The Pretence Of Perfection

Description

Sometimes, when you're tired and down, the smiles you put up are fake.The chuckles you laugh are weary. Don't feel sad, don't cry. Your not alone.

Twelve boys walk a similar path. A path of bitterness, hatred and hope. A path of loneliness they will walk alone. If they wish change, they could not. If they wish to remain, others would slowly overtake them.

 These twelve boys are called EXO. Just like any other group, their lives only revolve around beating each other. But, they want it to disappear, Luhan want it to disappear.

Be careful what you wish for.

Foreword

The coldness seeps into Baekhyun's body, and he shivers against his own will.

Don't cry, don't shiver. It'll only hurt more..

A gentle, warm tear slips out of Baekhyun's eye, mixing with the rain tears, trickling down his face. It isn't anything more than a single droplet, but it still manages to shake Baekhyun out of his thoughts. He couldn't blame Kris, he did talk back, but he could blame the world, for creating their future in the way. He could even blame himself, for causing himself pain.

It was a blaming game he wanted to play, to drive his thoughts out, so he wouldn't feel guilty. So he wouldn't want to cry . So that his life could be little by a single flame. By the only single chance that he could ever make life better.

It wasn't until now that Baekhyun realises he's already lost that chance.

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Writerus_Da2nd #1
keep writing please, author-nim! hwaiting!
xingxian
#2
Chapter 7: You aren't cursing exo or anything
You're just writing what you want to write and there isn't anything wrong about that since this is a place for fan fiction
And your storyline is very unique and well thought out
You are not a bad writer either
Author-nim I hope you don't let that hater get to you though cause you have supporters and people who are anticipating for you ^^

Hwaiting !
TheScribbler #3
Omg. Good reviewer & god writer!!! ;) heart your story
xingxian
#4
this is so amazing, i love it so much esp the plot!
hwaiting, author-nim~^^
ScreamingMidget
#5
looks awesome :D i love your title <3
shuahsu #6
i hope that you would make it into a full story :)
it is really interesting :D
InkWarrior4 #7
I love this story!!!
AmethystLove
#8
I hope you turn it into a full story <3 ;~;
It's really good!!!