OFFICIALLY MINE

MINE IS MINE

Author’s POV

 

“I love you Yoon Bomi…”

 

Chorong’s heart is rising like a mad but she manages to let those words come out from . This is insane for Chorong. She couldn’t believe she’s in love with this girl even before and just realized it now.

 

Just by looking at Bomi’s eyes is enough to send electric sensation through her body and Oh boy! When did Bomi’s eyes become like that, twinkling like a star?

 

Bomi on the other hand couldn’t believe her ears. Did she hear that right?

 

“W-wait! Can you say that again? You…what?”

 

Chorong let out a shy smile but insist to look at Bomi’s eyes anyway.

 

“I said. I love you! Yoon Bomi”

 

Bomi heard it loud and clear. Clearer than any crystals in this world that she even let out a gasp as soon as Chorong repeated her confession. Bomi who couldn’t believe starts fanning herself, Chorong bit her bottom lip, finding Bomi adorable as she’s squealing inside right now. Bomi is just so damn cute like a whiny cutie tiny baby.

 

Chorong couldn’t hold herself any longer and gives Bomi a quick peck on the cheek.

 

 

“Wha-Woah!”  Bomi gasps, touching her cheek that had received a kiss from Chorong. Her eyes are widened and she’s turning red right now. “I…It’s…Wow” At last Bomi muttered.

 

 

”Why don’t you say something Yoon Bomi? Don’t you love me now?” Chorong starts whining as she’s expecting an ‘iloveyoutoo’.Little did Chorong know,  Bomi is having an ovary attack coz Chorong looked so squishy acting cute like that.

 

“What! No!” Bomi immediately shook her head. “That’s…I mean!  You know I love you…” Bomi her bottom lip, contemplating if it is right to ask something at this moment but she really want to know the truth.

 

 

“What about him?”

 

FLASHBACK

 

“You’re a…really good liar”

 

Suho stated, surprising Chorong who’s sitting across the table. Chorong bit her bottom lip, didn’t know how on earth she is going to explain this little misunderstanding.

 

“I…”

 

“You cheated behind my back Chorong.” Suho shook his head in disbelief. “And it’s really hard for me to forgive you.” Suho lower his gaze up to his ring, he started playing on it. “But…I’m going to give you a chance.” Suho chuckled bitterly.

 

Silence

“Sounds crazy right? You cheated to me for how long? So long… but here I am giving you another damn chance…It’s *sigh*. I just really love you this much” Suho wetted her lower lip.

 

Chorong look up, surprised at his sudden words. “Just stay with me and I’ll give you a chance.” Suho nodded, reassuring himself that Chorong will rather stay with his side. This made Chorong let out a gasp.

 

“Or…Leave this place and you’ll leave my life.” This time, Suho was staring directly to her soul.

 

Chorong couldn’t speak nor move. Her boyfriend is giving her a second damn chance. She cheated for a freakin’ long time yet here she is having another chance to be his.

 

“I…”

 

But this is also the chance to stop this pretension and finally have Bomi without feeling bothered or something.

 

Just what path is she going to choose?

 

Chorong stay rooted on her seat.

 

“Suho….I-i… you’ve been a good boyfriend and this…what you were saying right now…It’s…I know this is a good opportunity to take but” Chorong paused. “I don’t want to hurt you anymore.” Chorong lower her gaze, looking at her lap this time.

 

Suho bit his lip, preventing himself to cry but it is impossible to hold back his tears because his heart is breaking so much.

 

“And I don’t want you to think that I didn’t love you all those times because I really do loved you back then…” Chorong look up to meet his teary eyes. “You don’t deserve someone like me…”´ Chorong shook her head. “And I don’t deserve another chance coz I’m a jerk and I really am sorry for everything…” A tear escaped Chorong’s eyes.

 

Suho couldn’t hold it anymore and starts crying his heart out. This is too much. It hurts hearing this from the one you love whole heartedly.

