Welcome To SM Private School (1)

The Crazy Life of Kim Family

At the car heading to school....

Sehun sits silently in the passenger’s seat next to his driving sister. Eyes gazed on the road, still slightly bushing, because just as they went into the car, the noona praised his choice of cloths. She praised him genuinely with the smile Sehun’s adore. No wonder he lost his words till no end until she finally called to him again.

“Sehun-ah!” she said.

“Yes noona?” he answered immediately.

“Do you hate school?” she asked.

“No, noona. I always want to go to school. But as an orphanage resident, I got no choice but to help the orphanage and try harder everyday so I won’t burdened the orphanage.” Sehun said in a soft tones.

She muttered an ‘ohh’ and turn the car to the left twice before they finally reached the school. She parked the car and turn her head to Sehun.

“You’re a good boy, Sehun-nie. You’re going to get into this school. So learn well! Promise?” she demanded many things before offering her pinky fingers to Sehun who reached and give her the pinky promise she wants.

After they broke their linked fingers, Eunhwa’s hand reached to Sehun’s cheek near the jawline. And at that, Sehun’s heart beats fast as if he just finished racing with the best runner in the world. Very fast. And he thinks she was about to kiss him. But again, she only hover her face in front of Sehun’s until there is nearly no gap between them and said, “Just so you know, I’m proud of you!”

Then she pull her body apart from Sehun and get out the car.

“Come on, darling. We don’t want to make the headmaster wait for too long!” she said to Sehun, who still froze in his seat a minute after that, before he finally quit dozing off and followed his sister.


At the Headmaster Office,

“So, Eunhwa, darling. You’re here for another registry?” the headmaster, who looks a lot like Dumbledore in Harry Potter movie except this one got shorter hair and no long beard, asked to Eunhwa in a friendly manner. Reminds Sehun that Eunhwa must’ve got here a lot of times, before registering Sehun, to register the other brothers before him.

“Yes, Mister Lee. This is Sehun. My newest and youngest little brother.” She said, then turned his body to Sehun. “Sehun, this is Mister Lee Soo Man. The headmaster of SM Private School. Soon, to be your headmaster if you got in.”

Sehun nods his head. Looking carefully at the old man.

“Oh, don’t worry Eunnie. He looks smart, and attractive. I love smart and attractive young man.” The old man said with a smirk.

“Ah, don’t praise him too much Mister Lee. After all, he has an entrance exam to passed right?” Eunhwa asked with humble tone, but smile proudly at her brother nonetheless.

“Ohh, no, no, no,” the headmaster shook his hand. “He didn’t need to go through that. I like all of your brothers and I trust your judgement as the one who took him in. He’s in.”

“What? Oh, please Mister Lee. You can’t do that. That wouldn’t be fair for the other kid.” Eunhwa argued with the headmaster, which confused Sehun. Why she must argued when Sehun could already got in without a test?

“No, Eunnie. I really really like this young man. So, like Kai and Tao, whom I favor as well, I will accept this young man, without a test.” Mister Lee keep his voice calm and steady.

“But what if there is other kid picking on him about this, like what happened to Kai? Well, I’m surprised to the fact that Tao got picked too but since he can fight, he got out well. But Kai got home with so much bruised in his body because of this matter.” Said Eunhwa worriedly.

“If you’re worried about this, we will keep the matter as a secret. But you know, much of our students who bullied Kai and Tao apparently keep their mouth shut after they learned about the fact that Kai and Tao is on the top of the Rank Board in their first quarter here. So, why don’t we do this. If in the first quarter, Sehun can not prove himself worthy of no entrance test in the first quarter he got here, we will make him do the entrance test. What about that?” said Mister Lee, still calm and smiling.

“Well, that’s pretty fair, I guess.” Eunhwa said after considering it for a while.

“Now, what are we waiting for? Don’t you have some paper to fill? I will call the registration section about this matter.” Mister Lee said to Eunhwa and then turned to face Sehun, smiling. “Welcome to the school, young boy. We expect great things from you.”

“I will try my best not to disappoint you, Mister Lee.” Sehun bowed deep in regards of his gratitude before he finally follows his sister to the registration section to complete his registration.


On The Way Home...

