Her Soul Is In Her Body?

Our Story

"Hey wait!!!"  I heard the girl scream as I also heard her heals clanking as they hit the floor when she ran chasing after us.  We kept walking away ignoring her.  She seemed kind of wierd.  "Hoo-Jae unnie!!!  Please wait!"  She screamed.  I stopped walking and turned around. 

"Excuse me but do we know each other?"  I asked as we were facing each other.  How do I know her?

"Yes we do know each other.  We were VERY close to each other.  We ate together,  We talked boys with each other,  and we even shared the same bed before,  I have lived with you and Yena.  I was also very close to Seunghyun but you didnt want me to be because you were going out with him.  When  you two broke up and when you were crying and screaming in your pillow at night I would come in and comfort you.  I was your bestfriend.  Until the accident happened.  The car accident."  Wait.  What does she mean by all of this.  How would she know all of this.  "I even know about the scar you have on your back that your dad gave you and you tell everyone you were in an accident.  Im back.  Just a different shape and form.  Im me,  Jane."  She said.  Really?  It really is her!!!  It really is!!!  I hugged her so hard.  I was also in tears because she talked about Seunghyun.  I havnt heard that name in forever. 

We all went back to my house and Jane explained everything to everyone.  I was still in tears.  Taemin kept glancing at me and asking if I were okay.  I would answer back that I was fine.  Until I said I wasnt. 

"Excuse me but I need to talk to Hoo-Jae alone." Said Taemin grabbing my hand and taking me into the other room. 

"Why do you keep crying.  Seeing you cry makes me upset.  Are you crying because she mentioned Seunghyun?"  He asked.  I nodded.  He wipped my tears away and kissed me on the forhead.  I know he isnt asking me to forget about him.  I love him.

"He said "I love you", He gave me happiness but I didnt love him anymore.  Because of him, even though I dont shed many tears it feels like im screaming inside.  He was the reason of the huge scar on my back.  He came in my room and took me to his house while I was asleep and just had me sleep there.  When he took me back home in the morning that is when I got this scar.  My dad took a knife and sliced my back.  Thats why I live with Yena.  I got abused evey day because I was the daughter he didnt want.  He loved Yena and she was his favorite.  Your the only one that I feel safe around.  I love you."  I said crying after.

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K-pop_lover123 #1
Love this story!!!!!:):):)
RaChan #2
that was really really good~ but how could you be such a mean writer and leave it like that~ :O <br />
anywhore, that was great!~
shineegirl1231
#3
O.M.G! I know what you mean now when you said the story was going to be a cliff hanger! Dongsang you have got to make another chapter! The suspense is killing me! I really want to know what happened at the end and what it's supposed to mean! :)
shineegirl1231
#4
Woah I love the chapter!!! It was amazing and Onew's cousin seems so ty!!! But never mind that Great chapter and I cant't wait for the next one to come!! xD
SHINee2Min
#5
Like!!! LOL love your update shineelvr <3 Well i would try to update soon, so lazy -.-
SomedayTomorrow
#6
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!<br />
Have a good one. Please check out my fanfic, The Beautiful Scar-it stars you and Jaejoong~<br />
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Love your display picture ^^<br />
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Awww, Taemin is so cute ^^ KEEKEKEK :) <br />
I wish I had a boyfriend though, BUT THAT GIRL PISSES ME OFF :( <br />
LOLOLO . I would totally love Taemin ^^
lovly39
#7
Chapter 1:<br />
HERE's the correction!<br />
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"I don't care." She said as she started to move closer and closer together until their noses were touching. Then she started to kiss him and he kissed back as I was still standing there frozen, really confused about why this was happening. <br />
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:) GASP! That horrible girl!
lovly39
#8
Okay just make sure to not forget the apostrophys :) <br />
Like for example:<br />
I'm <br />
I'll <br />
Don't<br />
Won't<br />
It's<br />
You're <br />
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AND SO ON SO FORTH~ I think you're really good at grammar and I don't see any spelling errors so far :) You just sometimes forget to make ill into I'll ^.^ Which I won't lie...I do it myself lol xD<br />
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So yeah I don't know why you asked me to do this cause you really don't need it lol
lovly39
#9
Chapter 1: (like almost half way through)<br />
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"Hoojae"I turned and looked at him curiously "You don't have to bring money because as part of your anniversary present im going to buy your ticket." He said innocently with his beautiful smile on his face<br />
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Put a space between the " and I at the beginning~And change "im" to I'm :)