 

“I know you will take some time to heal your heart and this is all my fault for making you suffer like this…I just… really hope you will forgive me when the time comes” Chorong stand on her feet as she couldn’t take seeing Suho cry because of her.

 

“Please…take care” Chorong bow and turn her back, ready to leave.

 

 

“C-Chorong …” Suho called out.

 

Chorong stop on her tracks.

 

“I-i wish you choose the right thing” Suho stuttered, wiping his tears.

 

Chorong let out a sigh and decided to walk to Suho’s side to give him a kiss on the forehead.

 

“Thank you so much for everything” Chorong’s heart ache looking at Suho’s tears rolling down his cheeks.

 

After a while

 

Chorong exited the restaurant with Suho still looking at where Chorong left, balding his fist together with his aching heart.

 

END OF FLASHBACK

 

  •  

 

Author’s POV

 

“I already broke up with him Bomi ah. Don’t worry” Chorong smiled at Bomi reassuringly. Bomi’s eyes were wide open hearing the break up news from Chorong herself.

 

“Y-You really did? W-Why?” Bomi ask, surprised.

 

Chorong held Bomi’s hand.

 

“Bomi, sometimes people seems to expect what they really want to happen. But that isn’t really the case. The more you expect something to happen the more it is far from your grip.”

 

“Huh?” Bomi seems confused and Chorong rolled her eyes remembering how slow Bomi can be.

 

“For example, Your Mom gave you a gift on your birthday which is wrapped through a square box, you expected a gadget inside on it but the moment you open it, it was only a teddy bear. You cry your heart out because you already tell your Mom you want a gadget but your Mom could only afford something like that. It may hurt you coz it wasn’t what you expected but it is already there…It is already given to you.” Chorong explained.

 

Bomi listen intently and Chorong have to contain her smile to finish what she actually meant.

 

“Not everything in this world is on your side hence what you expected is to happen. Best example for that are Suho and I.” Chorong sigh.

 

“Everyone seems to expect us to be together until the end but…”

 

Bomi felt sorry at the moment. Her gaze drop to the ground and wait for Chorong to finish.

 

“Unfortunately, we are not destined together...” Chorong lift Bomi’s chin using her hand and smiled to her. “Coz someone else entered my life…Unexpected right?” Chorong’s eyes starts getting teary. “Bomi…you are like a gift that is given to me…” Bomi felt touch and couldn’t help but tear out. “Why would I throw you out?”

 

“Omo! For some reason, that made me cringe” Bomi pretended to cringe, receiving a slap on the shoulder from Chorong

 

“Why do you always have to ruin such sweet moments?!”  Chorong roll her eyes.

 

“That is because I couldn’t understand what you were trying to say! It’s too deep ok?!” Bomi whined. “I only understand the gift thing though…” Bomi stick her tongue out at her, earning another slap in her chest this time.

“Yah! I even give you examples!”

“Hey! Stop! Why are you being so violent?!” Bomi whine

“Because you are stupid!”

“Come on. I’m your stupid” Bomi grin at her own old cheesy remark and Chorong blush right away hearing it. “Are you blushing?”

“No I’m not!” Chorong tried to look away so she could hide her face.

“Eyy! Should I repeat it? I am your Stupid Chorong ah. Yours and yours only” Bomi acts like a pro as if she’s having a declamation or something.

“Hah! Are you sure you’re only mine? Who’s the girl savaging your lips earlier anyway?” Chorong asked, glaring at the now gulping Bomi.

Bomi’s twinkling eyes were replaced by a nervous one.

“W-Who?”

“Don’t try to deny it. I saw you with my two eyes. Yoon Bomi” Chorong raised a brow as she cross her arms.

“S-She’s actually a f-friend. S-she just greeted me.”

“Greeted with a kiss huh.” Chorong roll her eyes.

“Can we stop? I’m sorry ok. I was so lost in my way and bump into her…That’s all…Besides you’re the one I truly love.”

“Oh…really” Chorong turn her back, ready to leave when Bomi grab her wrist and hug her so tight.

