awww im happythis fic is continuing!
mello95
#10
Chapter 7: Omg this fanfic is amazing!!!
I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for you to update more!!
keep up the amazing work!
I love how Jin is a badass and not a princess lol It's really refreshing