D-4 Goddess' Debut

✿ goddess l SM Ent.'s new girl group
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  after practice。
  june 17, 2014

Arin watched Goddess' three dancers practice their performance for the showcase on the day after tomorrow. They are holding a showcase before their debut so people can anticipate more of them. The seven girls are hoping and wishing the showcase will be successful and they know they must give their all to gain the public's interest and attention.

The leader came closer to the sound system control of the dance practice to pause the song. She looked up at the three, who briefly looked at her before sitting at the floor. Jenny leaned in the glass and sighed deep. Everybody knows they are tired, they are practicing for two hours straight. After a few seconds, Jenny slumped to the floor and closed her eyes to regain little energy.

"Take a 30-minute break, this is not healthy. Too much exhaustion can cause sickness" Arin reminded. She took three water bottles from the sofa and gave each to them. "Gomawo, unnie" Vivian said before drinking the water. "We have to perfect this, guys" Jenny calmly commanded and took a big gulp of the replenishing drink. Seoul nodded and took a sip.

Hyunsoo took a break from reading the manga and rested her head on Vee's shoulders. Vee stirred a little from her nap but quickly came back to resting. Sojee is taking selcas on her phone, doing aegyo and some serious faces on the camera. Hyunsoo looked at her and giggled. "Unnie, you're so vain" she joked in which Sojee pouted, not in front of her, but in the camera. "I know. I'm so pretty" Sojee teased still not looking at Hyunsoo. Hyunsoo giggled harder, making Vee wake up from her nap and lightly hitting Hyunsoo's head .

"Mianhae, unnie~" Hyunsoo cutely pouted and apologized. Vee ruffled her dongsaeng's hair and asked her to come with her in the cafeteria to get some chocolate bars in which Hyunsoo readily agreed. "These two" Sojee said before taking her last selca.

Before can Vee and Hyunsoo open the door, a guy suddenly opened the door first, revealing himself and shocking the two. "Jenny-unnie, you have a visitor" Hyunsoo announced, making all of them smile, well yes, especially Jenny... because it's her brother.

"Is it Jehan?" Sojee called out, browsing her newly taken selcas. She then tear herself away from a minute to her phone to eye Seoul. Seoul shook her head, controlling herself not to laugh. "So who it is--?" Sojee cut herself to look at the guy standing in the doorway. "Jay Park!" she pointed at him making all of the people in the room laugh at her quirkiness. "You better get used to seeing idols, baby. You're debuting soon" Jay told Sojee and winked at her after. Sojee just smiled and shook her head.

Jay walked closer to her sister, who is still sitting on the floor and gaining energy for their next practice session. "You must eat" he said and handed the paper bag to Jenny. "What is this?" she asked as she peeked from the paper bag, Seoul, Vivian and Arin took a peek too. "Chinese food?" the four asked in unison in which Jay laughed lightly and nodded, signaling agreement. "Thanks, oppa" Jenny smiled at him, his brother smiled back. "Share it with your members" he adviced, Jenny pulled out a thumbs-up at him.

"Yah~ Jenny-unnie, can I date him?" Vivian joked that made everyone laugh. Before Jay can open his mouth, Sojee retorted, "Ya, he winked at me first", which made everyone in the room laugh even harder. "Why isn't Vee and Hyunsoo here to witness this?" Arin said, still laughing. "Don't worry, babes. I'm polygamous" Jay tease-flirted. Jenny punched his brother lightly in his arm. "Oppa, don't be like that. You're embarrassing me" Jenny told him still giggling. Jay put both of his arms in his little sister's shoulder, hugging her. "If you told me so" he said after letting go and walking to the doorway. Jay gave the girls a salute and once again, winked at Sojee. "Good luck, babes" he announced before finally leaving the room.

"That's two winks in a night from the Jay Park" Sojee bragged but teasing is super evident from her voice. The four girls sitting on the floor laughed, especially Vivian. The girls heard the door clicked open. "Is it Mr. Park Jaebeom again?" Sojee said before looking at the doorway. "What did we miss?" Vee asked, walking to the sofa with Hyunsoo, hand-in-hand. Hyunsoo's drinking Coke from the cafeteria.