“I’m sorry baby. I don’t want to argue with my girlfriend…”

“Who’s your girlfriend?”

“Err…You? Who else?” Bomi is about to give Chorong a kiss when a finger stop her mid-way.

“No. I’m not your girlfriend.” Chorong shook her head and Bomi’s eyes widen from the revelation.

“You’re not my girlfriend?!”

Chorong let out a chuckle.

“Are we wives then? When did we marry? I don’t remember” Bomi starts panicking.

“Paboyah!  How are we girlfriends when you didn’t even court me in the first place” Chorong cross her arms.

“Wait. Are you saying that…I have to court you?” Bomi has to clear.

“Of course. You have to try so hard to get me” Chorong wink.

“WHAT!? But-But *sigh*I already tasted you though…”

“YAH!!!” Chorong glared and Bomi have to surrender.

 

 

 

 

“Ok then…so. What do I have to do to get you?”

 

Chorong smile warmly and Bomi could only gulp with that.

  •  

HOW TO GET A GIRL?

#1: BE SNEAKY!

 

“Are you already my girlfriend then?” Bomi asked excitedly after serving the hot ramen she made for Chorong. Chorong gulp at the smell of ramen and squeal instantly.

“Yah. Girlfriend?” Bomi asked again.

“No”

“WAE?!”

“Do you really expect me to say yes to you after you cooked me this ramen? You called this courting?” Chorong gave Bomi a look before scooping the ramen on her chopstick.

“Do I really have to?” Bomi whine.

“Of course not. It’s really up to you if you want me to be your girlfriend” Chorong shrugged enjoying her ramen and Bomi could only pout. “So are you going to court me or not?”

“I will! But… can I get a kiss?” Bomi grin and jutted her lips in front of Chorong while closing her eyes. Chorong look at the adorable sight of Bomi and clear , trying her best to get a hold of herself.

“No. I am still not yours remember?” Chorong stated before putting another set of ramen in .

“What?! I can’t kiss you?!” Bomi starts throwing a tantrum which annoyed Chorong.

“This is the first time I’ve ever met a whiny courter like you! Yah! It’s just courting. Is it really that hard?” Chorong point a chopstick at Bomi and Bomi could only look down. “You need to try so hard to get me. Do you understand?” Chorong nagged at her before she continues eating her ramen.

“Fine” Bomi pouted.

“…”

“Do you want water then?”

“Oh yes please…”

Bomi grab a bottle of water from the kitchen and happily serve it in front of Chorong. Chorong grab the bottle of water from Bomi’s grip and about to drink it but stop mid-way.

“Wait…”

“What?”

Chorong scan the bottle of water as if trying to find something.

“Do I look like I’m going to put poison on it?!” Bomi whine.

“No. but you might put some love poison on it.”

“Why would I do that? You’re already crazy in love with me though” Bomi said proudly making Chorong snort at her.

“Why…are you so full of yourself?” Chorong shook her head, trying to hide her small smile. She find Bomi adorable and she’s afraid she might not control herself anymore and just savage Bomi’s lips in no time.

“What? You love me. Chorong loves Bomi. That is something to be proud of.” Bomi proudly said. Chorong couldn’t help but laugh at Bomi’s childish behavior.

“Yah. Are you five or something?”

“No. I am four.” Bomi make a heart shape in her heart and look straight Chorong’s eyes. “FOUR-ever loving you.” She wink making Chorong blush like a mad. She couldn’t hide her smile as she starts covering her face with her hands.

“Eyy…My Chorongie is shy.”

“I am not shy!”

“Admit it. You are turning red! Omo!”

“Yah! Stop it!” Chorong turn even redder right now.

“Ok, I’ll stop the tease. Here’s your water.” Bomi handed the water to Chorong and Chorong immediately grab to drink from it. Once she did. She could hear Bomi giggling as soon as she finishes drinking.

“Why are you so happy?” Chorong asked in confusion.

“Who wouldn’t be happy when I already got a kiss from you.” Bomi grin.

“Huh?”

