Happiness:)

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"I love you too Hoo-jae.  I always will don't EVER forget that."  Taemin said rubbing the tears away from my face with his thumbs. 

We went back to the other room where we sat back down.  We noticed that Yena knew what was going on and she finally looked alive again.  Shes smiling and not pale.  Im happy that everything is now back to normal.  I was holding Taemins hand and Minhos arm was around Yenas shoulders and everyone else was having a blast. 

"Jane,  How exactly did you come back to life."  I asked.  I didnt know it was possible.

"That im not sure of.  When I was in the hospital,  the reasin i "died" is because my soul just went to someone else's body.  And I relised that I had my love waiting for me.  I like Key."  Jane said.  Awwww.  Now Key isnt all lonely.

~The next day~

-Taemin's POV-

"Hyung, what are we doing here?"  Key asked as we walked into a jewlery store. 

"Nothing.  I wanna get Hoo-Jae something for her.  Thats it."  I lied.  No one knows whats going on until they find out later.  hahaha

I picked up the special gift later on and wondering how i should give it to her. 

I mean we have been together for 2 years now.  Why am I so nervous?

-2 Hours Later back at home-

Okay I think its time now. 

"Everyone come in here I have a special announcment."  I said as they all started piling on the couch's around me.  I told Hoo-Jae to stand up and get in front of me but not that close a couple feet away from me.  I snapped and a huge cart of 2 dishes with covers came in with a waiter pushing it.  Candles were lit and everything.    It was better than I expected.

I looked at Hoo-Jae and then took the cover off the first plate and grabbed the ring box.  I opened it and grabbed a rock. 

-Hoo-Jaes POV-

I see a ring box and when he opened it I saw a rock.  I just stood there.  'Are you kidding me?' I thought.  He put the Rock in my hand and said

"Dont worry thats just the appetizer."  What does he mean by this?  He took the top off of the second plate and grabbed the second ring box and opened it.  As he opened it he got on one knee.  And I saw a ring. 

"Will you be my wife?"  He asked.  I felt tears coming up and heard gasps.  I nodded and after he put the ring on my finger he hugged me then we kissed.  Forgetting everyone was in the room.  But I didnt care.  He is my fiance.  Mine forever.  I looked over and saw Yena crying and coming over to give me a hug because she was so happy. 

 

 

 

Authors note:

Thank you everyone for supporting me on this story.  Only 3 chapters left:(  I hope you enjoy it:) 

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K-pop_lover123 #1
Love this story!!!!!:):):)
RaChan #2
that was really really good~ but how could you be such a mean writer and leave it like that~ :O <br />
anywhore, that was great!~
shineegirl1231
#3
O.M.G! I know what you mean now when you said the story was going to be a cliff hanger! Dongsang you have got to make another chapter! The suspense is killing me! I really want to know what happened at the end and what it's supposed to mean! :)
shineegirl1231
#4
Woah I love the chapter!!! It was amazing and Onew's cousin seems so ty!!! But never mind that Great chapter and I cant't wait for the next one to come!! xD
SHINee2Min
#5
Like!!! LOL love your update shineelvr <3 Well i would try to update soon, so lazy -.-
SomedayTomorrow
#6
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!<br />
Have a good one. Please check out my fanfic, The Beautiful Scar-it stars you and Jaejoong~<br />
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Love your display picture ^^<br />
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Awww, Taemin is so cute ^^ KEEKEKEK :) <br />
I wish I had a boyfriend though, BUT THAT GIRL PISSES ME OFF :( <br />
LOLOLO . I would totally love Taemin ^^
lovly39
#7
Chapter 1:<br />
HERE's the correction!<br />
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"I don't care." She said as she started to move closer and closer together until their noses were touching. Then she started to kiss him and he kissed back as I was still standing there frozen, really confused about why this was happening. <br />
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:) GASP! That horrible girl!
lovly39
#8
Okay just make sure to not forget the apostrophys :) <br />
Like for example:<br />
I'm <br />
I'll <br />
Don't<br />
Won't<br />
It's<br />
You're <br />
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AND SO ON SO FORTH~ I think you're really good at grammar and I don't see any spelling errors so far :) You just sometimes forget to make ill into I'll ^.^ Which I won't lie...I do it myself lol xD<br />
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So yeah I don't know why you asked me to do this cause you really don't need it lol
lovly39
#9
Chapter 1: (like almost half way through)<br />
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"Hoojae"I turned and looked at him curiously "You don't have to bring money because as part of your anniversary present im going to buy your ticket." He said innocently with his beautiful smile on his face<br />
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Put a space between the " and I at the beginning~And change "im" to I'm :)