Part 1 - preview

Chances

Sungmin was still too shocked to really care if his friend shout at him or talk to him informally. „The guy I like. We met today. He told me he knew I was watching him.“

Hyukjae laughed on the other side of the line, glad it wasn’t  anything bad. „Wow, hyung, you finally introduced himself to him?“ he whistled loudly. „And shouldn’t you be happy he knew about you? You know at least you’re not that much of strangers now…“

„No, Hyuk,“ Sungmin shook his head slowly, „he introduced himself to me. He came telling me I was a stalker but he doesn’t mind because it’s ‚a good distraction‘ when I come to their starting-to-be-boring class. He’s such an , Hyuk. Do you know how I felt hearing this all from the first person on this planet I fell in love with?“ he suddenly felt a tears of hurt and anger flow down his cheeks. „I hate him so much,“ he sobbed weakly, wiping his eyes half-heartedly.

Hyukjae sighed. „Don’t say it, hyung. You’re just hurt now. Calm down and don’t do anything you could regret later, okay?“  He tried to sound sensibly but in fact he could imagine how Sungmin felt pretty well. He himself was in love with someone who didn’t mind to at least turn him down if not accept his feelings. „Wanna go out tonight?“

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A/N: so yeah, here it is. a little preview for the first chapter. i originally wanted to post it tomorrow but after writing a part in 2nd chapter I felt like showing you guys today ^^ hope you like it and if my english , i'm sorry, it's getting worse and worse here in japan since i'm not really using it much except for fanfics..

the whole 1st chapter will be uploaded as soon as I finish the 2nd. there's not much left, so please wait a bit more for it! :)))))

A/N 2: i'm from Czech and we have this thing: "" like first down, second up and i'm really not in mood for rewriting whole fic just to have both up, so please try to get used to it, it'll be easier for all of us... thank you ^^

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novitan
#1
Chapter 16: This story is just so sad and intense. So.. In the end eunhae and yewook together, sungmin together with henry, and kyu start new life in china with his roommate(who I guess is zhoumi)? Not really like it but the story itself is good so... Good job I guess ^^
Elsweyr
#2
<3
kfanatic #3
I like the story a little to much pain, but very realistic. I just wish kyumin had stayed together:'(.
simbasheart #4
*sobbinghard* broken kyumin?? :((
i really enjoyed reading dis but the last part broke my heart :((((
sequel pls?? ;AAA; *begs*
saranghamnida3 #5
Hated Kyuhyun here... It's actually his faul cause he's stupid.why would he have ___ of all things... Henry is a good guy... I'm actually glad sungmin didn't accept kyu anymore... But I'm still a kyumin fan very much except for his fix.. Kekeke nice job! :D
LaLLorona
#6
I did not expect this... I am shocked :D Kyumin is broke at the end? I dont know how I'm going to get over from this.. Ahahha,nice story!!!!
SunaoTeam #7
that's good. it means the end worked ^^ yeey y black-haired 6jib Hyukjae!
you're talking about me here babe, you know how i am at school. i WILL have to study >.<
too bad. they're not gonna have baby even if i went crazy and wrote a happy end for them. it's one of the ends i hate the most.
Dena1a
#8
yeah you kinda did, a person forgets all of the torture they've been through after reading that fluff and the change of color xD
okay, i guess it's a bit different kind of angst in the school xD but still a torture. doesn't matter, you won't need much knowledge from previous classes, it was never necessary and i don't think you will need it ;) or at least you have to hope xD
no baby for them? ;A; that sure is sad xD
SunaoTeam #9
that's good. i almost thought you just missed it. hope i saved you poor eunhae heart after all the torture :D (lol fangirling :D)
thanks, i didn't write on plane :DD but even though school IS pure angst, i'm not sure if it's the right type of angst for layhan, lol :D and hey, i'll have to start study a bit. forgot everything already :D
i know, thanks ^^
lol yeah, it sounded wrong :DD no baby for the two of them :DDD
Dena1a
#10
yeah i know, it just striked me since it was used a lot in the anime and i loved that anime so i remember..I DID! and i wanted to comment on that but then got second thoughts because i wasn't a hundred percent sure about his color at the end of the last part ;A; but i noticed, stopped reading and enjoyed the change and what it meant (yeah, and a bit of fangirling maybe appeared too xD)
i'm not forcing you to start writing it on the plane ok xD i'm sure you'll find enough time for that in chemistry/georaphy/whatever subject you don't need to pay attention to in school ;) or at home if you won't have the best athmosphere for angst in the lessons (but come on, school is pure angst xD)
yeah, more real the better xD
good, it's nice when you appreciate you work ;)
that's easy! you're gonna make another baby with luhan and yixing! (i know how wrong it sounds but you know what i mean xD)