Loving you like this.

Description

Luhan isn't quite sure how he come to be the school's punching bag, either way, he just wants an escape. Someone named Shixun starts texting him and maybe he could be what Luhan is dreaming of.

Foreword

So I started writing this without an idea of what direction I wanted it to go. I at writing stuff like this!

I know I'm meant to be writing 'Confused.' but I already lost my motivation! I posted up chapter 2 though! I'll be writing chapter 3 soon! I hope you like it! :D

I made a few spelling mistakes but I'm very tired so I might be back later to correct them. x'D I hope no one minds that!

WARNING: This story contains bullying!!

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Mikkae #1 Jul 3, 2016 21:04:11

I actually found the length fine although I do have a short attention span haha and I guess youre right in that you could've added some more angsty and/or fluffy moments between hunhan but I like that you erred on not dragging it out too long. I was wondering why some of the dialogue had "you was" as opposed to "you were" tho (think it was when Kai and Baek were talking after Sehun kissed Luhan) not sure if that was intentional as an accent or typo? But anyway I enjoyed this fic and it seemed pretty good esp since it was one of your first ones. Thank you for writing this!

MrsOhKim08 #2 Dec 27, 2015 23:41:46

I hope you'll do a sequel about their university life.^^,

KaoChan #3 Jul 22, 2015 07:20:26

Chapter 6: Too fast. The pace of the story is confusing. Eitherway, the plot is a 50/100. Good writing. Mind you, it's not the number of words that counts but the thought does more.

sasyazmee #4 May 16, 2015 12:32:27

Chapter 6: Just ....wow....Me likeyy...

Ohluhan101 #5 Jan 27, 2015 17:24:08

Chapter 4: //facepalm// aksmfkfkoajsdidoshsk

Ohluhan101 #6 Jan 27, 2015 17:17:32

Chapter 3: I count that as a date !

Ohluhan101 #7 Jan 27, 2015 17:05:47

Chapter 1: Wow. .I'm amazed.

-Junhoe- #8 Dec 13, 2014 05:35:52

Chapter 6: I love this story!!

It made me cry and it also made me happy :"D it gave me butterflies in my stomach, warmed me up in the chest and even brought tears to my eyes!!

ilestiani #9 Oct 4, 2014 10:20:12

Chapter 6: thats so sweet. i love it

Lucy682 #10 Oct 3, 2014 20:07:55

Chapter 6: Chapter 6: OMG !!! I love it!!! Author-Nim, can I ask if you're writing a sequel...? Maybe while they're at University or something?