Red Snow
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Title (5/5)
Fitting, unique, and provides a nice graphical imagery.
Foreward/Description (10/10)
Short and to the point, capturing your readers attention without giving the highlight away.
Appearance (5/5)
The poster is beautiful. Full points here.
Plot (12/15)
The general storyline and idea are well-thought of.
The pace was also good as it slowly built towards the finale.
I really admire the intrinsic idea and this is essentially what could have been a beautiful story save the inadequacy in language level.
Originality (15/15)
I'll give you full points here for an amazing and touching content.
Grammer & Spelling (10/20)
I'm sorry but this is indeed your weakest point. Short abrupt sentences, grammatical errors, punctuation errors and generally bad phrasing really pulled the value of your story down a lot.
Also why the extremely small font and a fully italicized story? It does not make the reading any less uncomfortable.
Flow (9/10)
As mentioned above, the gifting and suspense is enough to keep your readers up to the end in a smooth transition.
Characterization (7/10)
The story would have been more moving if their strong love could have been more focused upon. Sunggyu did not seem very upset that Hyorin had broken up with him which is a major minus point.
Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
Beautiful story but I had to base on my own command of the English language to decipher the hidden meanings.
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
81/100!
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