Chapter 3

Marlboro Reds

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Friday was almost over by the time Jimin thought of Jin again. It had been three days since the incident, and Jimin successfully managed to distract himself so that he doesn’t think about what happened on that beautiful day in the park behind the school. He hadn’t gone there since, and while he felt like he would die for a cig, he also felt his stomach flip at the danger of accidentally running into Jin. Jimin just didn’t know what to think about the whole thing, so he simply ignored it.

The tactic seemed to work quite well, at least until the break before the last period. Happy over the arrival of the weekend, everyone in the second-year corridors was loud and rowdy. Jimin was in the midst of poking fun of Taehyung’s new hair colour (orange as a carrot) when he stopped mid-sentence, staring at a familiar face coming towards him though the hallway.

Being mid-break, the corridor was so crowded Jin had to push and squeeze through groups of excited girls and hordes of loud guys. Feeling glued to the spot, Jimin simply watched as Jin finally emerged from the crowd, breathless and with red hair in a mess.

For a split second Jimin was oddly afraid Jin would kiss him again, right there in front of all the people. But Jin didn’t even stop walking. He went right past him, and when they were shoulder to shoulder he pressed something into Jimin’s hand, as if it was a kind of secret exchange you see in spy movies.

Jimin couldn’t help but grin when he saw three Marlboro reds in his palm.

 

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Park Soo Hyun hurried through the school hallways and down the stairs, thankful the classes were over so no one could see her in tears. She couldn’t yet believe what she had just heard. Ha Mu Yeom’s words rang hollowly in her ears.

Blinded by her tears, she suddenly bumped into a tall, solid object right before the exit. Squinting around, she tried to scramble back to her feet, before a hand gently pulled her up by the wrist.

“Are you all right, ma’m?” said the tall object – or, it seemed, the tall student. He handed her back her bag that had flown away when she fell, and even collected the items that had rolled out of it.

“Thank you,” she said, amazed that there were still kids that respected their elders. She had thought that kind of students had died out long ago. “What’s your name?”

She especially noticed the tidy uniform and the spark in his eyes. Secretly, she was hoping the boy was one of Jimin’s friends. Maybe this was the Taehyung she had heard so much about?

“I’m Kim Seokjin. Nice to meet you, ma’m.”

Park Soo Hyun wanted to reply, but it felt like an icy hand was squeezing . Stumbling, she backed away from the kid, who looked deeply confused.

“… Are you all right, ma’m?”

But she was gone in a second, leaving behind only the horrible metal squeaking of the school doors.

 

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Aigo-is-Deby
#1
Chapter 9: And isn't this high school? If Jimin was conceived 18 years ago, he's 17 and a sophomore is around 15-16 unless this is in Korean age? And what about his older sister? When was she conceived? I'd have assumed the honeymoon would have her as the result if she's the noona. Also slightly confused about the ending of this chapter. But excited to read the rest.
Obviously this is just my opinion and what I consider as constructive criticism! Because we all need that. Your ideas are good. And your writing just as much. So yeah. You don't have to take this in consideration. It's just my opinion after all. :) (2/2)
Aigo-is-Deby
#2
Chapter 9: Hello there! :)
Okay so first I like your ideas for this fiction. They are really good.
Second how can Jimin say Namjoon is ugly??;-; that guy is bae. Cuter than anything else in this whole world.
Well I've read your fiction after putting it up for so long because I'm a lazy bum although I really like Jinmin not as much as Nammin tho. We need more fics with those two tbh. But anyway. Not going to lie, I was really disappointed at how short the chapters were. I felt like you could have developed so much more. By trying to give them this feeling of "mystery" you left out so many more things that could have been developed into something else. This fic doesn't seem to be only from Jimin's perspective as we see his parents' too and even the teacher's. I felt like by talking even more in chapter 1 about how Jimin felt with the kiss that was especially in an open space would have been good. How he reacted after the warm feeling stopped. How he hurriedly or maybe even slowly walked out of there. Did he touch his lips unsure if that was really happening? Did he wiped out his lips just because he knew that was how he should react while inside he felt conflicted?
What about Jin? It's nice for him to be all mysterious but somethings about him would have been good too. Not like a pov from him but at least Jimin trying to analyze him by his expression. "Jimin saw the smirk on his face and wondered if he was proud of what he just did. Was it something he had planned?"
But the chapter that felt like it needed more update was chapter 2. I felt like it could have also be combined with chapter 3 because I thought 3 was another day. And also just to show how worried Jimin's mom was it could be something like "she had to take off from work(...)" idk haha.
And chapter 6 and 7 could have been combined too. With just something for example like "however on the other side of the country, everything wasn't so happy" idek but I hope you see what I mean?
fRoStEh #3
MY GOD please update, so far I really ing love it, would love to see what happens next!!!!!
waterpie20 #4
Chapter 9: So good! Can't wait for update!!!
SugarFreeSuga
#5
Chapter 9: Jin u badass af I thought ur pink princess? lol. I hope u update soon, it's rlly good ^^
eqiinkz #6
Chapter 9: I love badass Jin. Hahaha and gosh! I'm so curious what will happen next.
jellyzelo96 #7
Chapter 9: is going down....
mello95
#8
Chapter 9: OMG OMG!! Jimin, why would you do that?? >.> Jin is angry! He is freaking angry omfg!! Ahhhh!! >.< I'm so excited! I can't wait, for the next one!
Thank you for this update! I love you *3*
masami_
#9
Chapter 8: Awww im happythis fic is continuing!
mello95
#10
Chapter 7: Omg this fanfic is amazing!!!
I'm really enjoying it, can't wait for you to update more!!
keep up the amazing work!
I love how Jin is a badass and not a princess lol It's really refreshing