Unexpected visitors

A litle bit of change
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We went inside his room; it was full of tissues, I guess the poor creature cried all night just like I did.

‘’ so what is it’’ his tone was soft and he looked pretty tired, he was coughing too, I got a little worried but we should talk first

‘’ Chan yeol oppa, u have to  come back, for your and our sakes, we’ll fix things up , clear this misunderstanding, kang jun and nana will be happily together and you’ll be just fine okay, let’s just go home, sung woo oppa made your favorite  dinner, and I got ‘’

‘’ jae hee please stop ‘’ I ignored him and continued talking

‘’ vanilla and strawberry ice cream’’

‘’ jae hee , u don’t get it’’

‘’ no oppa you’re the one who doesn’t get it, you’ll come home with and we will solve this like the adults we are okay? Now let’s go’’ I tried to hold his hand but he just pulled it away,

‘’ jae hee, please understand that I’m not ready to go back please stop insisting besides I thought u hated me , doesn’t this make u happy’’ I felt so hurt when he said that, does he really think that I hate the him ?

‘’ oppa please stop being stubborn and let’s go, you’re just tired and confused, let’s go home and clear this’’

‘’ why are u being nice now? I liked it better when u hated me ‘’  I was shocked when he said that, like I was hit by a car, or something ,I felt something wet touching my cheeks  I was crying, for the first time in life, I was crying I must really like him

 ‘’ u know I’m not that pathetic’’ all I heard was bla bla’s and my heart pounding like crazy, he just wouldn’t shut up and listen.

 ‘’and u just ca’’ he stopped talking and then Bam he suddenly fainted, just like that

I was scared, I just went on my knees and hold his head in my lap, and caressed his cheeks.

I started yelling for help, a blond guy came and gave him first aides, he said it’s because of exhaustion but he’ll be fine. 

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_YeongGi_
#1
Chapter 24: OMG! Have a very nice birthday!!!!!! Hope you have a really nice birthday party too!!!!!!! Can't wait for the other half of the chapter!!!!!! Love you too! Oh, by the way, do you want a poster to go with your fanfic? I don't mind making it for you since I don't have any requests now! Hehe~~
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#2
Chapter 23: It's up to you, really. You story you choice. So yea, hehe. Hoping to read the last chapter or maybe two chapters! Fighting! ~
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#3
Chapter 22: Oh.. So he broke up with Nari... But he is gonna end with JaeHee, right? I can feel Nari's pain in her heart when ChanYeol said he doesn't love her the way he does back then, I must have been hurt. Hope she will find another good man. Can't wait for the happy and perfect ending! Fight, author-nim!
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#4
Chapter 21: This is such a cool chapter! KangJun and Nana are together now!!! So happy for them!! BTS's new song 'Danger', I loved it totally, and I am glad you used it for this chapter. It turned out good! You're actually getting better at this! Update soon! Don't rush, we will not unsubscribe!
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#5
Chapter 20: Oh my god? What is it going to happen? Can't wait to read the next chapter! I mean I can't wait to read what happened in the house? I wish there will be lots of Jaeyeol special scenes. It makes butterflies in my stomach, like when it says they were about to kiss! And! You seriously hurted my heart for saying 'the only commenter'! But update soon!
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#6
Hello! Author-nim! Still waiting for the next chapter! Please update! Quick?
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#7
Chapter 17: Oh my god! Is that hyung the one who left the EXO? When will KangJun and Nana be together and KangJun not being angry at Nana? GaYeon and MinWoo is now together? She had the best birthday ever, man! But update soon! Really want to know of KangJun and Nana will be together and who will be that mysterious hyung be!
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#8
Chapter 16: This chapter was cute. Ga Yeon was having a lot of Fun! So Happy Birthday to her! At the end, it was very sweet for JaeHee to sing a song for Ga Yeon and everyone gave her compliments, that must felt good. I just spotted one spelling mistake there that isn't correct? But if you want me to tell you, I would sure do. The bit when ChanYeol was talking about his hyungs. The part about SuHo, you said about garden angel? Do you mean guardian angel? But it was a cute chapter. ^.^ Update soon!
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#9
Chapter 14: Hey, it's fine, dear. Everyone needs a positive comment to do well in the future! It's cool that you will add new characters in the fanfic, this will actually suprises people, cuz they don't know what is coming and that makes the fanfic more good. So Chanyeol and KangJun are good now? It's so nice when Chanyeol and JaeHee doing the 20 question game! They are now getting much more better knowing into each other now. JaeHee and Author-nim! Fighting! About Nana and KangJun, love cannot be destroyed.
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#10
Chapter 13: And please don't go on Hiatus! I am going to miss you! Your fanfic is actually doing very good! Please keep going. Even though you don't have a lot of comments. But those slient readers will be very happy to read your fanfic, that's why they subscribed! ^.^ but they just forget to do the commenting, but don't worry. I bet they will do soon! So please, keep fighting! If you have a writer block, we're here for you!