Part 3 - preview 2

Chances

Sungmin nodded,‭ ‬loving the sound of his lover‭’‬s heart beating frantically under his ear,‭ ‬from fear or excitement,‭ ‬he didn‭’‬t know.‭ “‬Kyu,‭ ‬how is your hyung‭? ‬He looked broken when we were leaving,‭”‬ he whispered,‭ ‬staring on the television,‭ ‬even thought he didn‭’‬t really pay attention to it.‭ ‬He was glad for them having their time alone just for each other,‭ ‬still he couldn‭’‬t help the thought about what had happened at the party to come to him once in a while.‭ ‬He hadn‭’‬t seen Hyukjae since then too.


‭“He’s better,” Kyuhyun sighed, wondering if if he was studying psychology he would be also able to see through Jongwoon so easily; if he would be able to help him better. “At least he stopped pretending that he’s okay.”


Sungmin wanted to answer but instead he gasped loudly when long slim fingers sneaked under his T-shirt,‭ ‬caressing the skin of his back gently as if he could fade if he was touched more.‭ “‬Kyu‭?”‬ his breath hitched in his throat from the sensation.

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A/N: and because today is the day before Zhoumi's and Himchan's b-day and it's exactly two weeks since the first preview, here is the second. are you looking forward to the whole part next week? hope you do, my loves. and pleaaaaase, i beg you, give me a comment or something TT TT a short one is enough, i just need a bit of beedback and support.

A/N2: the 4th part is such a fail TT TT i can't write well and am not even in the 1/3 of it but since i promised to give you the 3rd part, i can't take it back now. please be with me and wait for me and the final part a bit, i'll work hard to make it better and quicker <3 i love you, thank you :333

A/N3: still don't have the poster for this part. Awaki~ palli~ lol no, take your time, dear :))

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novitan
#1
Chapter 16: This story is just so sad and intense. So.. In the end eunhae and yewook together, sungmin together with henry, and kyu start new life in china with his roommate(who I guess is zhoumi)? Not really like it but the story itself is good so... Good job I guess ^^
Elsweyr
#2
<3
kfanatic #3
I like the story a little to much pain, but very realistic. I just wish kyumin had stayed together:'(.
simbasheart #4
*sobbinghard* broken kyumin?? :((
i really enjoyed reading dis but the last part broke my heart :((((
sequel pls?? ;AAA; *begs*
saranghamnida3 #5
Hated Kyuhyun here... It's actually his faul cause he's stupid.why would he have ___ of all things... Henry is a good guy... I'm actually glad sungmin didn't accept kyu anymore... But I'm still a kyumin fan very much except for his fix.. Kekeke nice job! :D
LaLLorona
#6
I did not expect this... I am shocked :D Kyumin is broke at the end? I dont know how I'm going to get over from this.. Ahahha,nice story!!!!
SunaoTeam #7
that's good. it means the end worked ^^ yeey y black-haired 6jib Hyukjae!
you're talking about me here babe, you know how i am at school. i WILL have to study >.<
too bad. they're not gonna have baby even if i went crazy and wrote a happy end for them. it's one of the ends i hate the most.
Dena1a
#8
yeah you kinda did, a person forgets all of the torture they've been through after reading that fluff and the change of color xD
okay, i guess it's a bit different kind of angst in the school xD but still a torture. doesn't matter, you won't need much knowledge from previous classes, it was never necessary and i don't think you will need it ;) or at least you have to hope xD
no baby for them? ;A; that sure is sad xD
SunaoTeam #9
that's good. i almost thought you just missed it. hope i saved you poor eunhae heart after all the torture :D (lol fangirling :D)
thanks, i didn't write on plane :DD but even though school IS pure angst, i'm not sure if it's the right type of angst for layhan, lol :D and hey, i'll have to start study a bit. forgot everything already :D
i know, thanks ^^
lol yeah, it sounded wrong :DD no baby for the two of them :DDD
Dena1a
#10
yeah i know, it just striked me since it was used a lot in the anime and i loved that anime so i remember..I DID! and i wanted to comment on that but then got second thoughts because i wasn't a hundred percent sure about his color at the end of the last part ;A; but i noticed, stopped reading and enjoyed the change and what it meant (yeah, and a bit of fangirling maybe appeared too xD)
i'm not forcing you to start writing it on the plane ok xD i'm sure you'll find enough time for that in chemistry/georaphy/whatever subject you don't need to pay attention to in school ;) or at home if you won't have the best athmosphere for angst in the lessons (but come on, school is pure angst xD)
yeah, more real the better xD
good, it's nice when you appreciate you work ;)
that's easy! you're gonna make another baby with luhan and yixing! (i know how wrong it sounds but you know what i mean xD)