Shhhhhh

MINE IS MINE

BOMI’S POV

 

“What do you mean?” I manage to say

 

I couldn’t believe all this and I could feel my tears forming crystals now

 

I looked at the girl in front of me and I could hear her sob.

 

It hurts me seeing her cry and I badly want to wipe those tears away but

 

Those words, coming from her very own mouth

 

Are breaking me apart

 

“I know what I did is stupid. I am a complete jerk. I left him for you and thought that I had mutual feelings for you too… b-but I was wrong!” I heard Chorong cried

 

“…” I wanted to say something but I feel too stupid to muffle a word

 

Those words coming from her are like knives stabbing my heart like a million times. Is she even serious? Is she kidding around? She runs to get me and kiss me like a ing mad woman that night and now this?

 

 I looked straight her eyes to see if she was only fooling around but I could see a regretful look in her eyes. This only broke my heart into pieces; I couldn’t breathe properly as if I was like suffocating into a thick Smokey air that it’s killing me

 

“I thought I will be happy with you b-but as the time goes by, I realized his absence in my life and realized how much I’ve love him with my whole life. I realized that I was infatuated to you and the one I truly love is him. This is all about lust Bomi and I am really sorry for saying this all to you now but I need him back. I want him back

 

I started shaking my head, this is making me crazy

 

I wanted to shout into her face and tell her how much pain this caused me, then why the did she choose me? Why the is she saying this all to me just now? She just killed me a thousand times by hearing those -up wrong decisions from her.

 

She’s so freaking insensitive

 

And she’s making me insane

 

All this time

 

I thought we will be happy, I thought I am making her happy.

 

 I was the only one being trapped in a conclusion that I am making her happy when in fact, she’s in regrets.

 

Full of regrets

 

She regrets choosing me over him

 

Her last confession leaves me dying on the spot

 

“I am still in love with my Ex”

 

 

“STILL INLOVE WITH MY EX”

 

EX.

 

 

EX..

 

 

 

EX…

 

 

 

STILL INLOVE WITH MY EX MY ! HAPPY APRIL FOOLS XD

 

I’M SORRY FOR MAKING YOU GUYS ALL HELL CONFUSED AND ANGRY AND MAD

 LOL DON’T KILL ME! LOVEYOU GUYS! XD <3

 

SO ENJOY READING THIS ONE, YUP IT’S REAL THIS TIME HUEHUE *SMIRK* *SMIRK*

 

 

Author’s POV

 

They were at the balcony where no one is at sight, only those stars and sky were there to witness the two couple who’s madly in love to each other’s. Pair of arms wrapping on the waist of another, forehead against each other’s, drowning from the feelings only the two of them could feel.

 

They pulled away and their heart seems to skip another beat

 

Bomi gave Chorong a tender and Oh so loving look that Chorong could feel herself being melted on the spot, couldn’t shake off the giddy feeling inside, Chorong shyly  stare back at her.

 

Those lovely yet y look of her that never failed to bring Chorong to cloud nine

 

Bomi on the other hand just couldn’t take her eyes off of Chorong’s natural beauty face, those brown eyes that Bomi love to stare at every now and then, those pointy cute nose and those plump pink y lips that Bomi couldn’t get enough. Realizing how lucky she is for having such a Goddess girl in her life brings a genuine smile across her face.

 

Sensing that Bomi’s face were getting nearer and nearer at hers. Chorong could feel herself closing her eyes, Instead of feeling a lip against her. She could feel a sweet long kiss on her forehead. This made Chorong smile like an idiot. She could feel Bomi’s passion and love through it. Chorong feel special and loved and she couldn’t ask for more.

 

Bomi grin at her and planted a cute peck on her nose

 

Then down to her plump lips

 

They both close their eyes and feel each other’s warmth.

 

This feels so right

 

So right that Bomi starts moving . Chorong quickly responded and they started making out

 

No tongue involved or anything.

 

Just a simple romantic making out

 

Bomi’s hand seems to have a mind on its own and started caressing Chorong’s waist like a precious treasure up to her arms and neck.

 

Chorong bring her arms up and wrap it tenderly around Bomi’s neck.

 

They both pulled away and exchange a sweet smile.

 

Chorong look straight at Bomi’s eyes and she could see through it the love and lust that Bomi kept inside.

 

Chorong initiated the kiss this time and capture Bomi’s lips on hers.

 

Biting her bottom lip

 

 

 

“Urghh”

 

Bomi groan and she could feel herself heating up at the moment. She bring her hands at Chorong’s back and starts caressing it again bringing it closer to her if that is even possible.

