Two 'Black Tie' man!

Black Tie

 

SORRY, because few hours ago I was in hurry to go to My english course so I didn't have time to edit this chapter. Now I just came home and when I read this chapter one more time I found few wrong words so I'll edit it now. SO SORRY because I double update. sorry sorry sorry! >_<

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Flashback

 

                      Seunghyun leaned against the wall surface as he was playing with a pistol he held. He wore a black suit and black tie with a knife symbol underneath . He looked out the window. A cigarette clamped between his pale lip. He looked at 'her'. The girl who had been noticed by him was pacing outside of his appartement (for him, his work room felt like his own house or apartment. Because there had anything he need). Indeed there was no suspicious movement from her, but Seunghyun wouldn't be fooled. He knew if she wasn't an ordinary girl. The girl must has been spying on his organization. Seunghyun pulled out his phone from the table before pressed a few buttons and talk to someone across there, "search about the long black-haired girl who's pacing in front of this building”, he commanded, threw his cigarette to the floor and stepped on it with his shoes.

              After the phone hang up he looked at outside back, and he just realized if there was  a blonde haired girl with the long black haired girl. He raised an eyebrow, ‘so it isn’t just one person huh?’, he thought 

             Waiting until two hours finally the door knocked, someone with black sunglasses came in. He bowed before said “it looks like here’s has two spy boss. Two girls, one with long black hair like you said and another with blonde hair”.

“ like I thought hm?”, Seunghyun raised an eyebrow.

“ so boss, what should we do now? Should we to-“

“ no need, leave it to me. Its more easy for me. Hey they are just a girl you know”, he smirked.

“now get out and take care of our plan tonight”, he added.

“ I understand”, then the sunglasses man bowed again and left the room.

          Seunghyun wallked to the big window one more time, looking at any directions to find two girls was laying on his favorite and expensive grass. He smirked as he took his black tie and his suits off before walked out of his room.

          Minutes later he saw the long black haired girl still laying on his soft grass. Her blonde friend was walking away a minute ago. When he walked nearer he just realized if he ever saw her before. ‘oh!’, he thought. ‘isn’t she the one that I saw at the exhibition building Shinkonshi?’. He smirked, let out an ‘it looked more interesting’ thought before sat on the grass before her, making a small thump.

( because I am a diligent lazy author, just Lets skip to when park bom walking away, lol )

           He saw her walked away with a grumble and he smirked. She wanted to meet him tomorrow it means he was success wasn’t he?. Oh Come on, when he ever failed to make a girl has a crush on him huh. Never right?. So like he said before it was so easy for him to clear this. She was so cute, y and beautiful but she was unlucky because she has to deal with him. Poor baby girl.

End of Flashback

 

 


 

 

Bom’s POV

 

“ah. I don’t know why but it feels like I ever met him before”, I laying on my and chaerin’s bed. I was imagining the black haired boy that I have met before and it felt like I ever met him, but when and who?.

                                                    I glanced at my right side to see a blondie girl Chaerin fell asleep next  to me. She looked so tired. I sighed before I felt my rumbling stomach.

                                                    ‘omo I’m hungry...’, I got up from bed, walking to the small kitchen and tried to find something that I could eat. But there was nothing. I let out a deep sigh and glanced at a small watch on the table. At 10:00 pm. I thought about the small market not far from there usually  still opened right?. With hurry steps I walked to Dara’s and Minzy’s room and found Sandara park was typing on her laptop while Minzy seemed fell asleep on the bed like Chaerin did.

                With a big smile I skipping to Dara and whined like a baby child, “ Dara-ahhh~ ”.

 

 


 

 

Dara’s POV

 

“ Dara-ahhh~”, Bom was whining as she poked my shoulder again and again.

“ omo, what do you want Bom?”, I chuckled, Poking her shoulder harder than her poke to me.

“ ouch!”, she ouched, rubbing her shoulder.

                               I grinned before turned back to see my laptop, I used a glasses on my nose. When I began to typing back I could feel Bom poking my shoulder for the hundred times.

“ Daraa-aahh.... come on just go out to buy corn chips with me. Just twenty... no, just ten minutes pleaseee....?”, Bom whinned like a cry baby.

“ Not now Bom, I’m busy. Just ask chae or Minji”, I glanced at her.

“ Minji and Chae already sleep, they looks so tired. I don’t want to wake them up you know”, she said as I glanced at the sleeping baby Minji on the bed and sighed.

