Chapter 14: Samantha is so meek...it feels like the character has their reasons or different pov's like samantha's childhood, reasons behind Sehun's kiss and hyoyeon's deliberate plan of making Jongin see the kiss, will effect the aftermath?..it's so ambiguous. It's breaking my heart and kai's into pieces..i root kai. ..please be gentle with .

Chapter 13: so delicate....next is girl talk!

Chapter 12: Awe.. ^^ this was adorable. (: I'll try to stop being a silent reader.

Chapter 7: He's talking riddles and she's going to be sherlock holmes trying to figure it out. Build the character I guess like peeling the layers of an onion...not rushed and not too long.

Chapter 7: The first paragraph really struck me as something meaningful. :)

Chapter 6: Adorable fetuses! >•>

Chapter 6: I love it so far and that picture is so adorable^^^ :) keep up the good work :)

Chapter 6: You too have a great week :)

Chapter 5: Oooh! Thats interesting! How can Samantha have a great impact on Jongin that he was able to remember her from when he was six years old...Ahhh i can conclude this in so many ways but I will wait. >•>