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Twisted [HIATUS]
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I saw Sehun at the bus. I miss him so much. He's too silent it bugs me out. He's alone you idiot who would he talk to anyway. He was seated near the window. As far as I know, he hates sitting near the window especially when he's alone, ‘the scenery outside would only take your mind away from your body it's dangerous’ he would always tell me.

Sehun doesn’t look like Sehun. Sure his face is the same but his vibe right now isn't the Sehun I know. He has been like this for months.

"Hey" I waved my hand in front of his face but no he didn’t move or even reacted. He was staring blankly with no expression at all.

I sat on the seat beside him and just observed him. Maybe he doesn’t want to be bothered. Maybe he's thinking of boys and imagining being a princess. Psh. Too gay it irritates me.

Oh wait. He is wearing simple clothes, white v-neck shirt with his black Ray Ban sunglasses hanging on it and denim jeans. Sehun is too picky on clothes. He would never wear simple clothes. He would always wear bright-colored clothes.

What is wrong with him?

His hair is dishevelled like he just woke up, he has dark circles under his eyes, and he lost weight…..OHMYGOD SEHUN IS TAKING DRUGS?!

I shook him so hard his head was about to hit the glass. He finally responded and looked and groaned, “I am your friend Sehun, why are you not talking to me anymore? Why didn’t you tell me you were having a hard time? You could always tell me you

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molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.

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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
x-Sufiee-x
#3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^