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Beyond the Borders

Don’t go to the north, you’ll get shot by their psycopathic soldiers

Don’t go to the north, you’ll never come back, they’d kidnap and imprisoned you, torture you until death arrives and says hi

Don’t go to the north, you won’t be able to restore your faith back in humanity when you see how miserable their people are

Every child in the Republic of Korea has grown accustomed to these warnings, they are taught to not step their foot onto the north side of the island. They are being fed from the moment they can speak out a word from their mouth that the north side is forbidden, that it’s a horrible place, a nightmare, a country whose government never actually govern for the greater good, a country led by a fool toddler from a ruthless family, a nation where its citizens are suffering, dying and screaming for help but none of their sounds are heard, a land with propaganda painting lies every single day, fooling their people, without realizing that the leaders are the ones making the fool out of themselves in the world’s eye.

The southern kids are taught to despise the north with all their beings, to have this grudge that 60 years ago, their ancestors’ head were being slashed, chopped off, simply because they wanted freedom, they wanted their rights, because they were striving for the greater good for their descendants. The people in the south live with warnings about how hazardous and awful the north side is, they memorized, they breathed and they lived these rules.

But they should’ve put one last bait at the end of the warnings though, because if they did, Park Chanyeol surely would have never lost his sanity, would have never know how it feels like to have a heart given just to watch it being stomped away, he would never have to go through days of regretting, suffering and mourning.

There’s this one warning that the government forgot to put;

Don’t go to the north side, you’ll fall in love

If they did put that one bloody sentence at the bottom of the rules book, Park Chanyeol would have live like a normal bloke that he is, would live an ordinary life that he’s grown with since he was a baby, maybe he would’ve signed up as a music teacher, grow old alone and happy because women and kids are just not his thing; he would’ve live a boring routine and be ordinary, Chanyeol wouldn’t have to live this life all by himself and eventually realized that being alone , waking up alone and doing the same ordinary stuffs all over again for days, weeks, months and years without your loved one is like being intoxicated by poison and die slowly as you feel your lungs burns, your throat bleed and your head spinning.

Yes, the Republic of Korea’s government should’ve put that sentence as a warning towards their citizens.

But if they did, though, Chanyeol wouldn’t be able to change the history with his heart, he wouldn’t be able to save thousands of unknown lives just to lose one that he loves the most.

And frankly, he doesn’t know how to feel about that. 

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YukikoMiyano #1
Chapter 5: Your story is so good! The characters are beautifully written and your English is really good :-) Hope, you will update soon ~~
momijiii #2
Chapter 5: Wow! For someone still learning English, your English is brilliant! This is so so good. I'm excited for the next update~~~~
Mericur
#3
Chapter 3: wow i love how the story has POVs.
baekhanjuseyo
#4
I'm going to die this fic is so good! Keep going, you're doing really well! ♡

I will patiently wait for your updates!
Chopstickeu
#5
Chapter 4: Chankai's friendship in this fic is just *O* I love snotty Jongin. Ahem.

Ughhh, this fic is giving me THE feels. This chapter is so bright and uplifting, but I just know the impending doom is near. Oh, the angst is coming and it effectively makes me my pants. You see, I don't deal well with angst; I avoid it to extreme extents, but I have this urge in me to continue reading this fic.

But as you've stated in the author's note, you are going to take it slow to explore the inner workings of the characters and the overall plot itself, which makes us, the readers, anticipate it even more (or at least I do).

P.s If you want a beta reader, I'm up for the position ^^
ExoMsKungfuPandaTao #6
Chapter 4: Aigoo Channie is adorbz
Otpismyoxygen
#7
Chapter 3: Why the chapters are so shorttttt :(
I love every words and description you made. I love how you write chanyeol's feelings by using analogies that easy to understand but they still stung straight to the heart, and oh, i see the american novel is tfios isnt it :333
And goodness god i could sense angst because this is forbidden love and forbidden love never ended well and happy
Chopstickeu
#8
Chapter 3: That letter was gorgeous, ngl. The descriptions were on point and the analogies you used were stunning, and that ending paragraph made me really curious about the story's continuation.

Lol at this part: "My sister? She’s the legendary journalist that every TV stations have been dying to have." That sister is living my dream life.

I'm looking forward to this! Keep up the good work C:
hyunbaekbyun
#9
Chapter 1: Wow! This is so interestinggg :) I hope that there will be many more updates in the future! Keep up the great work~
luhanshii
#10
Chapter 3: Omg I've been dying for read this kind of fic. Good luck on writing thiss!