Double Date or Trouble ?

MINE IS MINE

Author's Pov

 

Bomi is now making her way to the mall while holding her now swollen lips . fortunately because of the BEAST who attacked her last night .

 

so as i was saying she decided to buy some supplies of food 

 

as she walks she suddenly bump into someone

 

" ouch !! "

 

"ouch !! how dare you bu-"

 

"im sorry im sorr---  cindy?"

 

"bomi ?"

 

"CINDY !!!!!!!!"

 

" OMG!!! YOON BOMI ???!!! "

 

" yes ! yes !! its me "

 

" bomrilla!!!! i miss you ~~~~ "

 

"YAH ! dont call me that . someone might here you " bomi pouted

 

" OH MY GOSHHH !!! you still havent change ! your'e still cute as everrrr !! "

 

"yah . move on ! hahaha"

 

oh yes . they are best of friends before . they are so close to each other not until cindy fell inlove with bomi . Cindy confessed to bomi but bomi only sees her as her sister . she told her that they cant be together . they decided to be friends but then cindy cant move on yet . so she went to abroad toforget her love for her bestfriend . 

 

" hahaha " cindy just laugh it off

 

" so how are you ? you look pretty good huh " bomi says as she wiggle her eyebrow

 

" oh thanks . im fine . how about you ? " 

 

" great " she smiled

 

" great ? your lips says otherwise . haha . what happened ?" cindy ask . pointing at bomi's lips

 

" owww .. hahaha . i just bit it accidentally " ' i got bitten by a beast ' 

 

" ohhhh . you sure you bit it or someone does?" cindy teased

 

" wha-what ? NO - i mean . no, yes no "

 

" hahaha . what ? why are you panicking ? so it is true ?" she continued to

 

" yaaaahhh ! i told you i accidentally bit it " she pouted

 

Cindy find bomi really adorable so she pinch her cheecks 

 

" ok ok . why so  cuteeeee ?" she squeel

 

" well ~ as always " bomi says proudly 

 

" so full of yourself huh " cindy says . slapping bomi's arm playfully . bomi just shrug

 

" so . wanna have a lunch with me  ? for you know . catch up ? " bomi ask . smiling brightly that no one can resist

 

" is that a date ?" cindy ask back playfully . blushing

 

" hahah . why not ?" bomi answered playfully

 

" its a date then" cindy says kiddingly although deep inside . she's having a rapid breathing and beating of a heart

 

" if you say so "

 

' pleaseee . not now . it can't be ' she thought

 

" okieee ! lets go ! " cindy says linking her arm at bomi's

 

- - -

 

Chorong is having a date with her boyfriend . Suho

 

" babe ? your order ?"

 

" amhh " chorong grab the menu and started scanning it . choosing her order but then 

 

" WHAHHAHAHA " a familiar laugh echoed in the restaurant that she immediately look for it

 

" yahh ! your so funny ! oh my gosh !!!!!!!!! " the girl linking arms with bomi says loud enough for chorong to hear

 

" isn't that bomi ?? "  suho ask chorong whose eyes are now fixed on bomi who is still laughing and about to walk pass by them

 

" bomi " suho called out that it gets bomi and cindy's attention

 

" oh suho ? " bomi smiled but then it immediately vanish when she saw chorong's appearance

 

she immediately let go of cindy's linking-arm and cover her now swollen lips . looking away from chorong's questioning yet scary look.

 

" hey . wanna join us ?" suho ask politely while smiling .

 

" ah- no- its okay .i dont want to burden--"

 

" no its okay . you two can join us " chorong says coldly . though suho and cindy didn't notice it . still , only bomi can feel the coldness from chorong's voice . she starts to sweating from her forehead to her palms .

 

" no . seriously . were fine . we'll just get another table "

 

" don't be so thick-headed bomi . if i say you join . YOU JOIN " chorong's says . now her eyes are fix on bomi's nervous one

 

" hey .are you okay ? your'e sweating ? " cindy ask bomi . she saw how bomi's sweat roll down from her forehead down to her cheeks , cindy  wipe it off using her hands 

 

as cindy is wiping bomi off . bomi's eyes immediately look at chorong . seeing chorong's cold and balnk gaze . she pulled away nervously and fake a giggle .