 

Soon, tongue were in contact and they start battling

 

It soon became passionate

 

“ Hmmm”

 

And becoming rough in a second

 

  •  

They stumble their way on Bomi’s bedroom and Bomi place Chorong gently on the bed while not breaking their intense making out

 

“nggh~” Chorong’s mouth were open wide while Bomi is doing her job so well that Chorong couldn’t deny how good Bomi is when it comes to satisfying her ‘needs’.

 

“God” Bomi groan against Chorong’s bare skin while planting a smooch around her neck not forgetting where her soft spot is while biting it ever so slowly. Satisfied by the hickey she made, Bomi smirk while looking at it. Oh it’s just so precious and it suit Chorong so damn much.

 

Bomi rolled her eyes when Chorong frustratingly pulled her head down so she could continue eating her already, besides Chorong badly needed her down there just what is Bomi taking so freaking long.

 

As frustrated as she is, Chorong slap Bomi in the shoulder.

 

Chorong brows rise up in annoyance which Bomi find so ever y.

 

“Ohhh~ someone’s impatient I see” Bomi dives in again as soon as Chorong gave her a frustrated glare.

 

That tingling sensation that Chorong could feel is too much and pleasurable at the same time

 

So good that she couldn’t get enough

 

Bomi help Chorong pulled her shirt off of her and toss it aside

 

Soon, Bomi find her way to Chorong’s cleavage and starts it with warmth and passion. It felt so good that Chorong could feel herself releasing juices already just by feeling those around her chest.

 

Bomi starts like a hungry baby and Chorong starts making noises that Bomi long to hear

 

“So…Good anng!”

 

Bomi starts going down

 

And downwards

 

And find Chorong’s abs, damn those fined abs that Bomi couldn’t help but admire for a moment

 

“Perfect” Bomi commented

 

Chorong blush at the compliment and shyly hide under her arms

 

“Bom” She whine

 

“Arra arra” Bomi giggled and continue her naughty doings and starts taking Chorong’s shorts leaving her with only

 

Bomi lean down and starts smelling it

 

“Damn Bom Are you a dog?!” Chorong hissed, slightly blushing in embarrassment

 

“I could smell my victory baby” Bomi remark and starts giving it a long deep , Chorong almost in satisfaction

 

“Hooolly shiiiit~” Chorong bit her lip in anticipation

 

Bomi starts rubbing Chorong’s wet using her thumb with a still on

 

“Take it ugh off”

 

“Sure” Bomi took it off by the use of her tongue and teeth down the way, never breaking her eyes off of Chorong who’s having a hard breathe right now.

 

Bomi then lean down and Chorong so light

 

Up

 

And

 

Down

 

Slower at first

 

Then

 

Deepen it to her oris, the most sensitive part of a women’s body

 

 

Playing on it like it’s so treasured and loved

 

“Oh Bom! ” Chorong deepen her head on the pillow while biting her bottom lip in excitement, Bomi is not inside yet, yet she felt satisfied as

 

“Go in—HOLY BOM!”

 

Bomi enter Chorong’s core so suddenly and starts going inside in and out, fast and deep

 

“OH GOD~ Ack! I’m --”

 

Chorong could feel herself squirming in satisfaction and her inside starts tightening as if it will burst out anytime soon

 

Bomi didn’t stop as she hit her G spot like a pro and made Chorong so hard with a scream

 

“HOLY SHIIIT! AHHHH” Chorong close her eyes so tight as she all her way out

  •  

Two fingers, in and out and Chorong starts going insane

 

“FUUUHHHH” Chorong starts incoherent words and Bomi starts smirking hearing it.

 

“So damn good right?” Bomi fasten her pace and Chorong could feel her eyes rolling in so much pleasure

 

“BOM!!!’

 

  •  

“Ride on me baby”

 

Chorong straddled Bomi and sat directly at Bomi’s core

 

They are both and sweating so damn much

 

This only made them look so tired but couldn’t just stop anyway

 

Chorong starts grinding slow at first. Biting her lip to prevent herself from

 

Bomi stare at Chorong’s face and she is so so ing bad

 

“! Bom”

 

Chorong fasten her pace and she started riding Bomi, creating a wild pleasuring sensation on both cores grinding against each other’s

 

Bomi groan in so much pleasure as it hit her right in the feels

 

“So damn good! Urgh!”

