Chapter 2

Marlboro Reds

 

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Ha Mu Yeom sat hunched over his desk, nervously fiddling with his pen. Being the new teacher straight from the university, he had never imagined the kinds of problems he would run into while teaching. More often than he’d like, what he thought was right and what a teacher is supposed to do were entirely different things. He was never sure if he had reacted the right way, and when Park Soo Hyun, the mother of one of his students, politely greeted him and entered his office, Ha Mu Yeom still wasn’t quite certain about his decision.

Puzzled by the teacher’s silence, the woman decided to speak first.

“Is… is Jimin in trouble?”

She seemed genuinely concerned, the teacher noted. From her clothes to the tone of her voice, she felt like nothing other than an honest, ordinary mother.

All the more reason she should know, the teacher thought. Yet, somehow he didn’t find the strength to tell her outright.

“No, no, no,” the teacher reassured, trying to put up a smile, “Jimin’s not in trouble. He’s a good kid.”

Jimin’s mother just sat in her chair, confused. No one calls a parent to the school just to tell them that they have a good kid.

“Did… did he fail a test? Did he get in a fight with someone?”

Again, the teacher denied it, waving his hands around and even attempting to laugh. He wanted to calm her down, but all he did was seem nervous and uncomfortable.

“No, nothing like that. You see, Jimin, ah, he… got involved with an… an older boy…”

The mother instantly clasped a hand to . “So he did get in a fight-!”

That’s when Ha Mu Yeom took a deep breath and decided to frankly say what he’d seen a few days ago. Thinking it was a beautiful day and needing some fresh air to recover from his previous class, he had decided to take a walk in the park behind the school, only to find that he wasn’t the only one there.

Watching from a distance, Ha Mu Yeom didn’t notice the boys doing anything against the school rules. And yet, what he had seen bothered him for days, until he finally decided to call in Jimin’s mother, since Jimin was in his class.

Two schoolboys kissing like that, in broad daylight… it felt disturbing. It felt dangerous.

“I’m informing you of this as a person, not a teahcer.” Ha Mu Yeom said while seeing Park Soo Hyun to the door. She had been denying it, saying it wasn’t possible, then crying for a time, but now she had sufficiently calmed down. “I’m only mentioning this to you because of Jimin’s safety. You understand, if someone else had seen, it would be… uncomfortable.”

Uncomfortable did not describe even a fraction of the huge problems two boys could face if they had been labeled as “gay”. Yet, the teacher didn’t want to upset the mother any further. Muttering comforting nonsense, he even borrowed her a napkin to wipe her tears away and gently closed the door when she was gone.

After it was all over, Ha Mu Yeom sank back into his chair. He had told Jimin’s mother about her son kissing an older boy, Kim Seokjin, behind the school because he thought it was the right thing to do. But seeing the woman’s tears, he was not so sure anymore.

Being a teacher is ing tough, he thought, resting his head on the desk.

 

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KissTheDream: Trying out something new until I get some inspiration for my VIXX story ("Ideal Roommate").

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Aigo-is-Deby
#1
Chapter 9: And isn't this high school? If Jimin was conceived 18 years ago, he's 17 and a sophomore is around 15-16 unless this is in Korean age? And what about his older sister? When was she conceived? I'd have assumed the honeymoon would have her as the result if she's the noona. Also slightly confused about the ending of this chapter. But excited to read the rest.
Obviously this is just my opinion and what I consider as constructive criticism! Because we all need that. Your ideas are good. And your writing just as much. So yeah. You don't have to take this in consideration. It's just my opinion after all. :) (2/2)
Aigo-is-Deby
#2
Chapter 9: Hello there! :)
Okay so first I like your ideas for this fiction. They are really good.
Second how can Jimin say Namjoon is ugly??;-; that guy is bae. Cuter than anything else in this whole world.
Well I've read your fiction after putting it up for so long because I'm a lazy bum although I really like Jinmin not as much as Nammin tho. We need more fics with those two tbh. But anyway. Not going to lie, I was really disappointed at how short the chapters were. I felt like you could have developed so much more. By trying to give them this feeling of "mystery" you left out so many more things that could have been developed into something else. This fic doesn't seem to be only from Jimin's perspective as we see his parents' too and even the teacher's. I felt like by talking even more in chapter 1 about how Jimin felt with the kiss that was especially in an open space would have been good. How he reacted after the warm feeling stopped. How he hurriedly or maybe even slowly walked out of there. Did he touch his lips unsure if that was really happening? Did he wiped out his lips just because he knew that was how he should react while inside he felt conflicted?
What about Jin? It's nice for him to be all mysterious but somethings about him would have been good too. Not like a pov from him but at least Jimin trying to analyze him by his expression. "Jimin saw the smirk on his face and wondered if he was proud of what he just did. Was it something he had planned?"
But the chapter that felt like it needed more update was chapter 2. I felt like it could have also be combined with chapter 3 because I thought 3 was another day. And also just to show how worried Jimin's mom was it could be something like "she had to take off from work(...)" idk haha.
And chapter 6 and 7 could have been combined too. With just something for example like "however on the other side of the country, everything wasn't so happy" idek but I hope you see what I mean?
fRoStEh #3
MY GOD please update, so far I really ing love it, would love to see what happens next!!!!!
waterpie20 #4
Chapter 9: So good! Can't wait for update!!!
SugarFreeSuga
#5
Chapter 9: Jin u badass af I thought ur pink princess? lol. I hope u update soon, it's rlly good ^^
eqiinkz #6
Chapter 9: I love badass Jin. Hahaha and gosh! I'm so curious what will happen next.
jellyzelo96 #7
Chapter 9: is going down....
mello95
#8
Chapter 9: OMG OMG!! Jimin, why would you do that?? >.> Jin is angry! He is freaking angry omfg!! Ahhhh!! >.< I'm so excited! I can't wait, for the next one!
Thank you for this update! I love you *3*
masami_
#9
Chapter 8: Awww im happythis fic is continuing!
mello95
#10
Chapter 7: Omg this fanfic is amazing!!!
I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for you to update more!!
keep up the amazing work!
I love how Jin is a badass and not a princess lol It's really refreshing