SPACE AND TIME COLLABORATION REVIEW || hiatus||

Description

 

STATUS: Closed till October 2nd , no more requests accepted.
Welcome to SPACE AND TIME REVIEW SHOP ! 
We definitely give you the most frank and honest reviews in the best way we can.
Find out how others think of your story. we are people with very different opinions working together, so your story is in better hands. Your review will be out within a week and a half.
So fill up the request form below, and post it under comments!
AFF username: 
Story title:
Story link:
Does your story include?
- ?
-Yuri?
-Rated)?
- ( JJKPOP ONLY)?
Any comments?:
Do you want to have your story under our rankings ?
- Preferred reviewer?
 
 
A/N: You CAN request for both of us, however we will only do so if we are free. So it is advised to state a preferred reviewer first, then add on in the comments. Stories who have preferred reviewers will be placed BEFORE stories who do not specify and it will not be uncommon to see stories who come after you but have a review first due to having a preferred reviewer.

Foreword

 

TERMS AND CONDITIONS
1.Firstly we're sorry IF we give a bad review. We do not mean to offend, but that would be what we think of it. It had been discussed among us and our friends and this give mark we've given you. 
2. If you want to cancel your review , please PM InkWarrior4 or jjkpop by 48 hours after you post the request .
3. Don't rude to us. Seriously .
REVIEW RUBRIC
Title (/10) 
 
Description&Foreword (/10) 
 
Content&Plot (/50) 
 
Characters (/35) : 
 
Grammer&Spelling (/20) :
 
Organization/Flow (/35) :
 
Overall satisfaction (/20) : 
 
First impression(/20)
Total : /200
 
jjkpop
Sorry for the delay of the reviews - both of us got in trouble, studying for our exams. For the unfinished reviews please give us another 3 days. Sorry, again.

Comments

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TheScribbler #1
Chapter 10: Thank you!'n actually, yes, I did make some major mistakes there... :) so thank you for pointing them out!!
TheScribbler #2
AFF username: TheScribbler

Story title: Luhan's Puzzle

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/563040/luhan-s-puzzle-angst--luhan-sehun-baekhyun-lay

: Yes, but not yet
Nictaeny9
#3
AFF username: Nictaeny9

Story title: Dark Ties

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-dark-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

Does your story include:-Yuri

-Rated): no

- ( JJKPOP ONLY): nope, not yet

Any comments?: thanks for taking time to review!

Do you want to have your story under our rankings : yea sure why not?

- Preferred reviewer: anyone :)
deardeerhan
#4
Chapter 5: LOOL, thanks! Oh I think I expressed Jinah's glee when receiving a gift pretty..dramatically. But I didn't want her to be OOC. Sorry if it seemed like a drag for you! Character development is really what I'm going for, and with all honesty, everything has it's reasons~ & yeah, I'm thinking 70-100 chapters. Idek~~ LOL Thanks for this review!:)
flamzfox
#5
AFF username: flamzfox
Story title: Humanity's Code
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/547937/
Has , isn't rated.
Reviewer: Both ^^

I'll take whatever advice you have to give, so shot away ^^
Thank you for doing this <3
ValeKissme #6
Chapter 4: Thank you for your review ^^ I understood where I'm lacking. Now I don't know if just correct the description and the grammar/spelling mistakes and try to be better with the sequel or re-write the whole story... In the second case, will you review my work again?
myheartswishes
#7
AFF username: Myunghyun4ever
Story title: The Same Stage
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/335219/the-same-stage-romance-taemin-exo-exok-exom-kai
No , yuri, rated
Reviewer: Both preferably :)
Please focus on the description and foreword, as well as the story line too :)
deardeerhan
#8
AFF username: deardeerhan

Story title: Wolf, the Top Gang

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/482471

No (unless you count brotherly love? all characters are straight), no yuri, some rated chapters (2, as of now; I warn my readers why it's rated before I begin the chapter), and no .

Comment: I will credit you guys in the foreword, along with others. Thanks for taking your time to read/review my story! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I look forward to your review ^^ Also, this is an ongoing story so yeaah.

Ranking: Sure, haha. Not quite sure what this is though..?

Reviwer: I'd prefer both - more opinions, the better. But if one of you guys are busy, that's totally fine.
ValeKissme #9
AFF username: ValeKissme

Story title: My blood is cold as ice

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/469924

No and Yuri, just a little, little blood in one chapter and broken bones

Comment: there's a sequel, since most of people made me notice about the cliffhagger

Ranking: yes

Reviwer: whoever wants
GreenGardenPop
#10
Chapter 2: It was my first time trying to use the motif. After reading this review I thought I failed...xD
Thank you so much for your honest review^^