“ fine fine come on buy something but promise you’ll help me to clear this problem”, I pointed at my laptop screen to see her furrowed her eyebrows.

“ problem what?”, she asked.

“ our case”, I answered.

    Park Bom then nodded, “ oh okay then”.

                                                                             I smiled as I took off my glasses before stood up and walked to the door, grabbing my yellow jacket behind it. “ come on Bom. And oh don’t forget to treat me something kay?”.

“ neh neh”

                 I chuckled while I heard her grumbles behind me. We both walked out of the apartment and of course didn’t forget to lock the automatic door with our pass card. We walked to the elevator, while we were waiting until the elevator door opened I took the time to glance at Bom, realizing about something.

“ you didn’t change your shirt did you?”, I asked as I observased her clothes from top to bottom. white short shirt with black pants.

“ehe”, she grinned with a pink tint on her cheeks.

“ aish bommie”, I chuckled as the elevator door was finally opened.

                                                     It didn’t take much time until we arrived at a small and a famous market, ‘Piddie Piddie Market’. I knew if the market was small but it was the one of the famous market in Seoul. I just didn’t know why the owner never wanted to decorate the market. It would make the market better wouldn’t it?.

“Dara-ah!”, Bom’s shout made me up from my thought , I turned to facing her.

“ ne bommie? ”

“ do you know where they saved my favorite corn chips?”, she asked me.

“aigo, like I know bom. Just ask the shopkeeper”, I rolled my eyes.

                                                  She huffed and turned around to ask the shopkeeper until we heard a scream of someone. With reflex we ran to the voice and found the shopkeeper sat on the floor with her hands up. I lifted my head up to see two black dressed man stood with a handgun on their palms. And I swore I could hear Bom wispered something,

“.....back tie?”

 


 

 

Bom’s POV

 

“......black tie?”, I couldn’t help but shocked, my eyes were bluging.

                                      I just stood on there like a stone until I felt a hand pulled me away to hide behind a food shelf. I glanced to see the owner, Dara. She put her index finger on her lips to code me ‘don’t make any voices’ or ‘shht’.

                                     I nodded slightly and looked at the ‘incident’ back. The shopkeeper began to crying in fear. The first black dressed man pointed his handgun at her and the other seemed trying to open a money storage.

“  miss, please just tell us the code and you’ll  be save”, the first man began to ask.

        The shopkeepers mouth still closed.

“ miss I told you, just tell us the code and we’ll let you still alive but if you don’t you’ll die right now. So just choose it miss, you tell and you alive or you don’t tell and you die”

‘ DON’T TELL!’, I screamed in my thought.

                                       I remembered about one lesson that I’ve ever learn at my white academy. The tactics that always be used by criminals.

  1. He/she would make you in fear.
  2. He/she would ask you two question. “ tell me and I’ll let you alive but If you don’t I’ll take your life”
  3. NEVER BELIEVE what he/she said, because that was just the first tactic to make their action easier. And the result was just two.

  

ONE :

        You told them, They got the code, and They STILL KILLED you.

 TWO :

                          You didn’t tell them, They KILLED you, and then they would try the second tactic. “Try to open the money box by themself. And they could open the box or not it Italldepends ontheirability”

           4. So your result just one, YOU DEAD.

 

“ miss please anwer us. You know how hurt if I shoot your temple with this handgun aren’t you?”, The first man touched the end of his gun on her tempe.

      I could see her hands were trembling.

“ I will start counting from one until three, if you keep your mouth shut then I’ll shoot you”, he began to threaten her.

   The shopkeeper gulped.

“ one...”

   Silent,  the second man stopped and looked at the both before him.

“ two...”

   Still silent, the second man looked at the shopkeeper with a smirk.

“ you know how it feels,  when he shoots you, a bullet will penetrate your head, make a hole to  your tempe, make a hole on your brain, will cuts off your blood vessels and  your arteries. Make your head bleeding, and you’ll feel the pain until you run out of blood in your body. And make it worse you know who we are don’t you?”, the second man show his blacktie symbol on his tie.

   Her crying harder and she gulped so many times.

“ now girl, is all up to you”, the second man winkled at the shopkeeper and saw his mate smirked at him.

“ now Iet me continue my counting”, the first man chuckled.

“ thr-“

“ FINE! FINE! I’LL TELL YOU! I’LL TELL YOU!”, the shopkeeper finally screamed in depressed.

