Surprise

Twisted [HIATUS]
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"Sehun do you remember Teacher Doremi?" Chanmi sat beside Sehun in the couch. "Yes. Why are you asking me?" Sehun looked at Chanmi with an annoyed expression and goes back watching the TV while drinking a soda.
"Her son admires me. Can you believe that?" Sehun's eyes turned into big circles and he looked at Chanmi like Chanmi was a food. "No way."

"Yes way. He even sends me letters every morning during middle school, but I dont know tho, I never saw one." Chanmi shrugs and plays with the hem of the pillow on her lap.

"Ofcourse." Sehun whispered. Chanmi stopped playing with the pillow, "What did you said?"

"Nothing. How did you responded after you knew that?" Sehun placed stood up and reached for the popcorn on the table.

"Nothing suprising. They left right away but he asked for my number." Chanmi tried to grab for some popcorn but Sehun blocked her hand and yanked it away.

"Such an easy girl. Why did you give your number right away?" Sehun snorts.

"He is nice you know. I know her mother too. Nothing is wrong with it. Why are you so negative?" Chanmi stood up. She was annoyed at how Sehun commented and judged her.

Sehun pulled her hand and told her to sit down. "Chill girl. I was just concern."

"Concern? Pfft. I dont think so Sehun." She stormed off and ran upstairs to her room.

"Did I even say something wrong?" Sehun stood up and walk back and forth thinking if he should apologize or not. Chanmi probably was PMS-ing.

Sehun was about to leave when Chanmi's phone lit up on the table. He grabed the phone and saw that someone was calling. The call was from Kyungsoo.

Seeing that Kyungsoo was calling Sehun t

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molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.

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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
x-Sufiee-x
#3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^