The Unusual Afterlife of Byun Baekhyun

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  Baekhyun died. To be specific, he was murdered. As such, he is lost soul caught between Heaven and Hell. His Purgatory takes the form of a depleted house known by the ghosts who live there as 'The Ghost House'. The living cannot enter and the dead cannot leave. It's a perfect place for Baekhyun to forget the circumstances that killed him. But the Ghost House has way of dragging out the secrets of the dead it harbors. Can Baekhyun make it out before he's forced to confront his worst secret?

Foreword

 

 

 

 

   Prologue

 

 

    Baekhyun had not thought about Death.

    He had not thought about what it meant or even the finality of it. Why should he? He was young, barely even sixteen. Baekhyun was just a high schooler with rebelliously dyed red hair and soft, smirking mouth from which all manner of cynical remarks came. Baekhyun was small compared to many of the tall, muscular boys in his school. Feminie in comparasion. He was wispy. A small boy with a slim boy and expressive eyes. Baekhyun was not popular in his school by any means. He wasn't good enough at anything to be popular or wanted. He prefered- or rather forced to - having a small selection of friends and many, many people who thought him odd enough to bully. 

      He supposed it was a combination of all those qualities that killed him. 

      Baekhyun stood in the woods, hand braced against a tall tree. It soared into the sky, leaves turning red and falling like the hundreds that surrounded it. Shivering, he took out his phone and flicked it on to check the tie. 6:05 the screen said. Baekhyun angrily turned the phone off, jamming it back into his coat pocket. 

       He isn't coming....the idiot. HE was the one who wanted to meet. 

       A blast of the chilling autumn wind rashed through the forest. Baekhyun pulled his blue stripped scarf closer to himself. The tempature was dropping rapidly as the sun sank lower in the sky. Baekhyun sighed. He had been waiting since 3:00. If Chanyeol wasn't here, he wasn't coming at all. 

     A tear formed in the corner of his eye. Baekhyun wiped it away before it fell. How dare he not show up? Was Baekhyun really that forgettable? That worthless to Chanyeol? Pushing off the tree, Baekhyun turned to go home. 

     A shadow fall across him. 

     Baekhyun stopped. He turned around, half expecting it to be a remorseful giant of a friend. Just a friend. His shoulders sank a bit when he saw it was. Still, he recognized the figure standing a few feet from him. Baekhyun didn't want to, but he waved. 

      "Hi," he whispered, not really wanting their bull right now. "I was just going home."

      Baekhyun had not thought about Death. 

      The figure had.

      Baekhyun began walking up the hill and towards the bridge that laid over the old mill river. This time of year the water wasn't frozen quite yet. It was still running, a freezing stream of water with chunks of ice floating down it. The town was across the bridge and through another small patch of woods. Baekhyun tried to imagine would he would do when he got him. He doubted he would call Chanyeol. Maybe the idiot would call him. If he didn't, school would be as awkward and heartbreaking as Hell tomorrow. 

      SNAP! 

      Baekhyun glanced over his should. The figure was following him. "Are you going home too?" he asked. It shook its head slowly, eyes trained on him. Fear coiled in Baekhyun's stomach. It twisted and bit at his mind, screaming for him to run. The cold ran through him until he felt frozen in place with fear. 

     That fear grew stronger as the figure walked faster to overtake him. Their footsteps were determind, their walk agressive. The air rushed out of Baekhyun's lungs. He was trotting now, hurrying to get away before the figure caught up to him. 

       "Is something wrong Baekhyun?" they asked softly. Darkness lurked in that voice. Baekhyun felt a tear roll down his face. He had heard the darkness many times, but he never thought it would effect him this much. The figure's mask had fallen, revealing a monster Baekhyun had only jokingly thought existed. 

      Baekhyun had not thought about Death, but he knew he wanted to live. 

      I'm not getting out of here alive.....

      Baekhyun dropped his backpack and ran. 

      Death had come. 

      

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  Hello everyone! Thank you all for checking out my story :) This is a story based off of my previously written one shot "Ghost House," serving as a prequel/alternative point of view/sequel. "The Unusual Afterlife of Byun Baekhyun" is my third multichaptered story, and I am trying to improve my plot and character writing skills with this. Updates will come as soon as a I can, but I am busy with my life outside of AFF. BUT.....still remember to subscribe, up vote, and comment below  (^-^)/

 

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G-R-B-E-J #1
Absolutely LOVED this story. I just found it yesterday and, well, didn't even notice it was completed, so I thought it'd be a risk reading a story I wasn't sure was going to be finished, but still found it worth taking that risk after just reading the first chapter. I literally read the last chapter without knowing that was it. And I'm really glad I clicked on this story because its plot is extremely interesting and unique. The ending, even though left with countless possibilities, is still really satisfying. And I also just read your oneshot about Kai in the Ghost House, and loved that one too. Though now I noticed that I don't remember Kyungsoo appearing in this one, and I'm not sure if I already forgot or he really wasn't mentioned (but with this story being as long as it is, I don't really fancy going through the chapters looking for him). Also, an epilogue or a side story would definitely be a great plus for this, because the other characters are pretty good material for being put into the center of attention and worked more on, but none of that is necessary, as the story is great with or without those. Lastly, yay XD, this is my first comment EVER on AFF (mostly because I'm rather scared of leaving my trace on this site). But I don't usually comment anywhere, be it in the virtual world of technology or real life. And yet, I just felt some kind of an unexplainable push to actually say something. :)
SleepingDungeon
#2
Chapter 11: Really great and interesting story... But I'm not really feeljng the ending? I feel like things between Chanbaek wasn't really sorted out well... Like did Baekhyun even fully understand how much Chanyeol loved him, and that Shion was the other that was killed, and the truth of why Chanyeol actually never made it to him that night? As well as things about Kai and his strange behavior, and what happened to the rest?? Do they ever pass on? It was still a good story that kept me up until 3:54 in the morning. So thank u.
aLiaLovella #3
Chapter 11: I like the ending but I feel cheated somehow.Like why is Xiumin & Luhan is able to disappear just like that but Sehun,Baekhyun & Chanyeol need to go through the mirror?The ending is kind of ambiguous. Also,I wanted to know what happen to the rest of them.Do they realise that a lot of them had gone & if they had grasp the trick to leave the house will they try it?What happen if the house is empty of Lost Souls?Why doesn't Suho & Kris & the others tried to leave?What will happen to SebaekChan?What is Sehun's backstory? More than anything,I had more question now that it end.

I really really like your story & the way you write the plot but I feel sad cause I feel that there's something missing,like a good story end abruptly.Also,I'm sorry for asking so many question.

Will check out your other stories,hwaiting!
meongmungee #4
Chapter 11: Wow... I really like the ending. It was a nice read, great plot. Thanks for sharing, good luck!
Natalie_16 #5
Chapter 9: Plz plz plz update
meongmungee #6
Chapter 9: Nooo xiumin... Okay, so welcome to the house chanyeol. Can baekhyun remember him?
Exofanland #7
Chapter 6: I wonder if the rest of EXO will become ghost. Like if Chanyeol will end up here as well. That.....I don't know how the story will go or develope if that happen. I'm curious author nim, pls update again
Blackredandblue #8
Chapter 6: sEBAEKKKKKKKK LMAO