                                                                             ‘Oh crap!’, I cursed to myself when I saw the both criminals grinned at the cry woman.  I could feel Dara’s grab on me thighened.

“ The... the code is 30177265”, she whispered.

“ Talk It Loudly you !”, the first man shouted.

“ f...fin..fine....”, she gulped. “30177265

                                                          I glanced at Dara and whispered to her something without voices, “Dara. We should do something!. They will kill her!”.

“ I know I know, just let me think!”, she yelled without voices.

                                                          I looked at them back to find the second man tried to type the code. And I remembered about something, I still used my Mindly Watch!. Then with my Mindly Watch that Dara had given to me I pressed the help screen button and sent it to Chaerin and Minzy. I still looked at my Mindly watch until I heard a loud crash voice was not far beside me. I turned to find Dara threw a bottle to the window until it crashed into pieces.

                                                          My eyes widened, “What had you done!”, I yelled in low voice at her and felt one of the both criminals began to walk toward where us was hiding.

“I'll take care of that one, you take care of the other. don't let him shoot the shopkeeper!", she commanded me.

“oh. I got it!”, I jogged to the other food shelf slowly, trying to make the second man wasn’t aware of my existence.

                                                          At the end of the shelf I peeked to see the first man was looking at his mate with pale expression. ‘Scared huh?’, I smirked. I could see his gun still pointed at the girl beside him. Few seconds later I could hear a loud BANG behind me, I knew what happened so I didn’t really care. I found the first man jaw thightened as he began to walk to the place where his mate was.

‘ Now’s the time! ’

                                                            I got out of my hiding place to catch him, with full of speed I  pulled his right hand, threw his handgun as far as possible until it was spinning on the floor. Then I slammed him to the floor, making the same sound as I heard before.

“ The heck!”, he cursed in pain.

                                                             I glanced at the shopkeeper and  shouted, “Hurry up! Get out from here and call polices as fast as possible!”

                                                            I saw her nodded before she ran away of here. And from the window I could see Dara Ran to catch the second man that ran away from a big hole in the window. ‘ he is running away!’. I cursed. And stupid me, I was too focus to those two until someone pushed me away. I realized the first blacktie man stood up before me.

“ oh my god. You just a girl?”, his eyes rounded. “But, How dare you to ruin our plan!”, he shouted and grabbed my wrist. I ouched before I grabbed his arm, trying to slam him onto the floor back but this time I failed. He pulled me and slammed me to the wall, I swore I could hear few cracks sound inside my body, especially my back.

                                                               I glanced at him and realized if he was eyeing something. I looked at his view and found his handgun!. Oh crap!. With full of speed I ran toward it but he pulled me away. When the man wanted to grab the handgun I kicked it until it rolled away.

“ what the ing girl you are!”, he cursed as he tried to hit me, I grabbed his wrist and kicked his waist, making him groaned in pain.

                  When  I began to ran back the ing man grabbed my ankle, making me fell onto the floor with a loud thump. I cried in pain as my face hit the floor. I raised to position of sitting and felt fresh bloods was coming out from my nostril.

                                         I gasped when I saw him began to reach the handgun for the second time, and that was when I realized about something. I was still in my last clothes so that was mean the small gun that Chaerin had given to me this morning still behind my shirt! I touched the back of my waist and found the small gun! Oh thanks god!.

                                         As fast as possible I reached out the small gun and pointed to him as his hand just few inches again from the handgun.

“ YOU! don’t touch the handgun and lift your hands up or I’ll shoot you”, I warned him as he looked at me with oh so wide eyes.

“ I. Told. You”, my grab on my small gun thightened. “don’t touch the handgun or I’ll shoot you. lift your hands up, Now!”, I shouted.

                                                                             Finally he raised his hands up, with oh so wide eyes he looked at me. I could feel my nose still bleeding but I didn’t really care. That I must did was waiting until the polices came and helping Dara to catch the other one. I still felt the extremly pains on my back and my legs so I couldn’t help but still sat on the floor. But I didn’t show him that I couln’t stand up because if he knew he must killed in a very quick time.

“ walking here. Slowly. Don’t do anything or I’ll kill you”, I warned back as he began to walking closer to me.

                                                                             I bit my bottom lip, I didn’t know what should I do later. My legs and my back so weak and pains, I even could feel the sweet taste from my blood of my bleeding nose. Suddenly I heard a familiar voice screamed wasn’t far at outside. I knew the voice so much!.