"Everything" Seoul said and that made everyone in the room crack up again. Even though tired and nervous, laughing a lot made the girls' night.

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EunJinHaneul
#1
Chapter 33: Qsfhfgjhll rome as sojee's ex I KENNOT. and yaaaassss. have you seen yongguk???!! seoul knows whats up maaaan
magniloquent
#2
Chapter 33: yASSSSS. YOU UPDATED. O U O

sojee's bra must've felt special because it got its own dedication lmao.
on the other hand, though, im really curious about Arin&Taecyeon and Seoul&Daehyun's relationship.
like, really, really curious.
out of all the songs, though, i favor taeyang's love you to death and infinite h's alone.

nice update! it got me laughing! o/
iCiere
#3
Chapter 33: O u o
Nice revamp its pwetty
Hehe
HAHAAHAHAH the dedications part though she dedicated it to her underwear lmao
XD
And am shocked to know that rome is an ex of sojee o u o time for some consolation
magniloquent
#4
Chapter 31: wow, i just noticed the chap now but.

JACK-JACK IS HINTING SOMETHING??
UGH WHY DO I KEEP ON SHIPPING JACKSON AND SOJEE.
THEYRE PERF OKEI.
and i like how goddess is already in after school club.
i mean, like, they should be bc they're awesome nuff said.
and, not to mention, seoul is goddess' awesome main rapper.
emphasis on awesome bc my baby is. yes.
-sayayuu
#5
Chapter 30: /CASUALLY COMMENT ON THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER HERE/
mouuu seould and daehyun were fighting xD
and i thought she was her fan xD
i cant when henry flirt...he is being....silly smooth >~<
what a smooth way there 143 ;; <3

and i am happy that "goddess" is busy (?)
and i am happy that you are very consistent...
I LOVE GODDESS AND YOU GUYS <3
magniloquent
#6
Chapter 30: CAN I LOVE BOTH OF YOU PLS.
OMG YOU GUYS UPDATE FAST IM NOT EVEN KIDDING.
IT MAKES ME ANTICIPATE MORE UPDATES ㅋㅋㅋ.

on the other hand, i ship sojee and jackson, too. is that illegal?
sigh. the life an an idol, though.
but at least its their last performance for the week, well that's what i read orz.
they can rest after that... right?
fIGHTING, GODDESS!! ASDFGJKL.
iCiere
#7
Chapter 30: omg they are working so hard
btw, in the previous chapter
HAHAHAHAHAHHA
i'm not kidding or insulting but the way the guys pick up girls in this story
xD
I SMILE I LAUGH I LAUGH HARDER ITS SO DAMN CHEESY AND FUNNY
hehe
waiting for your updates
magniloquent
#8
Chapter 29: cough cOUGH.
WTH DID SEOUL AND DAEHYUN ARGUE ABOUT OMG. SOBS.
seoul likeD him?????? /sobbing hard bc wtf did seoul/daehyun do to ruin my otp/
BTW, SEOULJEE FTW!!
IS THE SHIP SAILING? OR IS IT JUST ABOUT TO FLOAT???


ON THE OTHER HAND, HENVEE ANYONE???
HE GAVE HER HIS PHONE NUMBER.
IM GONNA CONTACT IT NOW. JK.
BUT OMG- HENRY YOU FLIRT HOW DARE YOU.
-sayayuu
#9
Chapter 28: /coughs/ Arin, you should listen to the J sibling, Taecyeon is a nice guy :p
-sayayuu
#10
Chapter 28: so...ARIN FOUND HER NEW PHONE ADDICTION (?)
/chuckles/
sooo many things happened here >~<
too many couple which is great!!!!!
out of all...VEESOO, SEOULJEE AND SOVEE looks cute >~<
i am so want to go the cafe! CAFE DANIIIIII
omg the bipolar maknae, vivian xD