Bomi look at the bottle of water and to Chorong and Chorong do the same.

“YAH! You cheater!”

“What is wrong with indirect kiss?” Bomi pouted.

“That is still cheating. I said no kissing till I say yes.”

“Whatever. I still got the kiss though. “Bomi stick her tongue out.

Chorong let out a sigh but she’s squealing like a teenager inside anyway. This side of Bomi is so cute and she couldn’t help but fall in love deeper and deeper every time

 

-

HOW TO GET A GIRL?

 #2: ANNOY HER, IMPRESS HER AND COMPLIMENT HER!

 

Out of boredom

 Chorong skip to where Bomi is and Bomi starts covering what she is trying to do.

“Yah! I said you can’t go here~” Bomi whine.

“It’s been half an hour already. What are you doing?” Chorong tried to peak what is Bomi covering inside the microwave.

“Why are you so stubborn?” Bomi roll her eyes.

“SO you are baking something for me?” Chorong grin, there’s a tint of pink on her cheeks

“Well. Surprise” Bomi stated in sarcasm.

“Yah! Why are you so mad? “

Bomi goes straight to the sink and starts washing the glasses without saying anything. Chorong approach her and bump her shoulder to Bomi’s.

“I’m sorry ok.” She pouted.

Bomi stopped for a while before looking at Chorong beside her who is pouting right now, couldn’t help but smile. Bomi called her.

“Chorong ah.”

“Hmm?”

“Can you get something here in my pocket?” Bomi pleads. “I couldn’t reach it since my hands are wet.” She said, pointing her lips to the back of her pants.

“Of course” Chorong tried to reach something on it but couldn’t get any. “Uhh…What is it anyway…There’s nothing here?” Chorong’s eyebrows were knitted while trying to search for it. Bomi starts giggling as she could feel Chorong’s hand on her .

“What can you feel then?”

“Well…It’s so-…YAH!!! WHY ARE YOU SO ERT?!” Chorong immediately take her hands off and slap Bomi in the shoulder…hard.

“Hey! Hey! Don’t be mad” Bomi starts laughing at Chorong’s red face.

“You are so annoying!”

“*Eyy…Ok I’m sorry” Bomi smile warmly this time. “Now…Can you trust me and reach for my pocket to get my thing?”  Bomi wink

“No.”

“Come on. It’s real this time.” Bomi pointed her lips to her front right pocket in her pants and look at Chorong who is hesitating. “Trust me…” Bomi reassured her.

 

Chorong reach for it and let her hand wander inside Bomi’s pocket, she reach something and pull it out only to see a little box that is wrapped in a pink ribbon. Bomi nodded at Chorong telling her that she is allowed to open it.

 

Slowly…Chorong open it to reveal a beautiful necklace with a heart shape on it.

 

“For me?” Chorong asked.

“No. It’s for me. I only want your opinion if it’s beautiful or not.”

“Yah!” Chorong glare at her.

“Kidding! Of course it’s for you.” Bomi smile at her.

Chorong’s eyes soften looking at it.

“Really?”

“Really.”

“Are you sure?”
“No. It’s for Cindy.”

“YAH!!!!” Chorong scream in annoyance.

“It’s for my future girlfriend!”

“SO IT’S CINDY?!” Chorong starts turning red in anger just by hearing her name.

“OK BAD JOKE. IT’S FOR PARK CHORONG. MY FUTURE GIRLFRIEND. OF COURSE.” Bomi immediately change the mood before hell Rongie is unleash or else. “Let me wear this for you…” Bomi clear and immediately dry her wet hands from her apron and put it on Chorong’s neck.

“Hey it suits you.” Bomi smiled.

“…”

“Hey stop being mad. You look so beautiful” Bomi compliments her and kiss Chorong’s forehead to cool her down.

“Why do you keep on ruining our moment?” Chorong closes her eyes.

“Sorry baby…I love you”

“Don’t ever mention her name. Ok?”

“Yes master....” Bomi peck Chorong’s cheek this time.

 “Hey! Are you having fun stealing kisses from me?”

