Reviewers

Name: jjkpop

Accepted genres: anything.

Strictness level: 9/10

Comments: I'm usually a silent reader and occasionally a writer, but I will comment on your story to the best of my abilities.

I'm more strict in content, and focus on more of the writing style . I also think through how to make the story deeper and more interesting.

Name: InkWarrior4

Accepted genres: Give to jjkpop. My innocence is at stake (or so she says)

Strictness level: 8/10

Comments: I'm more strict towards grammar errors, and am more strict with the originality of the story.

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TheScribbler #1 Oct 26, 2013 03:04:05

Chapter 10: Thank you!'n actually, yes, I did make some major mistakes there... :) so thank you for pointing them out!!

TheScribbler #2 Oct 8, 2013 05:34:41

AFF username: TheScribbler

Story title: Luhan's Puzzle

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/563040/luhan-s-puzzle-angst--luhan-sehun-baekhyun-lay

: Yes, but not yet

Nictaeny9 #3 Oct 6, 2013 06:16:36

AFF username: Nictaeny9

Story title: Dark Ties

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/543164/dark-ties-dark-romance-snsd-taeny-taeyeon-tiffany-yuri

Does your story include:-Yuri

-Rated): no

- ( JJKPOP ONLY): nope, not yet

Any comments?: thanks for taking time to review!

Do you want to have your story under our rankings : yea sure why not?

- Preferred reviewer: anyone :)

deardeerhan #4 Sep 17, 2013 00:03:34

Chapter 5: LOOL, thanks! Oh I think I expressed Jinah's glee when receiving a gift pretty..dramatically. But I didn't want her to be OOC. Sorry if it seemed like a drag for you! Character development is really what I'm going for, and with all honesty, everything has it's reasons~ & yeah, I'm thinking 70-100 chapters. Idek~~ LOL Thanks for this review!:)

flamzfox #5 Sep 16, 2013 08:05:37

AFF username: flamzfox
Story title: Humanity's Code
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/547937/
Has , isn't rated.
Reviewer: Both ^^

I'll take whatever advice you have to give, so shot away ^^
Thank you for doing this <3

ValeKissme #6 Sep 14, 2013 08:40:56

Chapter 4: Thank you for your review ^^ I understood where I'm lacking. Now I don't know if just correct the description and the grammar/spelling mistakes and try to be better with the sequel or re-write the whole story... In the second case, will you review my work again?

myheartswishes #7 Sep 14, 2013 07:03:26

AFF username: Myunghyun4ever
Story title: The Same Stage
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/335219/the-same-stage-romance-taemin-exo-exok-exom-kai
No , yuri, rated
Reviewer: Both preferably :)
Please focus on the description and foreword, as well as the story line too :)

deardeerhan #8 Sep 7, 2013 20:22:06

AFF username: deardeerhan

Story title: Wolf, the Top Gang

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/482471

No (unless you count brotherly love? all characters are straight), no yuri, some rated chapters (2, as of now; I warn my readers why it's rated before I begin the chapter), and no .

Comment: I will credit you guys in the foreword, along with others. Thanks for taking your time to read/review my story! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I look forward to your review ^^ Also, this is an ongoing story so yeaah.

Ranking: Sure, haha. Not quite sure what this is though..?

Reviwer: I'd prefer both - more opinions, the better. But if one of you guys are busy, that's totally fine.

ValeKissme #9 Sep 7, 2013 13:33:29

AFF username: ValeKissme

Story title: My blood is cold as ice

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/469924

No and Yuri, just a little, little blood in one chapter and broken bones

Comment: there's a sequel, since most of people made me notice about the cliffhagger

Ranking: yes

Reviwer: whoever wants

GreenGardenPop #10 Sep 7, 2013 06:01:10

Chapter 2: It was my first time trying to use the motif. After reading this review I thought I failed...xD
Thank you so much for your honest review^^