Meet the Brothers

The Crazy Life of Kim Family

As Sehun arrived in his new sister’s house, or should you say... castle, the maids suddenly rushed to the back of the car, taking all of the shopping bag from earlier and brought them in, into the house.

Sehun got into the house following his new sister and brother.

When they got inside, Sehun actually already prepared his mental state to be amazed by many more things ahead. But even if you prepared, something like this can’t just go by, ‘Ah so your house is big. Okay then.’ Because the inside part of the house a.k.a castle (for Sehun) is nothing like house (Sehun knows) at all. It really is a castle, Sehun hummed to himself.

As he standing still, stunned by the interiour of his new house, someone patted his shoulder. He turned his head to see and catch the adorable smile of his new sister.

“How do you like your new house?” she said, still smiling brightly.

“It’s very nice, noona. Feels like a castle that came out from fairytale books.” he answered honestly and EunHwa laugh to that.

“Yeah, thanks to my hard-working brother. Later, I will show you our old house picture, when we are not as great as we are now.” She said proudly. Sehun give her a small nod as a response.

After that, EunHwa give Sehun a little tour. Giving away important information as where the kitchen is, family lounge, dining room, Eunhwa’s bedroom and the rest of his new brothers’s bedroom, some of them are in the second floor while the rest of them are in the third floor. At the end of the tour, she brings him to his new room on the third floor, only to see him dropped all of his belongings and jaw at the same time. The room is wide, wall painted with cheerful-but-clean tone of pop-art drawings. Wooden studying desk that definitely expensive, 6 stakes-around 5 meters wide bookshelf, super big and comfy-looks single bed, all in this super wide bedroom. Sehun's giving in to the awe he felt. He couldn't say anything, anymore.

“This is your room. As you can see, I already put some basic stuff like studying desk, a bookshelf, a reading lamp, a bed, and wardrobe.” Eunhwa walks deeper inside as she mention all the things she prepared. “Ah, and I prepared some game console choices. Do you like xBox better, or PlayStation 3 better? Or both? Talk to me if you need other console you like okay?”

Sehun nods.

“And, you got your personal computer, your own laptop, ah, and we have wi-fi in this house, so you don’t have to worry about internet connection. What else, hmm....” Eunhwa said everything in a quick pace. “Ah whatever, if you need anything else you could just talk to me, okay?”

“Umm, ‘kay, noona.” Sehun answered.

“Good boy. Now, your first task in this house is, to put those,” she pointed at their shopping bags from earlier, “...into your wardrobe, nice and neat.”

Sehun stare at her, a little shocked.

“Don’t look at me like that boy. I don’t care if you’re going to wrecked down your room later, but right now,  for your first night here, I want it to be nice and neat. Remember, nice and neat.” She said that, and start to walk toward the door.

“It’s 4 p.m so I have to prepare our dinner.” She added. “I will call you again, and of course introduce you to the other member of the family, at dinner time. Okay?”

“Okay, noona.” Sehun answered, but throw away a pretty deep sighed after she left.

Why do I have to stuck with this cloths, bags and shoes? Sehun thinks. He always imagined what would he do when he finally get to joined a new family. And organize his own wardrobe in his new room is not one of them. He thinks he could have a little pep talk with his new sister, getting all swoony over her just like that damn perfect boy named Kai. It would be nice to be hold by her the way she hold Kai, he imagined. But suddenly shook his head and embarassed by his own thought. So before he could think of any other embarassing stuff he start to move his body to organize his new personal wardrobe.

Meanwhile, in the living room, member of Kim family started to showed up one by one. Getting back from school, college, or work. And one of them, slipped to the kitchen as he knows the only girl in this family would be there around this time.

A pair of arms sliding around Eunhwa’s wrist from behind as she cut some vegetables to cook. At that, Eunhwa didn’t budge, but smile anyway. The owner of the arms, slowly hover his head over Eunhwa shoulder  and kiss her left cheek gently.