“Sorry. You look so beautiful. I can’t help it.” Bomi grin.

“So are you going to steal kisses from beautiful girls whenever you want?” Chorong glare.

“No. I am only going to kiss a beautiful girl named Park Chorong. I heard she’s very pretty though” Bomi wink and this made Chorong blush once again.

 

  •  

HOW TO GET A GIRL?

IF YOU WERE BORED AND YOU WANT TO MAKE HER YOURS ALREADY.

 HERES THE LAST TIP TO DO.

#3 SEDUCE HER.

 

 

Bomi is now having a hard time to control herself. She couldn’t get a kiss from her nor hug her. This is a complete torture for her, sipping her can of drinks while forming something on her mind in the balcony. Suddenly, an idea pops out inside Bomi’s brain. She smirks and immediately made her way to the kitchen where Chorong is in.

 

Bomi skip her way to the refrigerator to grab something then…made her way beside Chorong who is sitting in the tool bar while doing something in her notepad.

 

“What are you doing?”

“I’m doing things that you don’t know how to do.” Chorong kept on scribbling something on her notepad. This made Bomi feel irritated not because of the remark but because Chorong is not paying any attention to her.

“You are calculating?”

“Yes…I’m just trying to compute my wages this month so I could budget it…wait” Chorong paused. “Why are you here? Didn’t I tell you to go somewhere else? I’m busy” Chorong roll her eyes.

“I know but…I want to give you this” Bomi show the box of cupcake she baked yesterday and grabs one piece. “Please have a taste for me?” Bomi pleads.

“No. I’m busy. See?” Chorong showed her notepad, rolling her eyes.

Bomi sigh.

“Then can you watch me eat this then?” Bomi snapped, making Chorong look at her in surprise.

“Huh?”

 

Before Chorong could say anything, Bomi starts the cream of the cupcake. Slowly, up and down and even circling it with her tongue.

“Hmm~ this taste so good.” Bomi intended to half moaned.

“W-wait, what?” Chorong dare to ask although she admit, she really do find Bomi y at the moment. She was about to fan herself using her hands but she doesn’t want Bomi to find her a ert. Heck! Bomi is the ert one here!

 

That was only a freakin’ cupcake…Being seductively by her… ‘Wait! HUH?! WHAT AM I THINKING?! WHAT THE HELL!’ Chorong curse mentally.

 

“Well. You don’t want one so I rather eat one for you? Right?” Bomi pretended to act clueless, this time, poking the cream with her pointy finger as she starts putting it inside and even closes her eyes.

“Hmm” Bomi moan or that was what Chorong thought so. Bomi the remaining cream on her lower lip and open her eyes in a seductive way.

“…”

Chorong’s surrounding starts getting hot as she find herself drooling at the sight of Bomi harassing the cupcake or that was Chorong thought so? Again.

“This cupcake taste so nice. Hmm…So addictive…I want more” Bomi bit her lower lip and look straight Chorong’s eyes. “Do…you want some?” Bomi asked seductively, enough to send shiver down Chorong’s ovary spine.

 Chorong’s eyes darted to Bomi’s pinkish and kissable lips while her heart starts beating like a mad, before she could Bomi right there and then. Chorong decided to stand up on her feet.

“I…I n-need to get my phone” Chorong excused, running her way to Bomi’s bedroom.

Bomi raise an eyebrow looking at the phone beside Chorong’s notepad. Maybe, Chorong forgotten that she’s actually using her own phone to calculate something. This made Bomi smirk.

“Why is she so red just now?” She giggled silently.

After a moment.

 

Chorong goes out from Bomi’s bedroom with a frown on her face.

“Looking for this?” Bomi wiggle her phone in front of Chorong’s face

“YAH! Give me that!” Chorong turn even redder than before.

“Hey Chorong. I think you should consult a doctor” Chorong look away as soon as she hears the word from Bomi. “You actually forgotten you used it as your calculator. Hmm?” Bomi continue her teasing.

Chorong huff in annoyance.

