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Twisted [HIATUS]
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[Chanmi's POV]

"Look they're having a discount and new products!" Sehun squeals as we neared the make up store. Gracious heavens why is he so idk. I only nodded to make it obvious that I was really pissed off that he didnt even know that he hurt my feelings earlier but he didnt even noticed. He was smiling like a kid when we entered the make up store. The girls inside all looked disappointed because they thought Sehun was straight. Sehun tried all of the things he see in the back of his palm while I just stood there beside him playing with my phone. "I'll just pay for this. Wait for me outside if you're bored here." I didnt look at him. He wont even notice if I agreed or not. I just went outside and waited for him. I dont even like cosmetic products since I'm allergic and I honestly cant breathe inside because I can smell cosmetics everywere.

I stood at the railings and looked down. Am I seeing things because I'm so mad or is everything real? Is that Luhan at the ground floor? I shook my head and pinched myself. OH MY THAT'S REALLY LUHAN! MY CHILDHOOD CRUSH IS BACK. HE IS SO HANDSOME. I AM GOING TO MELT. CAN I JUMP HERE? WAIT NO. SHOULD I CALL HIM. NO I'LL ONLY LOOK INSANE. I SHOUL- My train of spazzing thoughts was stopped when someone hugged me from the back. It is a guy. WhO ARE YO- "I'm sorry."

Wait this is not a guy. I mean it's a guy but this one is not straight. Hello world! It's none other than Oh Sehun. Wow. "I'm really sorry." He placed his forehead in the back of my head. What is this gay doing? Did Dumbledore cast a spell on him inside the make up store that he becomes a real man and he is apologising now. He hugged me tighter because I was not replying. "Chanmi, I'm so sorry. I know my words at the cafeteria hurt you. I was just playing with you. You know I speak rudely but I dont really mean them. I'm sorry. Please be bubbly again." I suddenly realized people were looking at us if you're going to look at us we look like a couple who's super in love because we cant hide the fact that he is a guy and I'm a girl.

"A chocolate is okay with me." I blurted because I'm really getting uncomfortable with him hugging me really tight and I dont want to feel his bestfriend down there in case he hugs me tighter. "I'll buy you anything that you want!" He says as he kissed my cheek. WHY IN THE WORLD IS HE ACTING LIKE A STRAIGHT GUY?! WHY?! He let go of me and asked me what I want to buy. "Luhan" I said. "No one sells Luhan here and that is not chocolate girl." He says as he fixes his lashes. "I mean I saw Luhan here."

"YOU DID?! OMG THAT HOT CHINESE MAN. WHERE?!" By the way Sehun also likes Luhan. Awesome right? "Groundfloor at Giordano." He pulls me to the escalator. "Let's catch that pok

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molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.

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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
x-Sufiee-x
#3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^