Jane and Key

Our Story

~Jane's POV~

My back has been hurting.  I got up and I went to go get some medicine because my back has been hurting so bad.  When I got up is looked at the clock.  I jumped out of bed and I got ready for school.  I ate a banana on my way to school.  Ugh,  I have mid-terms today.  But my goodluck charm will be sitting right next to me.  Key.   I relised that I was just standing on the sidewalk. 

"Unnie,  Thinking about Key again?"  Hoo-Jae.  God,  she really does know everything.  Yena was there too.  I looked around for the boys but they were no where to be seen.

"The boys are already at school.  We just got up"  Yena said. 

"Wait im coming!!"  Yelled Kayla. 

"Oh you guys im going to be with Taemin for the day today because we still have to have the wedding planned out."  Hoo-Jae said blushing.  When we got to school and Hoo-Jae went straight to Taemin and I went straight to first period.

"Someone is late."  Said a voice from behind hugging me and then kissing me on the cheek.  I saw that it was Key.  First I could tell because of the way he smells and because I could see his hair.  Wait,  I dont even know if were going out

"Are we going out?"  I asked.  I really wanna know.  If we are I would be so happy. 

"Yes.  We definetly are.  He said grabbing my hand and holding it.  I smiled and held his hand back.

I am so happy I dont even know what to do. 

Lunch Time

We sat down at the lunch table with Hoo-Jae, Taemin, Kayla, Onew, Navagaye, Jonghyun ,  Yena and Minho.  Taemin and Hoo-Jae were still talking about the wedding that i absolutely cannot wait to attend,  Minho and Yena were talking about their couple rings that they just got.  Onew and Kayla were talking about colthes and what they think that they will wear to the wedding. 

"Yah,  Kwenchana?  Look at this.  This is what you will be wearing.  I picked it out for you." Said Hoo-Jae. 

I saw this really pretty dress and all and I loved it. 

"I love it!" Key and I said at the exact same time.  Haha he is so cute. 

"Hey Jane,  would you like to go shopping with me for a little while later?"  Key asked. 

'Shopping?  Ive never been shopping with a guy before.'  I was thinking with my serious face on.

"Jane"  Whispered Onew.  I looked over and he whispered something in my ear.  Key is the best person to ever go shopping with.  Go and have a good time"  He said.  Now I really want to go.  I turned back to Key.

"Of course I will go"  I said with a smile and Key was smiling a smile from Ear to Ear. 

 

We finished walking around the Seoul Mall and it was SOO much fun.  He got me so many awsome clothes.  I really do love him! 

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K-pop_lover123 #1
Love this story!!!!!:):):)
RaChan #2
that was really really good~ but how could you be such a mean writer and leave it like that~ :O <br />
anywhore, that was great!~
shineegirl1231
#3
O.M.G! I know what you mean now when you said the story was going to be a cliff hanger! Dongsang you have got to make another chapter! The suspense is killing me! I really want to know what happened at the end and what it's supposed to mean! :)
shineegirl1231
#4
Woah I love the chapter!!! It was amazing and Onew's cousin seems so ty!!! But never mind that Great chapter and I cant't wait for the next one to come!! xD
SHINee2Min
#5
Like!!! LOL love your update shineelvr <3 Well i would try to update soon, so lazy -.-
SomedayTomorrow
#6
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!<br />
Have a good one. Please check out my fanfic, The Beautiful Scar-it stars you and Jaejoong~<br />
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Love your display picture ^^<br />
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Awww, Taemin is so cute ^^ KEEKEKEK :) <br />
I wish I had a boyfriend though, BUT THAT GIRL PISSES ME OFF :( <br />
LOLOLO . I would totally love Taemin ^^
lovly39
#7
Chapter 1:<br />
HERE's the correction!<br />
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"I don't care." She said as she started to move closer and closer together until their noses were touching. Then she started to kiss him and he kissed back as I was still standing there frozen, really confused about why this was happening. <br />
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:) GASP! That horrible girl!
lovly39
#8
Okay just make sure to not forget the apostrophys :) <br />
Like for example:<br />
I'm <br />
I'll <br />
Don't<br />
Won't<br />
It's<br />
You're <br />
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AND SO ON SO FORTH~ I think you're really good at grammar and I don't see any spelling errors so far :) You just sometimes forget to make ill into I'll ^.^ Which I won't lie...I do it myself lol xD<br />
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So yeah I don't know why you asked me to do this cause you really don't need it lol
lovly39
#9
Chapter 1: (like almost half way through)<br />
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"Hoojae"I turned and looked at him curiously "You don't have to bring money because as part of your anniversary present im going to buy your ticket." He said innocently with his beautiful smile on his face<br />
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Put a space between the " and I at the beginning~And change "im" to I'm :)