“I…I thought I was using your phone”

“Lame…D you really?”

“YAH! YOON BOMI!”

“Why are you so nervous Chorong? I was only giving you an eating show. You know” Bomi wiggled her eyebrows and this it irk Chorong to the core.

“Just…WHY ARE YOU SO ANNOYING?”

“Why are you so mad? “ Bomi grab another piece of cupcake and show it in front of Chorong with a teasing smile. “You want me to see eat it again?”

“EAT IT ALL YOU WANT! WHATEVER” Chorong turn her back from Bomi and march her way to the living room.

 

Bomi’s laugh echoed to the kitchen.

 

‘OH MY GOD! SHE LOOKED SO PISSED’! HAHAHAHA’  Bomi thought while laughing her off.

Suddenly, marching of feet’s were heard and it was too sudden when Bomi find herself being kiss by Chorong on the lips, ON THE LIPS. Bomi cheered in her thoughts.

Bomi pulled away about to say something but let out a gasp as Chorong starts crashing her lips against her. Soon, they were having a tongue battle when Chorong pulls away.

“Hmm…You’re right…This cupcake taste so good” Chorong bit her lip and before she could savage Bomi’s lips. Bomi manages to stop her.

“Oh~ Wait…”


“What?” Chorong asked in frustration.

“You’re not mine yet right?” Bomi smirk.

“Urgh! Crap that.”

“Huh?” Bomi pretended not to know.

“I’m already yours and you’re mine” Chorong grab Bomi’s collar and look straight her eyes. ”MINE” Chorong emphasize the word MINE and Bomi gulp with that. Oh heck! This is turning her on.

“So…Will you be my girlfriend?” Bomi dare to ask once again.

“Stupid. I am already your girlfriend” With that. Chorong crash her lips against Bomi and Bomi smile through the kiss.

 

AND THANKS TO BOMI’S CUPCAKE.

THEY ARE OFFICIALLY TOGETHER!

  •  

ON THE OTHER HAND

 

Somewhere on who knows where?

 

Someone’s furiously tapping her finger on her car wheel while waiting patiently to the owner of the mansion to come out. Call her a stalker or whatever but she really needs to confirm something herself.

Suddenly, the main gate of the mansion is being open and an old lady walks out

The stalker adjusted herself on her car seat and watch intently before her eyes

Soon after, a car stops in front of the gate’s mansion and a man on its uniform step out from the car to open the car door from the back.

 

 Her heart starts skipping a beat

 

I have to wait a little longer…

 

Please show up

 

A woman on its black dress together with the luggage in her hand comes out from it. The old lady helps the woman to carry her luggage inside the mansion.

 

Moment later, the woman turns around and that’s when it did the trick. The world momentarily stops and the surrounding became slow. She blinks her eyes multiple times and let out a gasp once she saw the bright smile on the woman’s face.

 

She couldn’t believe this is happening. This isn’t a dream at all after pinching herself hard on the cheek. This is really happening and she’s there to witness this.

That woman has improved a lot, like A LOT.

She’s different from before.

She’s even become more stunning now.

 

IT’S HER! IT’S TRUE!

 

BOMI’S EX-GIRLFRIEND IS STILL ALIVE

 

It’s…

 

SON NAEUN

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AUTHOR’S NOTE

GUYS! I am so sorry for the late updates. My exam is around the corner and I have to focus on it. I am so sorry for the delay. I didn’t know if this story is still interesting for you guys but then…You were asking for sweet CHOMI MOMENTS so here it is. I really am not into fluffs so forgive me if this is such a trash. LOL

 

Anyway for the next update…I know you GUYS are expecting something, like Starting from S and ends with T.

S__T

OMG! YOU ERTS! LOL. I DON’T KNOW. DO YOU GUYS WANT IT OR NAH?! LOL, AND NO.  I’M NOT SUCH A TEASE SO…?! XD

 

ANYWAY! BE READY FOR THE DRAMA’S AND YAY FOR NAEUN’S APPEARANCE!

