In the dark again...

Despise...

Being in the same dark room; scared her. She hated this place…she despised this place and she despised Yunho more than Jaejoong.

He sneaked behind her and embraced her shoulders.

“Don’t cry…I feel bad when you cry.”

“Why me?”    She whispered again feeling the lump on .

“Because I like you…I genuinely like you but unlike humans…I can’t genuinely be nice. I have to act nice so, be careful before you mess with me.”    His embrace got slightly tighter around her.

“What will you do with me?”

“Nothing…I won’t even touch you…until you want it.”

He turned her around to face him, the tears away; he pressed his lips against hers forcefully while she tried to push him off her. His strength was enough proof that if he wanted, he could take her but for his amusement…he won’t.

But she tried nevertheless to push him away and she was getting out of breath.

Guessing her need for air, he pulled away while she panted. He winked at her before leaving.

She felt his embrace fading; leaving her alone in the dark room. She fell down on the floor crying.

She could no longer have faith in the real world, the virtual world or even…the demon realm.

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suhashiny
#1
Chapter 7: How on earth is it stopped from here?!
JESLEN #2
This story has the right pace, well-blended fantasy and reality elements, strongly developed characters, planned out details, and great foreshadowing. I didnt need to read the prequel because your story can stand on its own. I quite disagree with machiatto. This story was obviously planned out really well, each character was greatly significant to the story. Your characterization is some of the greatest here in AFF, considering that this is only short-chaptered. The open ending has both pros and cons though. It allows readers to have their own assumption while it can also frustrate them. Im quite ambivalent about the ending. From a writer's pov, it's a means to end the story and at the same time, to avoid readers' disappointment in terms of the outcome of the duel. While the ending can also pave way to a possible sequel, one that may lure readers into reading, after finding out which of the possibilities they want to happen. Great work!
christian_DO
#3
Chapter 7: My god!!!I hope they work together or maybe all those 3 posibilities would be done all at the same time.
christian_DO
#4
Chapter 6: Bruh really?!!!!Oh My Gosh!!!I love how you wrote and put the pieces together as to why everyone was involved.Can't wait for the fight!
BAP4life99
#5
Chapter 6: Omo such a good story!!
mkjc_III
#6
Chapter 6: OMO!!!! sequeelll pleaseeee >.<
christian_DO
#7
Chapter 5: OMGGGGGGGG!Can't wait for the epic battle.
faridpraderago #8
Chapter 5: wow! Now that i read this new chapter,i just think, 'how weird actually jaejoong is?'
and some parts of its make me smile like when jae ask whether yunho will like his new hair color or not XD
it makes me wonder 'this is jaeyuki story right? Seriously,it's Not a yunjae? LOL'

it's getting more exciting now!
I can't wish jaeyuki will end up together cause i'm afraid you'll crash my hope,kkk~
faridpraderago #9
Chapter 4: crap! You really are annoying to death -_-
why did you stop there,huh? At least lemme know who's the teacher.
And now...i'm wondering what might be happen with them...maybe the teacher is jaejoong himself since he said 'best of the best' who else beside him? Or maybe one of his demon friend?
And what happen when she finally make a fight with jae? Jae will win for sure cause he's a demon and she will be his bride.
But,I wonder if she win and get her freedom but then she miss jaejoong,LOL

i hate to admit it....but yes! I want it more!!!!!!!;;;;