“DARA!?”, I shocked as I turned to look at my door.

                                                                             And I just realized that was the stupiest thing that I ever did. The man before me ran to grab his handgun. And when I turned to facing him he already pointed his handgun at me. My eyes widened, I swore I would be killed if someone didn’t shoot him from behind me right on his chest. The blacktie person fell onto the floor with wide eyes. His white shirt became red because his blood. His handgun fell beside him. And that was time I knew if he..... dead.

“ Bom you okay!”, someone hugged me from behind. Hugged me so thightly until I could feel more pain on my back.

“ Ouch!”, I cried before the person looseness the hug.

“ oh sorry, you okay?”, he asked.

                                                                             I turned to find a dark orange haired boy, Kwon jiyong, sat behind me. He wore a red jacket and long jins. His handgun laying on the floor beside him, or I could say, beside us. He looked at me- oh wrong, he looked at my bleeding nose with wide eyes.

“ Bom your nose bleeding!”, he said in worried.

“ Jiyong? Why you here?”, I asked but he didn’t listen my ask. He command me to sit on the shopkeeper chair then he walked around to find few things. One minute later he walked back to me with few things to take care of my wound, to stop my bleeding nose.

“ Jiyong, what are you doing here?”, I asked him for the second time.

“ Minji and Chaerin told me if you guys in trouble so we came here”, he answered as he was wiping my blood stains on my neck.

we?”, I furrowed my eyebrows.

“ ne, me and Taeyang”

“ so where’s him? And where’s Minji  and Chae?”, I asked before my eyes widened in shock.

“ oh I forget! Dara! I heard Dara’s scream! I must saved her!”, I yelled as I stood up, but my oh so weak legs forced me to sat back on the chair.

“ Don’t worry noona, I believe those three will save her”, he said with a calm tone

“but-“, and that time I could hear the sirens of polices cars nearer.

“ BOMMIE!!”, someone yelled I couldn’t help but turned my head to facing a so worried blonde girl ran toward me.

“Chae?”, I whispered.

“ Bommie! You okay!?”, Chae then hugged me so thightly, thighter than Jiyong’s hug.

“ YAH!”, I screamed in pain, then she pulled away herself from mine.

“you okay unnie. Oh god you are bleeding”, she looked at my white –and half was red because blood- shirt with worry eyes.

“ I’m okay chae. But where’s the others?”, I asked.

                                                                             I didn’t need her anwer because two seconds later five figures came into the market. Minji, Youngbae, and Dara on his hands walked toward us. Two polices also came in to catch the poor dead body.

“ Dara! You okay?”, I asked.

“ Don’t worry Bom. I’m okay”, she answered.

“ nothing happened to you right?. And how about the blacktie man?”, I asked back, didn’t really care about those pain inside my body, and didn’t really care about Jiyong who took care of those hurted parts on my body.

“ don’t worry. He had caught”

“ is he still alive or-“

“ he still alive Bom, don’t worry”, she showed me a joy smile plastered on her face.

           I sighed in relief,

“ so, what happened to you?. Why you screamed before?”, I asked her for the fourth time.

“ oh that. That was because-“

 



 

 

That was because...........?

Because what?

Oh lol I feel so evil because I always cut on important parts. But don’t worry, I’ll make it clear at the next chapter.

How about the fighting scenes? This is my first time to write about fighting scenes but I still feel at this. Sorry if it is so bored. Sorry.

 

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flyingdimples
#1
Chapter 8: top's banana at the end makes me so done with my life XD
robertahappy #2
I luv stories like these >.<, but i'm not good at writting them. This is really interesting :))))
violetgreen
#3
Omg Bom..i thought you are the excited one,,but you sleep..LOL!!
hmm,i bet the man is Seunghyun..ba-na-na..wtf!lol
kwonarra #4
woah.. i bet that's jiyong right?? :D
ahhh gbom moment soon!!! >< ><
is top know who is park bom??
and who kill bom's parent?? top or top's parents ekekkekek... :D
i hope you can get time to update >< ><
Yoseobhasmyheart
#5
GBOM! I'm actually a Daragon, but in this story, GO GBOM! kekeke
Update soon please! <3
gjie2cute #6
I love this so much
icegirl #7
oo i like the concept of the story ! cant wait to read wats next! i also hope its a gbom ending :D hehehe, anyways good luck with school and everything :)
iheartGBom
#8
Kyahh~~
GBom Hwaiting!! :)