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Twisted [HIATUS]
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Sehun eyes everyone in the room. Sure he knows all of this people inside Luhan's house, he has been watching those people since middle school but he doesnt trust any of them especially that "big eyed weirdo" that he calls and even Luhan who was the nicest kid in the town.

"This is Oh Sehun. Do you guys remember him or know him?" Luhan pats Sehun's shoulders as he introduce him to his friends.

"Do you mean her?" Jongin snorts. He was the cockiest person that Sehun knows. Sehun rolled his eyes.

"Who will not know Oh Sehun. He was the most popular being at school aside from you hyung." Tao the guy with the dark circles suddenly blurted.

"You forgot Chanmi." Kyungsoo stood up and shouted out of the blue. "How dare you forget about her?" Kyungsoo pouted and grabbed a plushie.

"But I dont know how she looked like not after she introduced herself at the mall." Luhan said.

"Liar." Minseok threw a pillow at him.

Sehun frowned. Luhan lied? Did he know Chanmi? He was certain that from all of this people here only Luhan was the one who didnt even know her before.

"Can I ask how did I become famous? Was it because I'm gay?" Sehun asked.

"That's not entirely the reason, just 20% of it? Because the main reason was because you were always with Chanmi." Junmyeon explained. Sehun nodded though he was shocked that his guess was right, everyone really knows Chanmi.

"Can I ask another question?" Sehun raised his hand.

"Sure. This is not a classroom too by the way, why are you raising your hand?" Lu Han laughed.

"How did you guys know about Chanmi?" Sehun gulped.

"Unexplainable. It just happened like God's will." Kyungsoo looked up and smiled dreamy. There was an awkward silence and Sehun noticed that all of those guys' eyes were twinkling. "What the heck" Sehun thought.

Luhan coughed and scratched the back of his head, "Does any of you want to go bowling?"

Chanm

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molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.

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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
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#3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^