Title (4.5/5)

Simple yet intriguing. It makes people curious on what the story would be :) And it especially doesn't give the story away

Graphics (4.5/5)

The graphics are pretty and I like the vintage-y feel there :D

Description and Foreword (8.5/10)

The Description's okay but you didn't have to put poster and background credits to yourself 'cause it's kind of unnecessary.
The Foreword in the story is really good especially your characters. The thing is that your dialogue just kind of gave off the story. I would try to stop at the "Are you okay?" dialogue. But all in all it's good!
NOTE: I think your Description and Foreword got mixed up 'cause what I did is my author's note is in the Foreword and my Introduction  and dialogue is in the Description, but the characters are in the right place. :3

Layout (4.5/5)

Your layout's good and it doesn't distract the reader's attention since the colors are cool and not bright. (unless your readers are super fans of them and they just like looking at their faces xD)

Plot (30/35)

I really like your plot! I like the fact that there is a love triangle 'cause I thought it's only going to be Baekhyun and Tiffany's story. But no Luhan had to ruin it! xD It makes the story better since Baekhyun has some competition! (Chapter 2 had a twist to me by the way xD)

Characterization (8/10)

Tiffany - I like the fact that Tiffany's a barista since I mostly see them as singers and artists. Espec