Summer Fades Away (Editing)

Description

  Jonghyun is nothing more than an apple farmer's apprentice. A young boy growing up in a world so dependent on their harvests they are willing to sacrifice the most beautiful of their children to it. He is the one in love with the most perfect of their children. He is in love with Key, a boy who will vanish forever at the end of summer. 

 

 

Foreword

 

 

      "Hiding behind the sunflowers by the fence, we hurriedly kissed. Those soft cheeks of yours, are probably oh so sweet.

    Chasing a rabbit through the grass, with no one else in sight. In a field which feigns not to notice us. The shoes we kicked off show the way. 

     It was an eventless summer, all we did was fall in love."

                                                                     - Natsu no Ring/ Summer Apples by Kalafina. 

 

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      They were in the orchard. They always met in the apple orchard. It was the one place they could lose themselves in without fear of being found. The trees were endless and the guards slow. They would not be found here. Jonghyun wished they could lose themselves here for good. To vanish into the trees and the sweet smelling air. Maybe than his heart wouldn't be breaking. 

      "Key," Jonghyun whispered into the boy's blonde hair. "Please tell me this is going to last forever."

      Key nodded, even though both of them knew it was a lie. A sweet lie whispered so they could stay happy. Key reached up to Jonghyun's back. "This," he whispered into his chest. "Is going to last forever. But-"

      Jonghyun shifted back, almost in horror at the but. But nothing. 

      Lie to me. Tell me this will last .

      Key sighed, leaning back into Jonghyun's warm embrace. "But if it doesn't,"

     This will never last. It cannot be allowed to last. 

     "Promise me you won't forget me?"

      Key's voice was small. Jonghyun hugged him fiercely. "Don't worry," he said, glancing up at the branches above them. The wind whistled through the lines of trees. The slim boy shivered in his arms, reminded Jonghyun that summer was coming to an end. Another week and it would mark the beginning of the harvest. 

      The end of them. 

      "I will never forget you Key."   

      That is my promise to you. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

     

      

      

 

 

 

 

   Hello everyone! This is my second Jongkey story, written for the Jongkey Kalafina contest created by aniangel07. It's got some pretty amazing prompts and music, so check it out -----> HERE!

 

     

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Reviewed by A Box of Chocolate Review Shop. ^_^

    

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Arianya6 #1
Chapter 1: Very poetic. Made my bottom lip wobble. Thank you.
Rellamellow #2
Why do I only find this now? This is absolutely beautiful and amazing, the setting, the plot, the characters and the way you write. I don't think I'm overreacting when I say that I fell in love with every sentence you wrote. Especially "Summer into fall". I'm sorry this comment is so short but I don't know what to say about this other than that it was beautiful and perfect. Thank you so much for writing this. ♡♥
aquakittie
#3
Chapter 1: I'm so sorry but... I don't understand... so did key die or was he just a ghost? Or did Jong hyun die too? Did he kiss a ghost... how could he kiss a ghost...?
JazzieLeeChaeWoo
#4
Chapter 1: I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!!! Oh my god it was such a beautiful story and ahhh, Im crying (>人<;) This .. Ugh it was so heartbreakingly beautiful. I don't know what to do with myself rn (T ^ T) I would have flipped if I was in Jonghyuns position and they were gunna kill Key ;~; Hes my baby
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jongkeymyheart #5
Chapter 1: WOW. Just- what do I even say? This was so beautiful and sweet and everything I could ever wish for in a story. *^* Thank you, so much, for writing this. I'm seriously picky about JongKey fanfiction, and I almost didn't read this because of the tragedy tag 'cause I wasn't feeling well, but I'm so glad I did. I have a hard time picking favorites when it comes to fanfiction, but this is now one of my very few favorites. It flowed so well, you made the development seem effortless, and it was so- it was simply beautiful. Thank you again. :)