Because you're perfect
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I require you to hire a beta-reader or co-author, there are a lot of mistake in your story.
-Bold letters are those I edited.
- Italicized are lines those from your story.
( This falls under grammar) Tips to help you in improving your English Grammar: There are some rules you must follow in using punctuation marks. One is leaving a space after every comma and period. As well goes on quotation marks. (e.g. Beautiful, talented, successful, she is Gummy Megpoid.) And also, leaving a space before the right parenthesis and after the left parenthesis. (e.g) And never ever use virtual language such as Lol, OTL, xD etc. Never indent a paragraph, as of, we're writing a fanfiction not an essay. In using periods to end a word, they must be always three, not two not one, but three. Dont evr ever put your author's note inside a parentheses while the chapter is still going on, in any condition! In a dialogue, the first letter must always be in big letter! In introducing the speaker of the dialogue, always use words (e.g. said, muttered, etc.) not like this - Tao!
Title: 5/10
It is a general rule to capitalize every first letter of every word in a title, except for the words to, and, from, etc. It is also very common to have the word "Perfect" in the title. And your title gives a ro
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