Annoying

MINE IS MINE

AUTHOR'S POV

 

After bomi's confession . Chorong becomes more careful on the things she does

 

But it was opposite on bomi's . As day passed by . bomi become more annoying well as chorong thought so . she keeps on irritating her that sometime chorong cant help but to curse

 

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Chorong was way too close to beat her previous record , focusing on the game she is getting addicted to . she kinda not paying much attention to her surroundings that she did'nt notice bomi who is tiptoing behind her

 

Chorong's lips was turning upwards . her fingers touching her phone is getting faster and faster . Getting close to reach her victory , she was about to beat it real close when

 

" BOOOYYAHHH ! " 

 

bomi scream infront of chorong's ear that it made chorong jump and curse in surprised

 

 

 

" OMO !!!   ! " she hissed 

 

 

" MUAHAHAHAHHA !!! " 

 

 

chorong immediately looks at her phone , seeing the words displayed on the screen saying '  GAME OVER ' , Chorong's blood started to boil in no time . Her eyes were getting teary in annoyance,  Just a little bit more , she's supposed to beat her previous record which is 5 points lesser than the previous one . 

 

 

Bomi continued to laugh that it hurts her stomach so much , while chorong's eyes turn into fiercing one . glaring at the phone , looks away and shot a glare to bomi instead

 

 

Bomi's eyes were getting teary from all the laughing , She find chorong's reaction precious at the same time hilarious  , she clench her stomach and looks at the glaring chorong

 

 

She immediately choke on her saliva  seeing chorong's murderous glare

 

 

*cough!* *cough!*

 

Chorong looks so scary with her teary eyes , glaring with her freakin serious face . It freak bomi out

 

 

*Gulp*

 

 

" heheheheh ~ " bomi try her best to give a  fake eye smile

 

 

She witnessed how chorong grip into her phone tightly to the fact that she threw her phone on the coach harshly

 

 

"h-hey , its j-just a game . ch-chill " she gulp , looking at the phone then back at chorong

 

 

 

" o-okay look , im .... sorry " she step backwards until her back hits the wall

 

 

 

" what the actual was that ? you think its funny huh ?" she hissed , getting near to bomi who is readying herself to save her precious life

 

 

" anni . i thought y-you were d-doing n-nothing . so i-yeah? " she stuttered cutely though she's scared to death she still grin at chorong

 

 

" im doing GREAT not until you came and scream your off on me ! " she shouted , gritting her teeth

 

 

" u-unnie .. you-"

 

 

" WHAT ???" chorong is getting nearer and nearer as bomi is getting nervous as hell

 

 

" you look pretty with y-your eyes dissappearing li-like that hehehhehe " she complimented her trying to calm chorong down

 

 

" now my eyes were dissappearing now and you find it pretty? what the ! " she cursed , glaring at her

 

 

 

" h-hey its a good thing !!!!!! " she wink then ran for her life as she find a way out

 

 

 

" YAAAAHHHHHHH ! COME BACK HERE YOU LITTLE !!!!! "

 

 

" I KNOW ~ I KNOW ~ YOUR WELCOME !!" Bomi shouted back as she locked herself at her bedroom

 

 

 

Chorong glared at the door . she went to the sofa and grab her phone

 

 

seeing the 'GAME OVER'  flustered on the screen 

 

 

She scream in annoyance as she kick her feet off in the air . her eyes is getting teary everytime she looks at her phone

 

 

Damn , beating that record was one of her wishing list  but bomi ruined it all

 

 

 

Remembering bomi ,  she grab the pillow near on the sofa and punch it multiple times

 

 

 

" KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!! "

 

 

" ARRGHHHHHHHHHH !  "

 

 

a dolphin -like-voice roar at their apartment

 

 

" damn ! is she serious ?! " bomi muttered , peeking from her door . she bit her nails praying for someone to save her life at that moment

 

- - 

 

 

Chorong was now watching T.V silently 

 

 

Bomi peek from her door , since chorong's back were facing her

 

 

she tip toed to her kitchen

 

 

slowly but surely , she even noted to herself not to create any sound or else she'll be facing her death in no time

 

 

she bit her lips to muffle any sounds that about to come through

 

 

as soon as she reach the refrigerator

 

 

she smiled in victory

 

 

she's thirsty as hell . staying at her room for like 4 hours or something

 

 

she grab a glass of water and drink on it . she smiled in relief

 

 

as soon as she turn around , she is greeted by a glaring chorong

 

 

" holy ! " bomi whispered surprisingly

 

 

holding her chest nervously

 

 

Chorong huffed in annoyance but sigh anyway

 

 

Bomi grip at the glass she is holding  tightly , trembling . afraid that chorong might beat her up instead of beating her precious previous record

 

Chorong was making her way near bomi , eyes were fiercing

 

bomi prayed silently as she close her eyes . holding her breathe

 

 

Waiting for a punch and kick she might receive . but

 

 

 

she felt nothing

 

 

she open her left eyes and sigh in relief

 

 

Chorong is finally gone . maybe she's on the living room again , watching t.v or somethinng

 

" omo ! " she put the glass on the sink then tip toed again to the living room . she saw chorong's back against her

 

she sigh thinking it was her entire fault , she convince herself to apologize instead

 

she compose herself , fix her clothes . check her breath and fix her hair .

