Welcoming Our Youngest, Sehun

The Crazy Life of Kim Family

“So this is Sehun. The day we found him, fifteen years ago, in front of our door, we got this card with his parents family name. So I believe it will be Oh Sehun. What do you think?” Soon after Sehun goes into the principal's office room, Sehun could heard the principal talk about him as if he’s not there or if he is, it’s like Sehun won’t understand his words.

The noona, look at him from head to toes, with that amazing sparkling eyes.

And even if she got that courteous and elegant smile on her face, Sehun feels nothing but worried.

Sehun's eyes fly to the other corner of the principal’s office out of nervous and found that the noona didn’t come alone.

He saw a boy around his age, walking slowly around the principal’s bookshelf until the noona called on him.

“Kai, honey, come here for a seconds darling!”

The said boy turn around and answered, “Yes, noona.”

When the boy turn around, Sehun can finally see how perfect the boy is. With tanned skin, full-y lips, and the body of a sculpture, the boy makes Sehun thinks that God is real. And she called him 'honey'. Sehun trying not to questioned the feeling he feels inside his belly nor trying to feel it more, because he felt weird either way. He has no idea why.

The boy comes closer to the noona. Too close from Sehun point of view. The boy height is slightly shorter than Sehun and even shorter than the noona. His head is as tall as the noona’s shoulder. The noona wrap his hand around the boy’s shoulder and drag him closer, whispering something to the boy ears. Sehun can’t help but feels a little uncomfortable, again.

After chatting for a while, Sehun could notice that Kai is blushing.

Not too long after that, the noona give him a quick peck on his lips and turn to Sehun and ask something, who’s too confused to pay any attention right now.

“Hello, Sehun-ah....” she called to Sehun who’s started to responding slowly.

“Ahh, yes, yes, I’m sorry, what?” he said that stuttered. He saw a giggles passed through the noona’s y lips.

“I said, would you let me take you in?” she asked once more, and smile warmly.

“W-wha, I-I don’t think I have a said in this...” Sehun is confused.

When some foster parents come and take in a child from this orphanage, they would just take the kids in assuming every kids always want a foster parents. Well, that is true. But they also want to choose the foster parents, but who they are to choose. So most of them stay silent about this.

“Well, now you have.. so would you let me be your sister?” she smile again and this time put her smooth hand against Sehun’s cheek. “If you don’t want me, I won’t force you though...”

Sehun can’t help but feels a little content that this noona let him decide, not take him in just like that.

“I-I....I think if I want a foster parents, or sister in this matter, I would like to have someone like you.” Sehun answered nervously and Sehun feels something in his heart fluttered when he saw a big satisfied grin in the noona’s face after he said that.

He had no idea why, but he feels like he would do anything so he could see that kind of happiness on the noona’s face again.

“Okay, sir! I will take him in!” she turned his head to the principal and said that with a happy face

She starts to talk with the pricipals again about the adoption fee and all the necessary document.

Silently, Sehun left principal office and walk toward to his room. He said goodbye to his friends and trying to find stuffs that he could bring.

After taking all his belonging, which is not that much since all of the goods he use belongs to the orphanage, he goes back to the principal’s office where he saw the noona and the boy is ready to leave and is saying goodbye to the principals.

He did the same, and express his deepest gratitude for the principals who shed a little tears, hug him,  listen to the principal’s last wisdom, and then follow his new family to their car.

As they walk closer to the car, once again, Sehun thinks to himself in awe.

Eventhough he is a child from an orphanage, Sehun is not a fool. He reads tons of book and watch news, entertainment and stuff. So he definitely recognize the car.

Mercedes-Benz S Class.

Typical rich people’s car.

A car to buy if you want to say explicitly to other people that you’re rich. At least that's what Sehun thought.

The car is very expensive, yet classy and elegant.

The price? Ugh, the price is around 230 million USD. Even being a smarty he is, Sehun didn’t dare to try convert it to Korean Won. It would be too much. The numbers is spinning on his head.

How rich is his new sister? He asked that to himself.

And after a while, he shook his head and got into the car.

Well, he will just sit here and preparing his jaw to see her house later.

 

[End of Chapter 1]

 

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WoodWitchofSuburbia
#1
Chapter 6: Alrighty, just finished reading everything you have updated so far.

I do want to say that I saw a lot of grammatical mistakes. I'm assuming English probably isn't your first language, so the mistakes are understandable.

I also think that maybe you should focus more on what it is about Eunhwa that Sehun and the rest of the boys like? Right now, we have no reason to really believe the boys have any reason to like her (at least Sehun). It's hard to believe that Sehun would be having these feelings over a girl he knows nothing about and has shared almost no interaction with.

Maybe focus on description more in some areas. Scenes seem to fly by, and they don't give us enough time to really comprehend what's going on. For instance, in the first chapter, describe Sehun's experience in the orphanage. Did he like it there? Was he glad to finally be adopted? Did he have friends at the orphanage? Describe more of his life in the orphanage, give us some background information, help us to learn more about who he is.

Also, I'm not really sure how someone can adopt someone into being their sibling. Adoption only really entails taking on a child as their parent, and it costs a lot of money and filling out lots of paperwork. You can't just go straight into an orphanage and say: I want that one. It's not the same thing as a pound, it doesn't really work that way. If you were to re-write your first chapter, you could use this as a way to talk more about Sehun's experiences at the orphanage while also giving him time to develop feelings for Eunhwa before he's finally adopted by her. That alone will add so much more to your story and allow the readers to empathize with the characters better.

I'd write a longer comment, but AFF won't let me, ha ha! If you have any more questions about what I've said, feel free to message me ~
secretlylovingexo
#2
Chapter 4: Actually there is a mistake on updating the chapter. There should be one more chapter between this and the third chapter. I will fix it later.
Like I mention in the last part of the chap right now Im far away from my laptop so update will be a hard thing for me right now. So please be patient guys. Love you.
MyStarryNight
#3
Chapter 1: Sehun got adopted! Sehun is smart