Do you like someone?

Description

HighSchool/School/College/Whatever AU; Jinyoung has this big crush on Baro and everyone's pissed off because it's been too long since it started and it was getting ridiculous. Things would have probably been fine if it weren't for Baro's thick skull, but hey, who told Jinyoung to fall in love with an idiot?

Foreword

Please, be aware that english isn't my first language and my writing is pretty poor. And I know the description is just lame, but I'm bad at it XD sorry

Oh, right, I still haven't grasped much of their personalities, so please tell me if I can change anything to make it better. Thanks a bunch for reading!! And, please, if you can, leave a comment. It's good for the heart — idk yours, but mine gets happy.

 

Aaaand I was supposed to reread the whole thing and search for mistakes, but I'm really not up to it so I'll leave it like this. I'm deeply sorry about the grammar monsters that are there, but hey, could be worse :D they could be a cockroach, and that's worse than a monster

SilenceMaker
I'm writting and rewritting it hours and hours every week but somehow I'm not managing to finish it. I really, really thank you all for your patience ;w;

Comments

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BlueAlien
#1
Chapter 9: Your story is really good! Keep writting~ <3
soulgyu
#2
I love this story so much I hope you update soon ^^
sh-reaper
#3
Need to read... really 8(
afiercesong #4
I liked this a lot :D
catdeprived
#5
Chapter 6: I don't really understand this chapter D: But maybe that's me XD
Maybe the next chapter will make more sense to me!

Thank you for updating! I love this story so much! <3
Jinyoungie- #6
Chapter 4: Seriously! I dont know that you update before ch.4!! Thats why i felt something missing!
Okay now i comment!^^
The chapter was great and day by day your writing skills improved! Good job,buddy! :D
Thats why baro act cold? But i mean is he mad because his calls werent answered? Or he knows that jin sleep in hyunjun is dorm? Huaaa! Im soo curious!!
Please update fast as you can! Anyway take your time! :)
carmie96
#7
Chapter 5: Hi there new subbie here! I was looking for a B1A4 fanfic and I like your so far!

Jinyoungie! Please let someone save him! He can't get ! No!
Baravois #8
Chapter 5: Oh my goodness......can't wait for the next chapter....
Fight for him, Baro....Though you might act totally clueless
We all know how totally clumsy and clueless Jinyoungie can be:)
Jinyoungie- #9
Chapter 5: Poor baro..,,poor jinnie..
But..
Good job hyunjun? Finally baro jealous.. but still my heart aches when i read... this chap..
Good luck.. waiting for the next chap..