I LOVE YOU GUYS!

 

KEEP SUPPORTING ME! HIT SUBSCRIBE AND DROP YOUR COMMENTS! THANKYOU!!! <3

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Alaayyssa23 #1
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Alaayyssa23 #2
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Sam-TheReader
#3
Chapter 25: Update soon please :c
ChomiChobbom
#4
Author nim~ please comeback
ChomiChobbom
#5
Chapter 25: Still waiting for this to have a comeback, fighting author nim! We miss you so much ~ this coming monday will be 1 year after you updated T_T
Bunnylovehamster
#6
Chapter 25: Please update soon authornim. *sob sob*
NotYourOrdinaryBabe
#7
Chapter 25: Im still hoping that you'll update :(
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 25: *spoiler alert to the readers out there + major comment coming through*

I remember reading this when the chapters came out haha. One of my favourites. Ah so it seems chapter 25 was released in 2018! Wow not too long ago, and it's such a good chapter. So I just reread the whole thing and wanted to talk a bit. First of all, it's. so. good.

Not that you will, but if I can request it, please don't rewrite anything. I can see that your writing greatly improved from the beginning to the end and that's actually really fun to witness through reading! It also creates a lot of character development which is amazing.. Chorong started off with a temper and screaming all the time, to becoming this cute softie who is in love with Bomi. The confession and final arc with Suho was perfect! Suho's reaction was realistic, and so was their guilt, but it's also light-hearted enough that we readers aren't in pain - which is a good thing in it's own way. The fic Untouchable Face deals with cheating in a more mature way, so I think the difference is really refreshing!! Idk if what I'm saying is coming out right. I'm trying to say that I love this story in its own right.

When Chorong made her final decision, realising the one she is in love with, and then made that mistake of saying it as a response to Suho omg it was so funny and great. Then chasing after Bomi and those kisses, saying those words that Bomi never thought she'd hear, that was breathtaking. A different side to Chorong. Flashbacking to what happened with Suho after that was such a good way to do it. Argh the pace was so good!!

And this fic has such golden moments my god. Chorong finding out just how hurt Bomi is, Chorong feeling herself thinking of Bomi (hehe), Bomi being tired of this and telling Chorong to leave--how Chorong badly wants to hear Bomi's true feelings during that wowowow, Bomi hiding from Chorong in the cafe, Bomi being sincere in the cafe, Bomi saying hurtful words to Chorong before showing how much she loves her, Chorong's confused feelings the entire time too, and that all leads up to the end where I have even more to say!

Bomi needing to court Chorong to be her gf was the funniest fluffiest sh*t ever I loved it!! How did you come up with such greatness to fill this whole story gosh.. The April fools chapter haha, but we were rewarded with sweet sweet love. And now, the last chapter. What I personally really like about this is that it can pass off as an ending. The continuation of the story revolves around Bomi's ex who had supposedly passed away, so if we take out the whole idea that she's alive, there's already a perfect spot to end at, like ending version 1, or the end of part 1, if not just The End. And like I said how your writing seemed to have improved as the story progressed, Chapter 25 touches upon the disappointment of forgetting their anniversary, and oh my how you made me feel for Chorong. You can see the pure love she feels for Bomi. All that worry and guilt that came was fragile and beautiful. The way she spoke her heart out to Bomi was BEAUTIFUL. That "I love you. I love you. I love you" 3 times in succession melted me, fckkk. And how Bomi just chuckles asking why she's crying so much like Chorong is being silly, having prepared all that and she should be upset but she isn't... awwwhhhh.. Their love... Your mind..... can i cry pls

So I love this story. One of my favourites. You say there's more and I'll be waiting, but just know that I'm so happy with what you've given us already and my mind is at ease at that. Thank you.
ChomiChobbom
#9
Chapter 25: And to bomi's reaction what would be her reaction if naeun cameback and also chorong jealous rongie ^___^ please update author.
ChomiChobbom
#10
Chapter 25: Please update~ can't wait to naeun's appearance.