Of Faith,Hope and Love
★♛❝ CRYBABY Review Shop❞♛★Title: 7/10
To be honest, I have seen a lot of stories with the same formatting, even my sister who writes in fanfiction.net has a story title like this., I know you could do better.
Foreword: 7/10
When using a series of dots, three is always enough, no more, no less.
Great English Grammar though!
Also, try sticking into one POV, you changed from the 2nd one to the third again and again.
Plot : 13/15
I like the unique ideaq of the girl being Indian as of, as far as I've now, Korean girls are the ones popular here. But the break up - meet agin plot is really overused.
Character Development - 20/20
Perfect. Its so smooth. The flow of the characters relationship towards each other is great!
Poster and Background - 8/10
I don't like seeing the poster under foreword section.
And their faces were at the bottom, which gives more way to the font tittle. try requesting to cuteismysterious, she could provide you something what I'm telling you.
Grammar - 20/20
I see no mistake
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