Sehun sits on his seat and smiles proudly. He got in without a test just because the headmaster thinks that he is attractive. That headmaster sure is weird, but Sehun is glad that he is. The thing is, his sister doesn’t look as proud as he is, so he decided to ask.

“Noona, are you not happy that I got in?” He said.

“What? Oh, no baby. I’m happy for you, really. I just worried that you would end up being bullied by some naughty prick who wouldn’t understand your quality, like Kai. You should’ve seen his face, and body. Good Lord, I don’t want the same thing happened to you.” She said worriedly, eyes still on the road.

“But noona, the headmaster said to keep this matter secret and if in the first three months I didn’t get good grade, they will run a secret entrance test for me. Isn’t that enough of a relieved for you?” Sehun asked innocently.

The car stop for the red light and Eunhwa turn his face to Sehun,

“Yes, darling. That’s a relieved. But that didn’t stop me from imagining you being bully and got home with hundreds of bruises. It scared me, really. I don’t want anything happen to you just because some test you could easily solved.”

Warm feelings run to Sehun’s cheek and he felt awfully happy hearing how worried his sister is.

“Noona, I’ll be fine. Really. Please don’t worry. I don’t want to make you worry.” Sehun raise from the backrest, sitting upstraight, and turned his face closer to Eunhwa.

Eunhwa smiles and nod at the young boy. She runs her fingers, rubbing lightly at the boy’s cheek. Sehun’s shivered at the gentle gestures he felt. He felt like she was about to hug him, but unfortunately, the light turns green and Eunhwa turns her head back to the road.

Sehun threw his body back at the backrest, feeling upset.

Second day, much opportunities, yet, still no kiss, not even a hug. He’s upset and back to his confused state once again.

He got off the car right after his sister parked it on the garage and muttered a small ‘thank you’.

Eunhwa got off the car right after him and observed his troubled face. Eyes follows on the boy carefully as he got into their house frowning. Soon, she thinks, soon I will break him completely and make him entirely mine. And the smile on her face only grew wider.

 

[END OF CHAPTER 6]


Waahhh, don't you just curious about how bad this noona is?

This noona is bad, I tell you. Very, very bad. And beautiful too, if that's matter. Kkkk.

I will expose more of her, and the other character as well, in time.

But this slow process is important. So, please just trust me. Hehe.

Please keep following this story and send a lot of review for me. I'll be waiting.

 

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WoodWitchofSuburbia
#1
Chapter 6: Alrighty, just finished reading everything you have updated so far.

I do want to say that I saw a lot of grammatical mistakes. I'm assuming English probably isn't your first language, so the mistakes are understandable.

I also think that maybe you should focus more on what it is about Eunhwa that Sehun and the rest of the boys like? Right now, we have no reason to really believe the boys have any reason to like her (at least Sehun). It's hard to believe that Sehun would be having these feelings over a girl he knows nothing about and has shared almost no interaction with.

Maybe focus on description more in some areas. Scenes seem to fly by, and they don't give us enough time to really comprehend what's going on. For instance, in the first chapter, describe Sehun's experience in the orphanage. Did he like it there? Was he glad to finally be adopted? Did he have friends at the orphanage? Describe more of his life in the orphanage, give us some background information, help us to learn more about who he is.

Also, I'm not really sure how someone can adopt someone into being their sibling. Adoption only really entails taking on a child as their parent, and it costs a lot of money and filling out lots of paperwork. You can't just go straight into an orphanage and say: I want that one. It's not the same thing as a pound, it doesn't really work that way. If you were to re-write your first chapter, you could use this as a way to talk more about Sehun's experiences at the orphanage while also giving him time to develop feelings for Eunhwa before he's finally adopted by her. That alone will add so much more to your story and allow the readers to empathize with the characters better.

I'd write a longer comment, but AFF won't let me, ha ha! If you have any more questions about what I've said, feel free to message me ~
secretlylovingexo
#2
Chapter 4: Actually there is a mistake on updating the chapter. There should be one more chapter between this and the third chapter. I will fix it later.
Like I mention in the last part of the chap right now Im far away from my laptop so update will be a hard thing for me right now. So please be patient guys. Love you.
MyStarryNight
#3
Chapter 1: Sehun got adopted! Sehun is smart