Eunhwa giggles to that but still refuse to turn her head. So he brings his left hand to her chin, and gently turn her head to pressed  one soft kiss to her red lips. Just a quick one, but finally manage to give him the reaction he wants from the girl.

“Kris, come on. I’m cutting a vegetables right here. Can you save the sweet kiss for later?” she pout cutely to him and earn small laugh from the older boy.

“Okay, honey, okay. Your wish is my command,” said Kris in soldier manner. Brings smile to Eunhwa’s face.

“How’s your new little brother, love? Will I like him?” he asked, taking one big apple from the fruit basket and take a bite.

“Ohh, you will darling. He’s adorable. The youngest of us all, but I could smell strong I-am-an-adult pheromones from him.”

“You mean, he’s more mature than his original age?”

“No, it’s just his attitude that attract me. He behave like an adult but he’s not that mature. Ah, hard to explain. Kinda cocky, but not in a bad way. His arrogancy is so unique and cute, I just want to more.”

“Now, now, darling could you calm down? I definitely jealous right now.”

“Why would you?”

“I want to be teased by you.”

Eunhwa rolled his eyes in embarrasement. “Darling, please....”

“What? I’m telling you the truth... I want to...”

“Darling,......” she cut him before he could say even more embarrasing things.

“Yes?” Kris answered automatically to the call.

“Shower....” she pointed her finger across the room pointing at their room.

“Ah, okay....” he nods submissively and walk to the second floor to take a shower.

And so, Eunhwa proceed in cooking peacefully.

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After she finished cooking, she left the plating to the maid and goes to the living room where he find ten boys leisuring lazily. Some on the big comfy white sofa, and some of them just lying there on the the beautiful thick and warm-looking white rug.

“Guys, dinner is ready, but before that, I will introduce you to our newest member of the family. So be nice at him, okay? I will call him.” She said before walk to the third floor to pick up the boy.

After a while, she come back with Sehun who’s following her from behind nervously. He didn’t dare to look at them so he look at his toes instead.

Eunhwa stand beside him and said, “Everyone, this is Sehun. Please give him a warm greet!”

“Hi, Sehuuun! Welcome in this family!!” they greet him in harmony.

Sehun raise his head, only to bend his body to the front and back.

“Hi everyone. Please take care of me. I will try my best to get along with everyone.” He said politely.

“Okay,” Eunhwa patted Sehun’s shoulder. “Now I will introduce them one by one to you so try to remember, okay?”

Sehun nodded.

“This is my older brother. The only family-by-blood I have left. Kim Minseok.” She pointed at a one-lid chubby guy who doesn’t look like an older brother at all. Even when his face is cute, his eyes is so pointy and round. He also looks very firm and stout when he is not smiling.

“The guy beside him, is Luhan. His boyfriend.” Rather than shocked about the fact that a real gay couple is right here in front of him, he is more interested to the boy himself. How could a guy be that cute and spreading sweet feminine vibe all around him? His hair is candy pink, along with his cheek and his lips.

“The guy next to him is Wu Kris. My boyfriend.” Sehun’s heart jolted a little at the words. He inspect the guy carefully. Pointy but firm chin, thick eyebrows, cool-looking, and long legs. He is perfect. Sehun take a deep breath because something weird start to swirl around his chest and it makes him uncomfortable.

“Next is Junmyeon. Kris’s friend, but he lives here. So he’s part of the family.” Sehun try to get rids the weird emotion on his chest by observing the other guy. Sweet smile, looks gentle and warm. If anything, Sehun wants this guys as his older brother because the aura around him feels reassuring.

“And next one is Zhang Yixing. But Kim Yixing would sounds weird to call so we started to call him Lay. The first one adopted into this family.” Sehun looked at the boy who currently smiling as his name being called, showing Sehun his deep dimple that makes him looks innocently cute.

