Forevermore.
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Title: 7/10
For one, never end a title with a period. As of, it's only a word/phrase not a title, no subject and a predicate. But, Forevermore is a very good title as of it isn't frequently used, but still have that angst-y feel. It also does refers to your story. Also the "Always." title for the last chapter.
Foreword: 10/10
Your description makes me remember something from my childhood. "When you meet someone, you never really forget them."
I also love the way how you use the circle method; To end at the beginning, through the foreword.
Plot: 13/15
Very significant, I must say. As of I never really read something with a different combination of genres. A if, I'm having a eat-all-you-can meal for all the spices I taste there. The combination of futuristic and angst is well balanced! Though, the words, grow up reminds me of Disney''s Peter Pan and Wendy, having Baek as Peter Pan. Its a little bit dramatic for a fangirl to have a family though, 'cause as far as I've know, every fangirl saves themselves for their bias, but it is your story after all.
Character Development: 14/20
I love the Hyejin's character development as he always loved Baekhyun so much. The fact tha
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