Twisted [HIATUS]

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 You wanted to fall in love and experience it just like everyone. what if you have to chose between your childhood crush, your 4d suitor and your flawless gay friend? who will you choose?

Foreword

Kim chanmi / oc / you

Easy go lucky. She wants to try every single thing in the world. Likes a certain guy named Luhan eversince she was young but never had the courage to introduce herself or even let Luhan know that she exists or that's what she thinks.

 

Oh Sehun

"A y beast with a very perfect face", well that's how he describes himself or should I say herself. Sehun likes every cute guy that he sees. He befriends and clings to all of them. He lives in glamour and glitters. In short he's gay or that's something we just know for now.

 

lu han

The dreamboy next door. Everyone's ultimate crush.  Girls and even boys find him attractive. He treates everyone as his bestfriend.

 

Do kyungsoo

The teacher's son. Shy but...wild? 4-D

 

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Author's Thoughts
molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.
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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
x-Sufiee-x #3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^
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