“Next one is Kim Chanyeol. Born from Park family, who owned the legendary Park Enterprises. Apparently his parents has a crazy interest over an oracle, so they threw Channie away because one of the oracle they’ve met said that having a son would brings them nothing but bad luck. So he ended up at the oprhanage since young age.” Sehun amazed by the story behind this tall, lanky, curly-hair man who’s smiling widely right now. Who would’ve thought he had that kind of past.

“And that is Kim Chen and Kim Baekhyun. They were born as fraternal twin. You know, twin from different eggs so their looks is anything but identical.” Sehun eyes moved to the twin brothers. One of them is pretty tall with his dark brown hair and long lash while the other is pretty short with his light brown straight hair.“

“The one with big eyes over there is Kim Kyungsoo. His eyes is very big and deep right? Like his heart. You’ll see as you started to know him better.” Sehun couldn’t agree more. Even right now, not knowing how he was, those big eyes could only gives the impression of strong and bold kindness. But noona’s right. I will see to it later.

“The person next to Kyungsoo is Kim Jongin, you’ve met him right? We called him Kai.” Sehun couldn’t really stand the boy. His tanned skin looks even more y under living room’s lighting. And that eyes, the eyes that couldn’t stop starring weirdly at him, is always giving Sehun a hard time. He always feels uncomfortable around the boy.

“The last one is... huh? Where’s Tao?” Eunhwa asking after realized one person is missing.

“I’m here, noona. Just got back from practice.” And at that, Sehun turned his face quickly to the voice, only to find one y male step into the living room, with sporty tank top, baggy short pants and gym bag, drowned in sweat.

“Ah, Sehun-ah, this is Huang Zitao. Well, now he is Kim Zitao, but we called him Tao.”

Sehun could only nods to the explanation. Eyes still on the beautiful teenage male in front of him.

“We’ve finished the introduction. Now, let’s eat.” Said Eunhwa.

[END OF CHAPTER 3]

 


Ahh, I'm sorry, the pace is so slow. There is a point in every chapter.

And this chapter's important point is the introduction part.

Next one will be up in a minutes. Or hours. I'm working on it right now.

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WoodWitchofSuburbia
#1
Chapter 6: Alrighty, just finished reading everything you have updated so far.

I do want to say that I saw a lot of grammatical mistakes. I'm assuming English probably isn't your first language, so the mistakes are understandable.

I also think that maybe you should focus more on what it is about Eunhwa that Sehun and the rest of the boys like? Right now, we have no reason to really believe the boys have any reason to like her (at least Sehun). It's hard to believe that Sehun would be having these feelings over a girl he knows nothing about and has shared almost no interaction with.

Maybe focus on description more in some areas. Scenes seem to fly by, and they don't give us enough time to really comprehend what's going on. For instance, in the first chapter, describe Sehun's experience in the orphanage. Did he like it there? Was he glad to finally be adopted? Did he have friends at the orphanage? Describe more of his life in the orphanage, give us some background information, help us to learn more about who he is.

Also, I'm not really sure how someone can adopt someone into being their sibling. Adoption only really entails taking on a child as their parent, and it costs a lot of money and filling out lots of paperwork. You can't just go straight into an orphanage and say: I want that one. It's not the same thing as a pound, it doesn't really work that way. If you were to re-write your first chapter, you could use this as a way to talk more about Sehun's experiences at the orphanage while also giving him time to develop feelings for Eunhwa before he's finally adopted by her. That alone will add so much more to your story and allow the readers to empathize with the characters better.

I'd write a longer comment, but AFF won't let me, ha ha! If you have any more questions about what I've said, feel free to message me ~
secretlylovingexo
#2
Chapter 4: Actually there is a mistake on updating the chapter. There should be one more chapter between this and the third chapter. I will fix it later.
Like I mention in the last part of the chap right now Im far away from my laptop so update will be a hard thing for me right now. So please be patient guys. Love you.
MyStarryNight
#3
Chapter 1: Sehun got adopted! Sehun is smart