The Imposter
★♛❝ CRYBABY Review Shop❞♛★Title: 9/10
Title is great and does imprint on readers. The great test I did was type your title on google search and add asianfanfics at the end. And actually, your story is in the first page, the first result even. Now, about the good suggestions about the title, I suggest to not change it but I do have a title in mind. The title I was thinking about is Two-Faced but it sounds horror and creepy so I wouldn't recommend that. Good job for the title!
Poster: 10/10
I won't contradict the designer for this.
Foreword: 8/10
Looking at your foreword, I think the best thing that you did is introducing the characters on and indirect way. So at the end, we knew who does what and what is happening. That is a good point for us to catch up. For the credits...I think the poster and the background section is a little too much space. So yeah...
Plot: Hmmm...It reminds me of a story my sister created. Something psychological or along that line? It was something that is grown up. Mostly people in their 20s would like to read something mature like this. It was something that really reminds me of my mom since my mom work's inside the courtroom. They were engaged but
Character Development: 19/20
On Chapter Seven, you showed Se Yeon is really prideful, after Shi Hoo embarrassed her, she still stupidly walked out of his office like nothing happened.
Shi Hoo is stupid, why would someone who is engaged show up in public with different women? Hahaha. In Korea, those aren't acceptable. It could create a scandal!
If these two people, Se Yeon and Shi Hoo are combined, they create such a idiotic-ness. Miss Kim knew that Shi Hoo and Chae Won are engaged but why would she still lurk around Shi Hoo and do some...you know...
Chae Won on the other hand just stayed calm and cool after knowing that her husband-to-be have an affair with Se Yeon.
Chae Won also showed that she yearns for love at Chapter
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