 

Both of them enjoyed the night with a satisfying activity they might admit

 

 

  •  

AUTHOR’S NOTE:

IT IS STILL ON DUE WEEK I PROMISE RIGHT? LOL XD

 THE SCENE I WROTE ABOVE IS SO LATE FOR 1ST DAY OF APRIL FOOLS SO, I REALLY AM SORRY LOL,

 

ANYWAY, HOW’S THE CHOMI’S VERSACHE ON THE FLOOR THING? XD

NOT Y ENOUGH HMM?

I DECIDED NOT TO DETAILED IT GUYS SO I’M SORRY. XD

 

Anyway I was wondering if it is fine for you guys to finish this story before my class starts on June so yeah. I will be busy by then and will surely have no time to update this so….maybe I have to finish this story as soon as possible. What do you think guys?

 

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Alaayyssa23 #1
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Alaayyssa23 #2
Chapter 25: Please update athournim
Sam-TheReader
#3
Chapter 25: Update soon please :c
ChomiChobbom
#4
Author nim~ please comeback
ChomiChobbom
#5
Chapter 25: Still waiting for this to have a comeback, fighting author nim! We miss you so much ~ this coming monday will be 1 year after you updated T_T
Bunnylovehamster
#6
Chapter 25: Please update soon authornim. *sob sob*
NotYourOrdinaryBabe
#7
Chapter 25: Im still hoping that you'll update :(
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 25: *spoiler alert to the readers out there + major comment coming through*

I remember reading this when the chapters came out haha. One of my favourites. Ah so it seems chapter 25 was released in 2018! Wow not too long ago, and it's such a good chapter. So I just reread the whole thing and wanted to talk a bit. First of all, it's. so. good.

Not that you will, but if I can request it, please don't rewrite anything. I can see that your writing greatly improved from the beginning to the end and that's actually really fun to witness through reading! It also creates a lot of character development which is amazing.. Chorong started off with a temper and screaming all the time, to becoming this cute softie who is in love with Bomi. The confession and final arc with Suho was perfect! Suho's reaction was realistic, and so was their guilt, but it's also light-hearted enough that we readers aren't in pain - which is a good thing in it's own way. The fic Untouchable Face deals with cheating in a more mature way, so I think the difference is really refreshing!! Idk if what I'm saying is coming out right. I'm trying to say that I love this story in its own right.

When Chorong made her final decision, realising the one she is in love with, and then made that mistake of saying it as a response to Suho omg it was so funny and great. Then chasing after Bomi and those kisses, saying those words that Bomi never thought she'd hear, that was breathtaking. A different side to Chorong. Flashbacking to what happened with Suho after that was such a good way to do it. Argh the pace was so good!!

And this fic has such golden moments my god. Chorong finding out just how hurt Bomi is, Chorong feeling herself thinking of Bomi (hehe), Bomi being tired of this and telling Chorong to leave--how Chorong badly wants to hear Bomi's true feelings during that wowowow, Bomi hiding from Chorong in the cafe, Bomi being sincere in the cafe, Bomi saying hurtful words to Chorong before showing how much she loves her, Chorong's confused feelings the entire time too, and that all leads up to the end where I have even more to say!

Bomi needing to court Chorong to be her gf was the funniest fluffiest sh*t ever I loved it!! How did you come up with such greatness to fill this whole story gosh.. The April fools chapter haha, but we were rewarded with sweet sweet love. And now, the last chapter. What I personally really like about this is that it can pass off as an ending. The continuation of the story revolves around Bomi's ex who had supposedly passed away, so if we take out the whole idea that she's alive, there's already a perfect spot to end at, like ending version 1, or the end of part 1, if not just The End. And like I said how your writing seemed to have improved as the story progressed, Chapter 25 touches upon the disappointment of forgetting their anniversary, and oh my how you made me feel for Chorong. You can see the pure love she feels for Bomi. All that worry and guilt that came was fragile and beautiful. The way she spoke her heart out to Bomi was BEAUTIFUL. That "I love you. I love you. I love you" 3 times in succession melted me, fckkk. And how Bomi just chuckles asking why she's crying so much like Chorong is being silly, having prepared all that and she should be upset but she isn't... awwwhhhh.. Their love... Your mind..... can i cry pls

So I love this story. One of my favourites. You say there's more and I'll be waiting, but just know that I'm so happy with what you've given us already and my mind is at ease at that. Thank you.
ChomiChobbom
#9
Chapter 25: And to bomi's reaction what would be her reaction if naeun cameback and also chorong jealous rongie ^___^ please update author.
ChomiChobbom
#10
Chapter 25: Please update~ can't wait to naeun's appearance.