 

" n-no im fine . really " she assured . avoiding chorong's gaze

 

" sit " chorong demand

 

" babe ? why being so mean ? " suho whisper to her

 

" im not being mean . im just saying " she answer seriously

 

suho notice the sudden change of chorong's mood . but he just shrug it off thinking that maybe she's on her period or something

 

bomi takes a seat infront of chorong

 

cindy sat next to bomi

 

cindy is not liking the way chorong treats bomi

 

" so who is she ?" chorong out of the blue . ask

 

" im bomi's childhood friend and bestfriend when we were on highschool days " cindy smiled reminiscing her past with bomi

 

" y-yeah " bomi stuttered

 

" and you are ?" cindy ask coldly

 

" bomi's g-" chorong immediately look at suho who is beside her . she breath deeply and says

 

" Bomi's CloseFriend . really close " she says . emphasizing the word 'close' while nodding her head and looking directly at bomi's eyes

 

bomi choke on her saliva

 

" *cough* yeah *cough* " bomi agree eyeing suho's reaction who is smiling ear to ear

 

" and i am her girlfriend . nice to meet you " suho points to chorong and smile to cindy

 

" ohh ~ you two look really good together " cindy says 

 

chorong looks at bomi who immediately looks away from them

 

" right bom-ah ?" cindy ask

 

" oh yeah right " bomi answer uninterestingly preventing herself to roll her eyes

 

' BOM AH ??!!! ' She thought angrily

 

seeing bomi's reaction earlier

 

chorong smirk 

 

" yes . and i love him so much . right baby ?" she says sweetly while looking at his eyes

 

" aww.. i love you too " suho says as they kiss infront of the two girls

 

one is having a diabetes from cheesiness

 

one is having a mini heart attack from the view

 

the couple pulled away and chorong didnt miss the sarcastic looks from bomi

 

she smirks again

 

" oh my gosh . im sorry . were having a PDA infront of the both of you " suho says . blushing like a mad .

 

" no . its okay . its sweet though " cindy says

 

" its fine *like * really " bomi insist

 

chorong giggles while looking at bomi

 

bomi eyed her then 

 

" anyway . what's your order ?" bomi look away then ask cindy who is now eyeing the menu

 

bomi adjust her seats close to cindy then lean closer to look for the menu

 

" ill choose this one " cindy says . feeling the closeness between them though she's not making it obvious

 

chorong looks at the two girls infront of her . glaring at the now unnotice-flirting-bomi 

 

" oh this one ?" bomi points at the menu while looking really close at cindy who is now blushing

 

bomi smirk seeing chorong's ranging reaction in the corner of her eyes 

 

' you started this my dear ' she thought

 

" hmm .. looks yummy " bomi her lips and cindy sees it

 

" babe how about you ?" suho ask her girlfriend while looking at the menu in his hand

 

"e-eh ?" oh . whatever you choose babe . ill choose it too " she says sweetlky making sure bomi will hear it 

 

" looks yummy right ?" cindy says looking at bomi directly to her lips then look away when they make an eye contact

 

" yes " bomi smile . cheering to her mind when she saw chorong breaths deeply. looks like stoping herself from bursting or something

 

the two grils continued to flirt with each other until

 

" OUCHHH !!!!!!" Bomi jump fro m her seat and  scream all of a sudden when she felt something just kick her legs underneath the table

 

the kick is so hard that it makes her bit her lips to prevent the tears that about to come out and prevent to moan in pain

 

" what !? what happened ?! are you okay ?!!! " cindy ask . holding bomi's shoulder . worrying so damn much

 

suho looks at her worrying . 

 

" what happened ?"

