The Devil Wants You
★♛❝ CRYBABY Review Shop❞♛★Graphics: 9/10
Eh? I as a graphic designer never appreciated other works of other designers other than kimxbb, MusicChibi and other famous ones, because I'm so selfish and self-minded. But now, I really love that poster! Waahhh!~ Its so cute. But yet I found the two anime girls to be 'Shounen-type' most likely, the y type. Why not find an amazing, cool girl that's little bit innocent looking. But still, I will praise the designer for doing such piece of art! I wish you have a background though.
Title: 8/10
For one, when I saw your application in the comment box below, I assumed that it was since the term 'Wants' already had my mind racing. But when I looked at the Genre section, I saw that it was Fantasy. But it was great and relates to the story. Amazing! And it also triggers the fingers of authors to click on the story.
Foreword: 10/10
It was nice. To be honest, I'm really jealous of your writing skills. I really look up to you right now. The credits were properly placed, the banners, etc!
Plot: 10/10
Action, Fantasy, Romance, reminds me of that one anime and manga series I used to watch; Sword Art Online. The plot was something that emerging to be common since many writers tend to use it nowadays. I never really had idea of how to write Romance in a fantasy series. I never imagined how authors managed to do so. And yet this didn't came out so harsh.
Grammar: 8/10
Hmm...How shall I say this,
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