 

taking a deep breathe

 

she finally goes to chorong , sitting beside her

 

she took a glance at chorong whose eyes where focused on the television 

 

" ehem! " she cleared , then peek at chorong cutely

 

but chorong remain silent

 

" i-im sorry " she whispered , it is loud enough for chorong to hear but she still remain silent though

 

" ehem !~ im sorry " she repeated again . but seems like no effect for chorong

 

Bomi pouted 

 

" yaaaaahhhhh ~ " she whine cutely hoping to get any attention from her

 

chorong who is getting annoyed again , shot her a dangerous glare and this made bomi shut up

 

Bomi bit her lower lips then

 

" look . mianhae . i-i just kinda feel hyper earlier that i -i kinda thought of surprising you ?" she explain

 

chorong huffed and looks back at the television . paying nothing attention on the poor bomi

 

" yaaaahhhh ~~ " bomi whine again , pouting

 

 

" fineee.. ignore me . just telling you that i regret it already ok ?" bomi sigh then stood up, scratching her non itchy head

 

 

chorong who is watching silently earlier , sigh as well 

 

she bit her lips then muttered

 

" this is stupid " she hissed again

 

thinking that bomi is already gone

 

 

she looks on her right side where bomi sitted earlier but gasp afterwards

 

bomi is surprisingly behind her . their lips were accidentally connected

 

bomi is planning on kissing chorong on the cheeks as an apology but seems like her plan on kissing her on the cheeks was a failed.

 

 

Their heart skips a bit

 

 

and their mind went blank

 

 

chorong's eyes were open wide as well as bomi's 

 

 

Their lips were completely connected . 

 

 

and they felt like their soul goes somewhere

 

 

 

 

but their body and lips were still on it

 

 

they were still KISSING

 

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CHOMI IS LOVE <3 , <3  <3

a short chappie . i have something important to do ~~

sorry for the errors and wrong grammars , i dont have time to check it

i have to go bye !!!

 

ps: Im so gonna update with a long chapter soon as an apology ?

subscribes and comment my precious readers

more chappie~~~ to come ~~^_^

BYE !!!! CHUUUUU :*

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Alaayyssa23 #1
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Alaayyssa23 #2
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Sam-TheReader
#3
Chapter 25: Update soon please :c
ChomiChobbom
#4
Author nim~ please comeback
ChomiChobbom
#5
Chapter 25: Still waiting for this to have a comeback, fighting author nim! We miss you so much ~ this coming monday will be 1 year after you updated T_T
Bunnylovehamster
#6
Chapter 25: Please update soon authornim. *sob sob*
NotYourOrdinaryBabe
#7
Chapter 25: Im still hoping that you'll update :(
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 25: *spoiler alert to the readers out there + major comment coming through*

I remember reading this when the chapters came out haha. One of my favourites. Ah so it seems chapter 25 was released in 2018! Wow not too long ago, and it's such a good chapter. So I just reread the whole thing and wanted to talk a bit. First of all, it's. so. good.

Not that you will, but if I can request it, please don't rewrite anything. I can see that your writing greatly improved from the beginning to the end and that's actually really fun to witness through reading! It also creates a lot of character development which is amazing.. Chorong started off with a temper and screaming all the time, to becoming this cute softie who is in love with Bomi. The confession and final arc with Suho was perfect! Suho's reaction was realistic, and so was their guilt, but it's also light-hearted enough that we readers aren't in pain - which is a good thing in it's own way. The fic Untouchable Face deals with cheating in a more mature way, so I think the difference is really refreshing!! Idk if what I'm saying is coming out right. I'm trying to say that I love this story in its own right.

When Chorong made her final decision, realising the one she is in love with, and then made that mistake of saying it as a response to Suho omg it was so funny and great. Then chasing after Bomi and those kisses, saying those words that Bomi never thought she'd hear, that was breathtaking. A different side to Chorong. Flashbacking to what happened with Suho after that was such a good way to do it. Argh the pace was so good!!

And this fic has such golden moments my god. Chorong finding out just how hurt Bomi is, Chorong feeling herself thinking of Bomi (hehe), Bomi being tired of this and telling Chorong to leave--how Chorong badly wants to hear Bomi's true feelings during that wowowow, Bomi hiding from Chorong in the cafe, Bomi being sincere in the cafe, Bomi saying hurtful words to Chorong before showing how much she loves her, Chorong's confused feelings the entire time too, and that all leads up to the end where I have even more to say!

Bomi needing to court Chorong to be her gf was the funniest fluffiest sh*t ever I loved it!! How did you come up with such greatness to fill this whole story gosh.. The April fools chapter haha, but we were rewarded with sweet sweet love. And now, the last chapter. What I personally really like about this is that it can pass off as an ending. The continuation of the story revolves around Bomi's ex who had supposedly passed away, so if we take out the whole idea that she's alive, there's already a perfect spot to end at, like ending version 1, or the end of part 1, if not just The End. And like I said how your writing seemed to have improved as the story progressed, Chapter 25 touches upon the disappointment of forgetting their anniversary, and oh my how you made me feel for Chorong. You can see the pure love she feels for Bomi. All that worry and guilt that came was fragile and beautiful. The way she spoke her heart out to Bomi was BEAUTIFUL. That "I love you. I love you. I love you" 3 times in succession melted me, fckkk. And how Bomi just chuckles asking why she's crying so much like Chorong is being silly, having prepared all that and she should be upset but she isn't... awwwhhhh.. Their love... Your mind..... can i cry pls

So I love this story. One of my favourites. You say there's more and I'll be waiting, but just know that I'm so happy with what you've given us already and my mind is at ease at that. Thank you.
ChomiChobbom
#9
Chapter 25: And to bomi's reaction what would be her reaction if naeun cameback and also chorong jealous rongie ^___^ please update author.
ChomiChobbom
#10
Chapter 25: Please update~ can't wait to naeun's appearance.