Trigonometric Loves

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Seohyun and Yesung were having a walk in the nearby park of the girls’ place. They were really enjoying their chit-chat along the gray road with pebbles decorated in a linear pattern, which was a sight of perfect romance.

“Yesung oppa! Where’s your place?”

“It’s a bit far from here. I live in an apartment with my brothers.”

“You have brothers??! I never knew. Why did you even keep it as a secret to me?”

Seohyun complained with a cute pout which never to be seen anywhere else in the world.

“Seohyun-ahh.. Don’t be mad. You never asked me too. Did you?” Yesung teased.

“OPPA!”

“Wowowowow!! The beastly Seohyun! Wahh! Such a very impressive grand sight! I shouldn’t enjoy this scene alone. I better take some photos!”

Yesung took his smartphone out and started to take the beastly terrible pouting photo shoots of Seohyun.

“Yahhh!!”

Seohyun tried to grab his phone. Their height difference was not very noticeable, so it did not take her a long time to reach her destination. While she was deleting the photos, someone on the bicycle bumped into her from the behind, which made her fell onto Yesung, her overlapping Yesung’s muscular hot body.

Both of their eyes sparkled in excite. They shared the same looks as Yesung’s head got closer to Seohyun’s, but it was until before Seohyun rolled herself down onto Yesung’s right arm with her head placed right on the spot.  

While Yesung was paying full concentration on her without any lack, Seohyun seemed not to be very interested whenever they reached the plot where Yesung was having decisions to take advantages to lay his lips on hers’. Yesung was disappointed on this, but he was somehow happy for what happened the previous moment.


Hankyung was going out on a walk in the same park with his little buddie doggie when he saw Yesung and Seohyun together. He smiled in happiness as they saw them together. He was also finding an advantage to go on a hangout with Seohyun. Well, he thought that Yesung was going to help him as his dongsaeng loved him more than anyone else.

But all those thoughts disappeared once he saw Seohyun on Yesung. His heart felt like it broke into pieces. His favorite dongsaeng was with his favorite girl. Everything was out of control. He lost himself. He was failed in his own thoughts. The rope attached to Hag with his hand was loosened even when he didn’t recognize it. The barks had gotten louder and Hag ran into Yesung’s direction. But it was Seohyun who Hag was heading to. He her on her cheeks, which made her laughed out loud in warmth. Hag dragged her to Hankyung, who had loosened himself and placed himself on the fresh green grass between the bamboo trees.

“Hankyung oppa! What are you doing here?”

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There was no reply.

“Hankyung oppa!! What’s going on??!!”

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“Eh?? I think I heard a sweet voice.” Hankyung thought.

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“OPPA!!”

His eyes widened. What was going on? Seohyun was in front of his eyes, smiling brightly towards him. He couldn’t draw himself into any patience.

“Seohyun-ahh!”

Without knowing, he hugged her tightly. Seohyun pushed him and tried to escape from his strong arms, but she couldn’t. She had to stay as how things were going on. After a few minutes when Hankyung recognized what he was doing himself, he released her.

“Miranghae, Seohyun-ah.”

Seohyun rolled her eyes, playing innocent, even though she knew the situation. But what thing difficult was he didn’t know the sad truth that she was a super human created for the Girls’ Generation project by the secret organization SM.

“Gwinchana oppa. But what actually happened??”


Yesung thought about how Hankyung warmly hugged Seohyun earlier in the morning in the park in the afternoon when they arrived their place. The sight couldn’t disappear from his eyes. He tried to wash away all the dreadful thoughts which would make their bestfriends a.k.a best brothers’ relationship. He wanted to maintain the relationship. But he also wanted Seohyun. Seohyun was the first girl he fell for ever since he was created. But, Hankyung also loved her, didn’t he? But, Yesung also loved her.

“He’s not the only one who knows about love, is he? He’s not the only one with heart, is he?”

“No.. He’s my best hyung ever.. I better give up.”

“No. I shouldn’t. Me too, I have a life. Not only him!”

“But….., I shouldn’t go against hyung…”

“I must! I have to! I have a life too!”

“Uhh.. No offense. I’ll just release the ties…”


The jealousy and hatred among the brothers themselves for the competition for the girl were starting to get on fierce fire as hot as Mars. The acts among themselves were the first steps in making themselves getting far apart from each other. The relationship was angst. They weren’t understanding for each other. It was not only among Yesung and Hankyung. It was all also occurring among the relationship of the Trigonometric Loves.

The couples. Destined Couples. But, how will the fate play a trick on them? What to be happened was already decided, but the final answer was not available to them at that time. They had to search for the missing jagged pieces of the puzzle of their life. But, what will be the final result after all each single pieces are inserted? Will it be a happily ever after? Nobody knows. Except for fate.


A/N: Hey~ I'm back after a week. I'm so sorry. I was into dramas and I had to learn for the upcoming tutorials and exams. I hope you guys enjoy this little chapter about the Trigonometric Loves among Yesung, Seohyun and Hankyung. There are Trigonometric Loves II and Trigonometric Loves III for the following chapters. Well, I hope you guys enjoy them and please subscribe and upvote! Thanks~ ^^

 

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pinboo
#1
Hello, here's your goody bag for joining my TMaF semi-contest!