 

Bomi looks at chorong who is still eating as if nothing just happened

 

' om my god . this jealous is really violent . i forgot . she might kill me after this . ! i forgot the rules . dont make the witch jealous . but she makes me jealous first !!! '

 

she pouted then looks at chorong cutely

 

chorong looks at her back then smirk

 

she even mouthed

 

' your dead '

 

*GULP*

 

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Alaayyssa23 #1
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Alaayyssa23 #2
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Sam-TheReader
#3
Chapter 25: Update soon please :c
ChomiChobbom
#4
Author nim~ please comeback
ChomiChobbom
#5
Chapter 25: Still waiting for this to have a comeback, fighting author nim! We miss you so much ~ this coming monday will be 1 year after you updated T_T
Bunnylovehamster
#6
Chapter 25: Please update soon authornim. *sob sob*
NotYourOrdinaryBabe
#7
Chapter 25: Im still hoping that you'll update :(
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 25: *spoiler alert to the readers out there + major comment coming through*

I remember reading this when the chapters came out haha. One of my favourites. Ah so it seems chapter 25 was released in 2018! Wow not too long ago, and it's such a good chapter. So I just reread the whole thing and wanted to talk a bit. First of all, it's. so. good.

Not that you will, but if I can request it, please don't rewrite anything. I can see that your writing greatly improved from the beginning to the end and that's actually really fun to witness through reading! It also creates a lot of character development which is amazing.. Chorong started off with a temper and screaming all the time, to becoming this cute softie who is in love with Bomi. The confession and final arc with Suho was perfect! Suho's reaction was realistic, and so was their guilt, but it's also light-hearted enough that we readers aren't in pain - which is a good thing in it's own way. The fic Untouchable Face deals with cheating in a more mature way, so I think the difference is really refreshing!! Idk if what I'm saying is coming out right. I'm trying to say that I love this story in its own right.

When Chorong made her final decision, realising the one she is in love with, and then made that mistake of saying it as a response to Suho omg it was so funny and great. Then chasing after Bomi and those kisses, saying those words that Bomi never thought she'd hear, that was breathtaking. A different side to Chorong. Flashbacking to what happened with Suho after that was such a good way to do it. Argh the pace was so good!!

And this fic has such golden moments my god. Chorong finding out just how hurt Bomi is, Chorong feeling herself thinking of Bomi (hehe), Bomi being tired of this and telling Chorong to leave--how Chorong badly wants to hear Bomi's true feelings during that wowowow, Bomi hiding from Chorong in the cafe, Bomi being sincere in the cafe, Bomi saying hurtful words to Chorong before showing how much she loves her, Chorong's confused feelings the entire time too, and that all leads up to the end where I have even more to say!

Bomi needing to court Chorong to be her gf was the funniest fluffiest sh*t ever I loved it!! How did you come up with such greatness to fill this whole story gosh.. The April fools chapter haha, but we were rewarded with sweet sweet love. And now, the last chapter. What I personally really like about this is that it can pass off as an ending. The continuation of the story revolves around Bomi's ex who had supposedly passed away, so if we take out the whole idea that she's alive, there's already a perfect spot to end at, like ending version 1, or the end of part 1, if not just The End. And like I said how your writing seemed to have improved as the story progressed, Chapter 25 touches upon the disappointment of forgetting their anniversary, and oh my how you made me feel for Chorong. You can see the pure love she feels for Bomi. All that worry and guilt that came was fragile and beautiful. The way she spoke her heart out to Bomi was BEAUTIFUL. That "I love you. I love you. I love you" 3 times in succession melted me, fckkk. And how Bomi just chuckles asking why she's crying so much like Chorong is being silly, having prepared all that and she should be upset but she isn't... awwwhhhh.. Their love... Your mind..... can i cry pls

So I love this story. One of my favourites. You say there's more and I'll be waiting, but just know that I'm so happy with what you've given us already and my mind is at ease at that. Thank you.
ChomiChobbom
#9
Chapter 25: And to bomi's reaction what would be her reaction if naeun cameback and also chorong jealous rongie ^___^ please update author.
ChomiChobbom
#10
Chapter 25: Please update~ can't wait to naeun's appearance.