Plot: Alright, first of all, I think your fic is one of the longest one –in terms of chapters, at least so far that I've been judging and I applaud you for that determination –although, maybe, unfortunately, I regret that you don't finish it.

Firstly, I have to say that the actual story is kinda different from what I expected based on my reading of your foreword/story description. I was expecting it to be a gangfight/spy type of a story, but the romance/drama fills nearly 80% of the plot. Which is not a bad thing, but in your fic, I do think a less romance approach would be more suitable.

The flow is also one of the aspects of the story that I feel could have been improved. There are 10 chapters already (I'm not counting the 11th chapter because it's just author notes), and it should have been sufficient to move the plot to a more intriguing level. The first 4 chapters, in my opinion, could have been summarized in one or two chapters. The first 4 chapters only discuss about the background of the story, and you drag it too long just to talk about the reason why Eunsoo wishes to establish the GG project. Then the remaining chapters talk about the loveline development –which, in contrary to the 4 earlier chapters – become both too long and too fast at the same time. It's too fast to develop their romantic feelings to each other (the characters fell in love way too fast), and at the same time, it's too fast, considering that nothing really meaningful happen –and I personally do not consider them falling for each other as a strong development.

The possibilities and potency of the story actually exists. If you add more actions or mystery or other elements that could make the story more intriguing, I think it would be better. I also get the feeling as if you do not exactly know the direction of the story, so you should take your time to compose and control the plot before you execute/implement it.
pinboo
#2
Characters: I particularly really understand how hard it is to maintain a story with more than 15 characters. And while I clearly do enjoy the numerous SuperGeneration interaction here and there, there is undoubtedly a bigger burden to manage the characters. Firstly, there is no real distinctive trait of one character from another. Jessica being the cold girl is one trait, but it's not dug deep enough, and it is still hard to set one apart from the other. This relates further on the character interactions –which I find to be kind of repetitive and there is no real dynamic on the relationship between one character and the other or one pairing and another.

I think that the big amount of characters also make you lose control/focus of the story. Of course, I'm not saying that you may not use a lot of characters. You undoubtedly may, but you also have to have a strong rein over the characters. On one part we're focusing on Heesica, then we're moving to Yoonhae, then to Taeteuk, then to HanSeoSung. Again, this is actually fine, but the transition is too abrupt and there's no real different premises in each pairing. Sure, they met in different situation, but it's still not sufficient to make the readers actually can linger or feel the relation to a character or a pairing.
pinboo
#3
Style: There are things that I think you can improve: first, do not focus too much on unnecessary description. Description is fine –it livens a story. But readers do not need to know what kind of perfume Eunsoo uses or the car that Heechul drove unless they substantially correlate with the plot. Secondly, do not combine two or more characters' dialogue in one paragraph. Thirdly, minimize the use of Korean. I think the readers can tolerate the general sayings such as "Unnie" or "Oppa", because these are the words that do not have the translation in English that would give the exact same implication. But there are parts where your dialogue are entirely in Korean, and it would only trouble the readers –and you do not want to trouble your readers. You may tease or confuse readers, but you do not want the readers to get so troubled reading your story that eventually they may stop reading it. I also think you could have used more narrative text, but this is not major. I think the dialogue's amount is still in the appropriate level at first; but in the later part of the stories, the story basically is littered with filler dialogues.
pinboo
#4
Suggestion:
• Pick a character and focus on him/her –at least until you are able to maintain the stability of the plot. Once your plot is stabile, you may eventually try to shift the focus to other characters. To be honest, until this point, I do not exactly know who your main character is.
• If you really want to use a lot of characters, introduce them slowly. Get the readers to be accustomed with the character first, before you introduce the others. Otherwise, the additional characters would only serve as filler sidekicks.
• Add more action, suspense, thrill –something to actually make your story more dynamic.


Favorite Parts:
• The foreword is actually kind of interesting –it promises something. It's a bit too dragging and you may wish to add something else to differ your fic from the other though, because it is not the only theme in AFF.
• You seemed to have taken a bit of scientific research for the first part of the story. I do not know and do not have the leisure to check on the truth behind it, but I obviously commend you for the willingness to research.
• I do like the title. But there should be more relation between the title and the story though
• Your narration reads better than the dialogue. Maybe you can focus on the narration.
catherine123 #5
Chapter 11: Lazy girl. I thot a chapter of story was updated. -.- hont
baechimi
#6
This is Webtoon Graphics. Your request was done.
roodlesnamen
#7
Chapter 10: Such random couples, lol. XD
catherine123 #8
Chapter 10: Dramas coming soon, eh? Btw, Trigonometic loves?lol i jst did the trigo sums and i read this now. xD
pompompoop #9
Chapter 10: aeyyy..i guess theres gonna be drama?? :((
roodlesnamen
#10
Chapter 9: Love triangles? Yesss, more drama. <3